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rachanarn

@rachanarn

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hii guys
yupiiee ...I got it ...finally I can express manan story in my way

I am very big fan on manan like u guys are .. .so a story of manan from my side
actually im a South indian my hindi is not that gud .. but still I tried my level best

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mallee

@mallee

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Posted: 10 years ago

all the best pls cont soon

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Glara

@Glara

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

wow me too south indian
plz try to update in english itself
plzzz

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rachanarn

@rachanarn

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

Oki guys ...here u go

Character sketch

1. Nandini - A 19 yr girl . She has a joint family n basically she is frm south India n her mother tongue is kannada.Her father is Arun murty n mother latha murty. She loves Hindi mviis n songs.Her father is a most famous person in her home town n her family is very traditional but she enjoys some freedom as she is the first daughter of her family .She wanted to becum n engineer n that to computer engineer ...for her family comes first n she adores n loves her father a Lott means Lott

2.MANIK MALHOTRA - A 19 yr handsome n hot hunk.

He is da son of Aditya malhotra and Sunaina malhotra .He is the lone heir fr malhotra industries.He lives in mumbai but his parents n his sis Aisha(cousin ...her parents passed away ven she was small frm tht tym she lives in malhotra mansion as maniks parents consider as their own daughter ). Music plays an imp role in his lyf. He has 4 friends ...I mean bestest frndz ...they r a band called fab5. All girls go crazy fr him but he don't giv a damn ...He is very arrogant ...some incident took place in his life n evn his parents r unware of it .

3.CABIR -A drummer in da band fab5 n best friend of manik. He is handsome ,cool n dramatic . He is a very big nautanki. He makes his frndz laugh ven dey r going through tough tym . He lives vit his mom.

4.DRUV- A shy lovable boy who has a crush on alia but never told her. Always tries to protect alia vch she loves the most ...n considers manik as his brother.

5.ALIA- A hot sexy girl of da grup. All boys go crazy on her but she likes druv a lot but never confessed it ...bcuz she wanted him to confront her n express .She lives vit her brother HARSHAD .

6.MUKTI -A carefree attitude girl always hang out in parties n stays away frm her family as her parents hav regular fights.She is madly in love vit HARSHAD.FAB5 is everything to her .

7.NAVYA NAVELI-A cute n naughty kind of girl who makes everyone laugh n kind of different character.She is from Pune n meets nandini n fab5 in a big n great academy SPACE .

HEY GUYS ...HERE IS DA CHARACTERS LIST ...N ABOUT SPACE I VILL DESCRIBE IN NEXT CHAPTER ...HOPE U GUYS LIKED IT ...N PLZZ DO COMMENT N LIKE IT ...N SUGGESTIONS R MOST WELCOME ...IM UPDATING FRM MOBILE SO PLZZ IGNORE THE MISTAKES ...

TAKE CARE

LOVE

RACHANA

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Glara

@Glara

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

wow really nice start
and i like it becoz in ur story manik not in any kind of relationship
i.always hate iit
becoz for nandhini manim always her 1st love but manik not like tat
thanks a lot
continue soon
i guess in past manik might had gf & she ditched him
plz if u plot like that plz dont use soha name in most of d ff her name used & i hate her to d core
so pretty plz dont use her name
gud luck
continue soon
waiting for manan scene

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rachanarn

@rachanarn

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Glara
wow really nice start
and i like it becoz in ur story manik not in any kind of relationship
i.always hate iit
becoz for nandhini manim always her 1st love but manik not like tat
thanks a lot
continue soon
i guess in past manik might had gf & she ditched him
plz if u plot like that plz dont use soha name in most of d ff her name used & i hate her to d core
so pretty plz dont use her name
gud luck
continue soon
waiting for manan scene

thnqq soo much for liking my story ...n dont worry maniks past is no where linked to any kind of gf n all
itz a kind of different
yaa I vill continue soon ...take care

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priyasmiley

@priyasmiley

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

nice start

the way u expreesed the characters was super

continue soon

waiting for further

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

can't wait for this ff to start

interested to know manik's past incident

its a big relief to hear that nyonika is not manik's mother

continue soon...

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rachanarn

@rachanarn

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

Hey guys

INTRODUCTION

Nandini was pampered by her parents a lot.dey used to agree for all her demands n she was a brilliant student in da class. she secured gud percent in her 12th n got seat in SPACE ...a dream collage fr students vch is in DELHI.Space academy is a very big n luxurious college.Not only music but also engineering , arts n commerce wer also taught in space.It has a very big campus n has well built infrastructure.
Space was nandinis dream college.She always wanted to study there n now she got tht opportunity n she was on cloud 9 but her parents were sad n worried at da same tym as how dey vil b without their daughter n how she vil manage alone in dat new city .
Here manik n his frndz fab5 also got admission in space as it is a great musical college.
SPACE- Space has a huge building in which all the course classes will be held n adjacent to dat there is a hostel. And da hostel is also luxurious.
Except manik all members of fab5 will b staying in hostel.Nandini n navya will also stay in hostel . Actually in one room 4 members have to stay. And the rooms are very very big n had 4 vast beds n reading table. And also huge closets. Manik stayed in his farm house alone as his parents were in mumbai.

HERE IS THE INTRODUCTION GUYS ..HOPING U GUYS LIKED IT
GUYS PLZ DO LIKE N COMMENT
AND PLZZ DO TEL ME WHETHER I SHOULD CONTINUE OR NOT
TAKE CARE
LOVE
RACHANA

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rachanarn

@rachanarn

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#10

CHAPTER 1

Latha moorthy came to nandinis room n sat next to her on bed n saw nandini sleeping like a small cute kid n started caressing her hair vit tears in her eyes.

Nandini was vit her parents from the childhood n now for the first tym she is going ti hostel dat to for delhi. Coming out of trance she said

LATHA - Wake up nandu,wake up ! Beta aaj tumhe Delhi jaana hai. 11 noon tumhara flight hai beta. Aaj tho daiir se math utto. Nandu !!!!(in Kannada)

NANDU- haa maa.(with a sudden shock )

Ayyo deva !!mai kaise bhul sakthihu. Sry maa mai abhi shower lekar athihu n btw gud mrng mumma (in Kannada)

LATHA-chalo abb jao.mai tumhara liye Tiffin pack karthi hu (in Kannada)

NANDU-maa mai plane mai jaa rahi hu train me nahi.muje tiffin pack matt karna.waha sab miltha hai.tum jao mai thaiyar ho kar athihu (in Kannada)

BY THIS SHE WENT TO HAVE BATH AND HER MOM WENT OUT TO MAKE BREAKFAST.

IN MUMBAI

manik was also a lazy poke and he slept very late as he partied all ni8.suddenly he got a call from cabir.

Manik in sleepy mood

MANIK :hello !kaun hai (in sleepy mood)

CABIR :Abbe saale !maine tuje kal rath bholatha na jaldhi soja subha jaldhi uttna hai.Aaj SPACE jana hai and 12o'clock flight hai.

Manik gets up with a jerk n says

MANIK:haa sry yr ,chal mai raktha hu.I gotta freshn up n haa sab ko boldhe 11:30 sab airport mai milenge.

CABIR:haa boltha hu.tu jaldhi kar bye.

MANIK: haa bye.

IN KARNATAKA

ARUN: nandu tumhara kaiyal rakna.kisi cheez ki zaroorat ho tho baatha Dena .Oki!

NANDU:haa papa.app tension math lo.mai jaa kar sab ko bolkar athihu

Nandini left saying this

ACTUALLY DEY HAD TWO HOUSE BOTH WERE HUGE IN ONE HER PARENTS AND SHE LIVED AND IN ANOTHER ONE HER 2 UNCLES N HER GRANNY LIVED WHICH WAS ADJACENT TO HER HOUSE.

YUPPIEEE FIRST CHAPTER !!!...

GUYS PLZZ LIKE N COMMENT SO THAT I GET MOTIVATED TO CONTINUE

TAKE CARE

LOVE RACHANA

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