arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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luvbug

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1081

i just started reading but ... but for some reason could not go past chap 2... im a mess right now... but will come bk when im ready to read this story...without him??? may be??

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1082

hi luvbug,

i hope you will be back... without him? is it even possible?

Edited by indi52 - 10 years ago

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luvbug

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1083

Originally posted by: indi52
hi luvbug,

i hope you will be back... without him? is it even possible?

Hey Great that made my Day 😃

I promise will b back soon...

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1084

^^^

thank you. glad you enjoyed.

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Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1085

Beautiful...❤️

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Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1086

7.
khushi break down.. something is arnav the target
Shyam is the reason for the accident...
Dr.VV have soft corner for anjali..

8.
45 days.. they bring him home...
he is been sleeping... now he open his eyes...

9.
finally the wait is over...he is awake... and he knows who did it

10.
Anjali journey with arnav
nice family reunion ... he is awake
past arnav still refuse to accept khushi

11.
Nice update .. past fight and present for her safety

12.
all the moments they meet... until now the fight the romance
and pain ASR back on action

13.
so he lavanya become good friends...
nice bike ride...

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1087

^^^

linsie,

good to see you reading without you and enjoying. was great to read your comments. thank you.

that edit is done by my friend omoraboti... she is very gifted.

Edited by indi52 - 10 years ago

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Anu567

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1088

Indi,

Just started reading this beautiful story...finished some seven chapters in fact...till the one where ASR wakes up after the two month coma. Not just Khushi, I kid you not, I myself felt like I had just been jerked into wakefulness. How did you do that? Amazing! The power of words and narrative, take a bow girl, this was a masterclass bit of story telling. I know, I know, to all of us, ASR and Khushi are so much more than a story...they are very close to our lives! But this was such a gorgeous chapter I just had to stop reading and send you a great big hug...what a story...Arnav Singh Raizada will never know what he did to all his fans...if ever they had wanted to continue IPKKND and ran out of ideas, as the production team happily said for quite some time, they could so easily have taken your story and adapted it. Without You is just so stunning in its premise...I have a weekend soon and am relieved I can now go and finish off this story...it would have continued to haunt me otherwise...love the cute and quirky Khushi, the radiant and totally dedicated to her brother Anjali, the firebrand matriarch, Naniji and all the other characters from our original...and oh, the amazing dr. Vijay Verma...thNk you for this story girl, and all the beautiful edits from our super awesome IPKKND...never was, never will be a greater show,...

Best,

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1089

^^^

hi anu,

have you any idea how wonderful the writer of a story would feel reading that comment of yours. thank you so so much. delighted you read till he woke up and you like the premise... i hope the story continues to thrill and stay true to the characters and emotions we know and love.

arnav singh raizada really hasn't a clue what he did in his eighteen odd months in a hindi serial. and i just miss him, so badly at times. you like dr verma? i'm so glad. have fun reading, see you.