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hi thanks 4 da lovely update! well written! Maan n Geet meet at the dargah! Geet says krish! Maan annoyed! Maan is rude 2 her! update soon
Part - 46
Maan calls Sam immediately...
Maan: Sam, tum kya samjke ye sab kar rahi ho?
Sam is confused...
Sam: MK, what happened?
Maan: don't act innocent, I know it's all your plan to get me into trouble
Sam: what? I really don't know what's wrong with you MK
Maan: achcha, you really don't know what's wrong with me?
Sam: what?
Maan: Geet, aur kya?
Sam: ohhh you are still thinking about last night
Maan: last night? What abt tonight? What do you want me to do Sam? Just keep running after that girl always? What abt my life Sam? What abt our life?
Sam: tonight? What are you talking abt MK? Geet is at KM?
Sam is surprised...she thinks Geet went to KM on her own to meet MK again...
Maan: Sam, I know you and dadi made this plan and send us to the dargah, I knew it Sam, I knew that something's wrong when all of the sudden Dadi asked me to go to the dargah, pls Sam, just stop this nonsense
Maan thinks that it's part of Sam's drama...
Sam: but MK, Geet is at the Dargah? Thank God you met her
Sam now understands that Geet went to the dargah alone...she is happy that MK saw her and she is with him now...
Maan: Sam, why don't you just keep her away from me and let me live in peace
Sam: MK, would you pls drop her home? I'm little busy, I'll be late
Maan: what? Sam, I'm not running a shuttle service, and I'm already on my way
Sam is afraid Geet must be stranded there alone...
Sam: MK, where's Geet?
Maan: I don't know
Sam: what? MK, this is not fair, you left her alone there?
Maan: Sam, she came on her own and she'll go back on her own, you don't worry, she's not a child anymore
Yes, from the message he got today from her eyes Maan knows that she is not a child and her dreams are not childish, they are bigger and more dangerous, haina?
Sam: for god's sake MK, just go back and get her
Maan: are you kiddng? I'm almost here, at KM
Sam: MK, Don't you realize that Geet is in trouble, she doesn't know anything
Maan: ohh come on Sam, she's fooling us, she knows better
Sam: MK, I know Geet, she's not capable of taking care of herself, she will land herself in trouble
Maan: you don't worry Sam, the only person in trouble now is MSK
Sam: it's no use talking to you
Sam cuts the call and tries to call Geet...
Her mobile is switched off...
Sam senses something wrong...
She calls home and Geet has not come back...
She calls Dadi and Geet is not at KM too...
Where is she? Sam goes to the Dargah and finds Geet missing...
Where did Geet go?
Did anything upset her? Did MK scold her or something?
Sam gets angry with Maan for being so rude and careless...
She thinks it's all his mistake...
She calls Armaan and asks him to help this time instead of Maan...
Sam: Armaan, where are U?
Armaan finds Sam worried...
Armaan: Sam. What's the matter? Why are you so nervous?
Sam: it's Geet
Armaan: what happened? Is she alright?
Sam: I don't know
Armaan: Sam, what's wrong? Where are U? where is Geet?
Sam: I'm here at the dargah, and Geet
Sam almost breaks down in fear of losing Geet...
Armaan: Sam, Sam, are you there? Don't worry Sam, I'm coming
Sam: Armaan, Geet is missing
Armaan: she'll be fine, we'll find her Sam, I'm on my way
Armaan comes and they serach for clues...
Some of the vendors say they say a girl getting into a car and some guy took her...
She was taking a lift...
But Geet doesn't take lifts...that too in Mumbai which she is not familiar with...
Sam knows that Geet is in danger...
Armaan says that maybe she took a taxi and went to some friend's place
Sam remembers Pinky and she calls her...
Pinky says that she had told Geet that they can go to the dargah tomorrow and then she didn't hear from Geet ...
Sam asks the ppl around did Geet take a taxi...
They didn't notice it...
Armaan says that they should call the police...
They rush to the nearby station and file a complaint...
Sam calls her Dad and asks him to help her...
He uses his influence and puts a team in search of Geet...
Dadi calls Sam and inquires abt Geet as Sam has been asking abt Geet earlier...
Sam tells Dadi that Geet is missing...
Dadi is also worried abt Geet abd she tells Maan...
Dadi asks Maan to talk to Sam and console her and he should also help her...
Maan gets angry that this girl always keeps troubling Sam...
Maan calls Sam...
Maan: Sam, what's happening?
Sam: nothing
Maan: Sam, I told you that it's not wise to keep this stupid girl with you, now see what happened
Sam: sorry MK, I don't want to bother you this time
Sam cuts the call...
Maan is pissed off b'coz Sam thinks that Maan is responsible for all this...
In a way Maan is also responsibe, he shouldn't have left Geet alone knowing about her condition...
May be she fell asleep in a room like last time...
Maan calls Sam back...
Sam: MK, pls, I don't need ur advice
Maan: Sam, don't worry too much abt Geet, she'll be here only and she doesn't have many places to go, she'll either be at Sanjeevani or at home
Sam: MK, Geet gayab ho gayi hai
Maan: Sam, I know, but where will she go?
Sam: that's what I don't know
Maan: I know Sam
Sam: what?
Maan: Sam, did you look for Geet at ur home, Sanjeevani
Sam: MK, she's not at home, and what will she do at Sanjeevani
Maan: you know what happened last time, just go and look for her at Sanjeevani, who knows? She might be sleeping somewhere
Sam thinks it's better to go and look in Sanjeevani as Maan says...
Armaan and Sam go and search Geet at Sanjeevan while Maan looks for her at KM and at Sam's place...
But they don't find Geet anywhere there...
Now Maan is also worried...
Sam tells Maan that she is going to the police station with Armaan...
Maan also goes there...the police want to introgate him as he is the last person to have seen Geet...
Sam tells them that some ppl saw her taking a lift...maybe a taxi...
Maan remembers seeing her getting into a car from behind...
Yes, he remembers it was not a taxi, it was a private vehicle...
Maan thought that Geet might have come with Pinky...maybe Sam arranged it...
But now Maan is also convinced that Geet is in real danger...
His heart sinks and now he is also scared...
Sam says that Maan has been so irresponsible that he didn't even bother to tell her about that when he called Sam and told abt Geet...
Maan was then convinced that it was all Sam's plan...
Or Maan was only trying to escape then, haina?
He was actually running away from reality, from Geet's love? No from his own feelings... haina?
Part - 47
Police ask them to come next day and they'll find abt the car in the meantime...
They track the car and it's been missing since evening and it's abandoned at some sub-urb ...
Now police also think that it's some kidnap...maybe for money...
But they didn't receive any call asking for ransome...
And knowing Geet's back ground she is already in the custody of Sam and who'll pay for her?
It's absurd and maybe it's some previous rivalry...
But Geet had no rivals, haina? maybe it's MSK, her only rival as of now...
Maan asks where they abandoned the car and getting the inputs he thinks that Geet must be in some place far away from that location...as he thinks of all the places he is struck with one spot, he knows that place well and he knows that Geet could only be there...
Maan knows what could be wrong and who's behind this kidnap...
Yes, it's some old rivalry...Maan remembers chota bhai...
The last time Geet went missing he had a fight with chota bhai, that goon, and that was b'coz of that stupid girl only...
From the time Maan met that pagal ladhki his life has been changed upside down, his life was always pre-planned and now nothing goes per plan, specially nothing goes as per MSK's wish...even love for that matter is going against his wish...
And the only reason Maan could find for all his troubles is Geet, the one and only Geet Handa...chalthi phirthi disaster...haina?
Maan immediately rushes to chota bhai's den...
Chota bhai is waiting for Maan only...
Maan: chota bhaiii
The lion roars missing his lioness...
Chota bhai: Khurana sab, aayiye, aayiye
Maan: ye tumne teek nahi kiya
Chota bhai: mein toh sirf apni mehmaan ka swagat kar raha hoon Khurana sab, aur aap toh hummare khaas mehmaan hai, bin bhulaye kabhi bhi aap yahan aa sakthe, haina?
He reminds of the last time Maan was here...
Maan: lekhin iss bar mein toh apne marzi se yahan nahi aaya hoon
C bahi: lekhin mujhe patha tha ki aap yaha zaroor aayenge
Maan: bathao jaldhi, kahan hai Geet?
C bhai laughs...
C bhai: Geet, hmm achcha naam hai,aur item bhi achchi hai
C bhai shows his dirty interest in his eyes...
Maan reads his intensions and his blood boils inside, the volcano is activated...
Maan wants to punch him on his face but he controls himself for he has to get to Geet first...
C bahi: tum issiko doondhthe doondhthe aaye the na uss din?
Maan stares him as if he would burn him to ahshes...
C bhai: itna pyaar karthe ho usse?
Maan: tummm kahan hai Geet?
Maan folds his fist in anger...
C bhai: itne bhi kya jaldhi hai? abhi toh bhai ne usski swagat teek se bhi nahi ki
He laughs cunningly...
Maan: agar tummari nazar bhi usske taraf gayi toh samjho tummara jaan tumhara nahi hai
Maan emits fire in his words and warns bhai...
How dare he thinks bad of Geet? haina?
C bhai: tum toh dekhoge ki mein kya kya kartha hoon, issiliye toh tum yahan aaye hona?
C bhai doesn't care abt MSK's warnings...he is hurt and he wants revenge...
Maan: aaj toh tumme patha chalega ki MSK kaun hai
C bhai: Khurana sab hum sab jaanthe hai, aap ko bhi aur uss pagal ko bhi
How dare he called Geet pagal...
And Maan is all the more angry that he is taking advantage of Geet's illness...
Maan realizes that how foolish it was for him to leave alone someone who's mental ability is nothing more than a 10 yr old ...
Maan knows that he has made a big mistake and it is up to him to set things right...
He hates when ppl try to use weaker ppl for their benefits...
If he had any problem with Maan he had to come to him, why Geet?
Even the gunda knows where to attack? So Geet has become his weakness without his knowledge...that's what he was fearing of and his fears already have come true...
Here he is bound by his weakness, his hands tied by emotions, stupid feelings which always make u weak, if not for this stupid girl MSK would have crushed this mean animal within a minute and taught him his lessons...but now he has to make sure Geet is safe first...
That's why MSK hates any kind of bonding...or love and affection, it sucks, haina?
Instead of making you strong these feelings make U weak...
Maan: meinne poocha Geet kahan hai?
Maan couldn't control himself and he bursts...his eyes are burning red and he could barely control his nerves...but the thought of Geet only stops him...
Bhai gets an urgent msg and he is upset...
He looks at his men and they all get ready...
Maan: himmat hai toh seedhe seedhe mera samne karo
Maan gets ready for an one to one tiff...but bhai is not yet ready for that...
Cbhai: lekhin abhi bhai ko koi aur zaroori kaam hai
Bhai's boss is coming and he had to go...
Bhai signals his men to take care of Maan and he leaves...
Maan's pressure keeps raising...and his anger too...
Maan: Geeet Geeet
Maan starts to look for her...
He is then surrounded by a gang of goons...
Maan gets ready to attack but one of them attacks him from behind and Maan falls unconscious...
The moment he regains his conscious and opens his eyes he finds Geet also tied along with him...
Geet is happy to see him awake...
Geet: Khrish, aap teek toh haina?
She is so worried abt him that she has been crying all night and praying to her babaji to help Khrish...
Geet blames herself for what happened to Khrish...
Geet keeps crying...: ye sab toh meri hi galthi hai, haina Khrish?
She places her hand on his wounded forehead...
Just then Maan realizes that he is being hit hard and so he had fainted...
Geet: bahut dukhtha hai?
Maan keeps staring her worried eyes...
She is not bothered abt herself, she is only worried abt her Khrish...
Maan places his hand on her's...
Geet shivers a bit as his touch sparks a current in her system...
Maan then finds out that she had dressed his wound with her dupatta...
And with the touch of her hand he is relieved of all the pain and he feels so warm and cared...
They are lost in each other for a while...
Then Maan comes back to his senses...
Maan: Geet, Geet
Geet also comes back to reality...
Geet: mujhe maaf kardho Khrish, mein bahut bhuri hoon
Maan: ssshhh
Maan keeps his fingers on her lips and asks her to be quiet...
Maan: chup bilkul chup
Her eyes meet and from then the only conversation is between their eyes...
Geet pleads guilty and feels sorry for what happened...
Maan assures her that everything will be fine and he is here to sav her ...
Geet knows that she is always safe when she is with her Khrish but she is worried that she has put Khrish in trouble unnecessarily...
She was so happy when she met Khrish at the dargah and in her utter bliss that her babaji had chosen her life and it's only with her Khrish, she blindly followed him when he left from there...
As soon as he vanished in the crowd she keps looking at his direction fir a while when some one stopped a car and opened a door for her...
Then she saw Khrish's car passing by and she just got into that car thinking that she is abt to follow Khrish...
Maan saw her getting in from the rear mirror and he left on his way...
Just when her car took the other direction Geet realized that something is wrong and before she could question she was drugged and she fainted...
When she woke up she found herself locked up in a room with her legs and hands tied...
She was scared but she was hopefull that her Khrish wil come to rescue her...
But after a while someone was dumped into the room along with her...
And she found that it is her khrish...
Now she wanted to do something as her Khrish was bleeding...
She forced her hands free with all her strength and she immediately tied her dupatta around his wound...
The beeding stopped and she took utmost care that he is comfortable offering her lad for him...
When Maan woke up he was actually lying on her lap and she was just staring him with tears running down her beautiful hazelnut eyes...
Seeing them deeply worried Maan himself felt sorry for her this time...
Maybe this time it's not Geet's fault but only Maan's...
She is here b'coz of him and not her carelessness or stupidity...maybe it's Maan's irresponsibility just as Sam said...
It's b'coz of Maan's rivalry with c.bhai that Geet has been kidnapped...
And MSK has to do something to get her out...
Maan gets off her lap immediately as if he had committed some crime...
He then stares Geet for making the MSK look like a kid, he is a man, not an ordinary man but the MSK...
Geet: Khrish, aap ko kya hua? Aur aap ko chot kaise lagi?
Maan: sshhh mein Khrish nahi hoon samjhi tum?
Maan whispers not to alert the gundas...
Geet: aap Khrish nahi ho toh aap yahan kyun aaye ho? aap mujhe doondhthe doondhthe aaye haina? mujhe patha hai ki mera Khrish mujhe bachane zaroor aayenge
She is so confident that her Khrish is here to save her only...
But Maan doesn't have an answer to why he is here fisrt of all?
It's not for him to save Geet,he might have told the police like Armaan did and left it to them to find Geet, but no, he is here for her...why?
Maybe he felt guilty that he is some how responsible for her kidnap...or he must be here b'coz he cares for her...like Geet believes...haina?
take a look...
Lakshmi and Priya's Teri Deewani thread...
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4453802
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