KaYa TS : Tere Ishq Mein *on current track*

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ola people! 😃


So yesterday night, in the end of the episode, tell me what you were thinking? Were you angry? Were you ACP Pradhuman when you saw that handkerchief 'kuch toh gadbad hai'? Honestly, I was like 'ispe ek story bnti hai'.


It's weekend again. 😭


And I really hate weekends, but I love them too, but because of different reasons. So here is a little continued form of the precap as well as episode. Hope you all like it! And if you really do, please drop in a comment!



Happy Reading 😉




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"Agar tum sach mei mujhe bhula chuke ho, Kabir, toh phir ye handkerchief tumhare paas kya kr rha hai?" I stepped back. Handkerchief? What signifance does it hold in Kabir and Shreya's life?

"Shreya, tum.. Mei tumhe bhula chuka hu, Shreya. Aur ab agar tumne mujhe.."

"Excuse me." I walk out of the room.

"Ananya!" I hear Kabir call after me, but I don't turn around. Why do I stand here? They are ex-man and wife, what have I done or what signifance am I of that I stand in the middle of that agrument?

"Kabir." I stop at my tracks and hide just outside the door of the room. "Tumhari problem kya hai? Mei iss situation ko, iss.. iss horrible situation ko, itne professionally handle kr rhi hu. I have never complained about you, Kabir. Yet you, tum meri burai kr rhe the? Woh bhi staff ke saamne? Jaane kya soch rhi hogi Ananya mere baare mei-"

"She doesn't know what you are, Shreya. Tum jo chaho, woh tum paake ki dum chodti ho. Meri innocence, mere pyaar ki toh tumne band baja di, par mei woh hi cheez Ananya ke saath nahi hone dunga. If I don't deserve her, I'll leave her, but not with a broken heart. Mei usse majboor kr dunga mujhe chodne ke liye, taaki usse bura na lage, aur ye toh bilkul bhi na lage that she didn't deserve ME." Oh, Kabir!

"Kabir, tum ek bahaut badi galti kr rhe ho."

"Mujhe meri galtiyan batane ki zaroorat aapko nahi hai, Miss Bhagat. Meri life mei log hai jo mujhe sambhal skte hai. Aur tumhari problem kya hai? Kyu laayi iss handkerchief ko discussion ke beech mei! Tumhe pta hai na Ananya already itni broken hai aur.."

"Tumne meri burayi kri, Ananya ke saamne, usse kuch nhi hota. And I bring a totally reasonable thing, toh usse Ananya.."

"Please, Shreya! Aaj se, na tum mere baare mei kuch bhi kisiko btaogi, na mei tumhare baare mei. Humara ek rishta tha, actually, wo toh tumhara rishta tha, mere saath toh kabhi tha hi nahi.."

"Mei tumhari baat kisise nahi krti."

"Oh, please, Shreya! Khalid ne mujhe sab bta dia tha, 'kabir waali coffee', 'kabir bada strong-headed hai', and a lot more."

"Look! Mei tumhari tareef kr rhi thi!" Should I go? Isme mei mera kya kaam hai? I turn to leave as I trip and let out a 'aah' and am about to fall on ground when a strong pair of arms catch me.

"Ananya!" I close my eyes and keep them closed until Kabir says my name again, "Ananya."

"Are you okay?" He asks and I open my eyes. I look at his shocked, worried face and completely melt. What makes him think he doesn't deserve me? This Greek God, was awarded to me for whatever reason. Sometimes, I think that I don't deserve him.

"Yes." He helps me stand up. But as I do, I feel a whoosh feeling in my head and fall on Kabir as he holds me uptight.

"Ananya. What happened?" He is worried again.

"I'm.. I need to.. I need to go home." Home, that's what'll be the best place for now. I want to be in the comfort of my bed to think of this situation.

"Sure." He puts an arm around my waist to keep me from falling again and wraps my arm around his neck. I look at his face, but he isn't looking at Shreya, or the floor, or forward, he's looking at ME. And he's worried about me. He looks at me to check if I'm all right or am I just kidding about it.

"I am all right, Kabir Sir. Mujhe bas ghar jaana hai." He nods and helps me out of the office. When we reach his car, he opens the passenger door for me and I step inside. He walks off to the other side and gets in. He puts the car in ignition and then races towards my house.




"I'm sorry."






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TO BE CONTINUED.. 😃





Since it is a TS, there will be just one more chapter. I will post it soon. And you might get a lot of OS this weekend because well... IT'S THE TIME OF WEEKEND! So I'm gonna see you later.


Cheers,
Tani.





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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update... 👏👏
Plss continue soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful. ...
Perfectionist you seem..
Everything was upto mark...
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woh Ananya sab sun leti hai ...
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Very beautifully written
Do update fast
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am so so so so x1000 sorry! I couldn't update, I was updating my other SS 'Tu Chahiye' and I was so busy with other assignment stuff. Hope you all forgive me because this chapter contains a lot of phewww scenes! And I'll make you cry in no time. I like emotional stories, and this is one of them. If you don't know me well yet, this will tell you what sadistic person I am. I like making people cry. Purely because I know some crazy geek like me, will also love crying.

So happy reading! 😉


Also, this has no significance whatsoever to the actual story. What I mean is, I wrote about Kabir's past in my own way. I am not in touch with the story's starting much, so if you find this out of picture... baccha samajh ke maaf kr dena!


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"I'm sorry." Kabir said. Yeah right, for what? "This is why Ananya. Mei isliye chahta tha tum meri puri history jaan lo. Look, mera ek past tha. Aur ab woh.."

"Aapki galti nahi hai, Kabir Sir. Woh Shreya.."

"Tum ab jaan skti ho. Mei tumhe ab bta skta hu, Ananya. Jab tumhe pta chal hi gya hai ki mera aur Shreya ka ek.. past tha.. Toh baaki ka hisaa bhi jaan lo."

"Par mujhe.."

"Please Ananya." I shut my eyes. I turn to not give him the hurt feeling of looking into my eyes and seeing me crying. Yes, Kabir had a past. So what? I am his present. And future, I hope. Do I hear this? Do I WANT to hear this? Do I have to?

"Whatever you think, whatever you feel will happen after you tell me, I just want you to know that I'm never gonna go anywhere. I know you're no sadist, and I am sure you had a great big reason for letting Shreya go."

"The college was ending and it was farewell time. I was scared as heck for what waited for me in the future. Where do I find a job? What do I do? Insecurities filled within me. There was a couple dance announced. There wasn't anyone else and I was about to leave when there she was.. Shreya Bhagat. I.. I fell in love." I look down, so.. so what? Kabir raises my head with his index finger and looks into my eyes, as if he can see right through my soul. As if he can read my mind.

"I am all right. Continue." He kisses my head and I lay my head on his shoulder. He continues driving into the night as he tells me the rest of it.

"We started hanging out. But.. But there was always something fishy about her. She used to disappear without notice. She used to reject my calls almost all the time. Then one day she went to my mother and said that we want to get married. I was hardly 25 then. And she was the same. Maa had a problem in the wife being of the same age. Dad had passed years before.." I felt him tighten. I look at him and he's on the verge of crying.

"I don't want to know! Mujhe nahi jaana! All I want is to be with you Kabir. Jo tumhara past that woh past that aur mujhe nahi jaana! I am okay!"





TBC.. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice 👏
update soon
Edited by Magar1992 - 10 years ago

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