Lovely story..
Hehe..loved patil in this story... But beaty & the beast salesman patil will be my all time favorite... Lol...
Seriously thereis no wonder in rk wishing to take a dna test for patil... He really behaved as if he owned the god damn place & he ordered like a boss... Lol... But a nice person at heart... Lol... I m giving do much importance to patil than rishbala...
I m glad madhu quickly understood & accepted the marriage...
Oh god...that sultan as tge never to talk abt annulment...engagement & all... Like a coward he left madhu & rk had to save both madhu's & his family's izzat & now he easily came to claim her...
Loved the entire story but two dialogues more...
1. Rk saying that no one take is Queen away from him... A simple dialogue he said while playing chess but holds a promise...
2. I dont lie...so if i say i ll kill u... Then I WILL KILL u...
Nice Rk wala punch hun...
Oh god... I m commenting as if i m reading the story for the first time lol... But really every time i read ur stories i find something new to say or atleast i want appreciate again bcos i just cant take ur effort without leaving a word...
U r awesome...
Pls come back soon...