KaYa OS: Kabir's Family

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Posted: 10 years ago
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So guys ...here I am with a brand new peice...really hope u like it...

"How can u be irresponsible Ananya? Tumne Vo file misplace kardi!!! Vo bohot important file thi...Bachpana chodo ab and grow up...dhyaan rakha karo and be alert Aur kaam ke maamle mein no laparvahi...samjhi?"



Ananya nodded with teary eyes...she wiped her tears and proceeded to the parking lot...still sobbing...



Two Armstrong arms enveloped her from behind and a chin rested on her shoulder...



Ananya shrugged him off...she glared at him and sat in car and banged the door shut...



Kabir had by now very well understood that she was NOT in a good mood...


He too sat in without a word and started driving...
He stole glances at her but she didn't look at him...


He bought out his hand and held hers...his thumb softly caressing her knuckles...


He gave her a soft look but she only glared and snatched her hand from his grip...


K: I'm sorry baby! Par tum jaanti ho na that I can't tolerate negligence in work...tumhe thoda dhyaan Dena chahiye...


A: ha ha...galat toh main hi hu...shaadi se pehle toh bade vaade kiye the...tumhari aakho mein ek aasu nahi aane dunga...blah blah blah! Shaadi ke baad kya hua?


K: Sorry na! Galati hogayi baba!


A: nahi...aap decide kijiye ki aaj aap gharke bahar soyenge ya room ke bahar?


K: arrey! Ghar mera hai Aur main hi bahar sou?



Now Ananya was so angry that her face was practically red with anger...
As soon as he stopped the car she stormed out...


K: Anan...


Before he could say a word she shut the door on his face...


K: ( banging the door) ye kya natal hai Ananya? Darwaaza kholo...Ananya yaar! Please!



Even after trying for a long time he didn't succeed...so he thought of a new way...after all he was kabir sharma...used to getting his way...



Ananya!!!!!
He Had climbed through the window of the bungalow...
A: main aapse baat nahi karungi sir!


Kabir had by then entered...he simply picked her up in his arms without a word...


A: ( wriggling) chodiye mujhe sir! Utariye mujhe neeche!


But kabir simply smirked and carried her till the bed and lay her down and covered her delicate frame with his tonned body...now shirtless...


K: hmmm...toh kya keh rahi thi aap? Mrs Sharma?

A: ( blushing) uh...m..m..main Vo...sir...

K: kabir!

A: si...sir...

K( kissing her eyes) sir nahi kabir...

A: k..ka..kabir...

K: hmmm...toh aap kuch ke rahi thi...ki main room ke bahar...


A: aap...aap...kya kar rahe hai?


K: kya? Main toh bas...

Just then...

Kabir! Ananya! Beta tum andar hona?

A: m..m...m..ma ha..ha hum andar hai...kabir let me go...


K: ( kissing her throat) ahaan!

A: please kabir...jaane dijiye na...


Kabir smiled and released her from his grip...


Ananya opened the door...Armaan gave her a teasing look getting a hint about what had transpired between his didi and jeeju...


An: beta...main khaana layi thi...socha saber saath khaayenge...kabir kaha hai?


K: main yaha hu ma...


Anita hugged him and kissed his forehead...
An: kaisa hai mera bachcha?


After she had come to know about kabir's actual painful past she had took him as her own son and grown quite protective about him...


K: main theek hu ma...

An: mera raja beta! Chalo khaana khaana hai Aur aaj toh mere paas mere kabir ke liye ek surprise hai!


K: ( happy) mere liye?
Kabir was so happy! He Had always wanted this...
An: ha chalo...


After dinner...
An: ye mere sabse achche bete ke liye... saying this Anita bought out a box and gave it to him...it was dark chocolate cake!


K: mera favorite! Ma...aapko yaad tha...

An: Aur kya...ma ko sab pata hota hai...

K: thank u so much ma...ye world ka best cake hai Aur ye world ki best family...


Kabir said hugging all three of them!



The end😳
Edited by akyabiggestfan - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its really nice..well done dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plz give me some tym to find appropriate words to describe this OS Riya Di 😆
Aap hamesha aise hi likhte rehna...
Can u plz write the next OS fr me...plz plz plz plz...
I want so light hearted OS without twist n turnsin the end...wid romance...
Bohot bohot bohot aacha tha Riya Di
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very beautiful.
kabir and his lovely family.
superb and sweet os.
loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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How sweet 😊..kabir n his family.

Edited by Aalina. - 10 years ago

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