(Completed)Arhi SS: Beyond The Skies, thread 2, new thread link pg 147 - Page 9

Teaser is interesting . Anjali is making an entry. Look forward to read the update.

Hahah Sayari more Like a tragic hint ..with Shyam anything is possible but don't worry BTS will be close to reality.

Hey Lakshmi ...🤗

Congratulations to u too for the success of BTS ...it's u guys whose done that. 😛

Yes Anjali is here ...chapter to be up in a couple of hours 😛

Hey are we getting an update today 😛

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This update was AWESOME! I loved each and every part of it. Right from the beginning to the end. But I so want Lavanya to tell everything to Lav and then he would connect all the dots which he is already doing, you see I love TROUBLE more than paradise 😛

Coming to the review of the chapter,

As I said before I wanted Lavanya to tell Lava and then see his reaction. Moreover, what she had seen at their home, Aman and Arnav fighting, I want her to tell this to her Dad :P One thing I liked here was Lavanya did not hold back to tell his brother everything in fact she is going to look out for her brother and I liked that very much. Amidst everything, after reading this update I feel so bad for Nandan, he loves his friends so much, everyone, Arnav, Khushi and even Aman, is betraying him. I know it is not Aman's story to tell but after today I just want Nandan to know somehow, what is going on between his best friend and his love. What I feel is that, Arnav and Khushi should have talked like two mature people and should have decided to tell Nandan everything. Easier said than done! Still it would have worked! Though I would like to point this out, that nothing is between ArHi right now, nothing substantial, but Nandan would feel betrayed!

So, when Arnav says he wants to clear the air, what exactly does it mean? Is he going to explain his behavior in the past or he is going to convince Khushi that they are meant to be together? I think he wants to justify his mistakes, am I correct?

Even Shyam loved Khushi, in this story only Aman is left 😛 But Aman is already booked for Lavanya and talking about Aman and Lavanya, I am waiting for their story to kick start😉 Okay now back to being serious, as much as you have explained about Shyam in this story, I feel like he is mature enough to understand how to react in these situations, plus he tried marrying Khushi and when she said no, he backed off. But you have not disclosed the complete past, so I would like to reserve my comments about Shyam for later. Somehow I feel he might have contributed to this hostile situation. But lets see, I might be wrong.

Anjali is sweet and adorable, definitely a motor mouth though, Her one statement in excitement has left everyone thinking, Lav, Nalini, Nandan. I hope they would be able to connect the dots. But I liked what Anjali and Khushi share, lovely bonding!

Okay so coming to the Ramayan part, I know only the basics of Ramayan, which they had taught us in school. So, I do not know much what were people's different opinions regarding Ram's accusations. Anjali is smart, but I have doubt, is she talking about that instance, when Arnav had thought that there is something between Khushi and Aman or something else happened? I am so waiting for the complete past to come up! Cannot wait N!

All in all, an awesome update!!

So first no am not starting with this chapter. With your story! This is one brilliant piece of work. Where had you kept it hidden all along? Why did you pm me so late? Am so mad at you for that. Absolutely not fair. This story was so carefully woven and knitted together in a fine theme of love, betray, suspense and too much of suspense, which I so badly love. I have loved all the chapters so far and in fact can't wait to read more.

So coming back to this chapter, it was an AWESOME one with a capital A! What can I even describe? I still like Lav, I had told you na. He is bold, confident, caring,proud and what else is left about him?

So lavanya told her bro and mom. Instead of still keeping thing under wraps or waiting till the engagement gets over, she was wise enough. But yeah I wanted her to tell this directly to Lav! That would have gritted things even more and I would have loved to see how the whole mess clears and eventually peace ensures! 😉

Shyam loved Khushi? But as you had mentioned he is and was just her friend! I like his different character here though. But if Arnav regrets what he had done, then were things too ugly back then?

Anjali is definitely a motor mouth. But she has a different shade in your story. She has a spark. And what a remark! I liked those lines you had highlighted. They were absolute classic! Oh and she is clever too? So if she had put this as a question, then does that mean Arnav doubted Khushi? But with whom? Was that the reason behind their present?

By the way, what exactly does Arnav wish to clear with aman and Khushi? That too left me wondering. The Ramayana part was great and very effectively used and put across. I did know about maya sita, but never knew this reason. I got to know something valuable too. And yeah I loved the whole Ramayana part since I am a fan of mythologies. Thanks for incorporating that too.

You know with This I had thought your chapter was done. Only then it struck me "where was Lav?" I thought you had left him out. But then I thought someone who has so carefully woven this one, wouldn't have left a loophole. So I went back and tada I found out. What is he planning to do and how does he intend to take things in his hands?

And yeah I feel so sorry for Nandan. He is almost surrounded by betrayals. Uska kya hoga? I want to know. I am glad Lavanya will be there for him always.

Waiting so eagerly, N! Lots of love ❤️

My guess about the third person was right...

Anjali and her big mouth... That was the reason I called her "brat"... I have two brothers, one is just 1 1/2 older than me... We were very close... Specially becuase he wanted woo my friendss.. And he even had a sort of relationship with one of my close friends... But, I never pose my nose it to his person life.. But this Anjali... She just can't...

I guess, in a way its good that she spilled it...

Oh, you have created such an undersatinding Shyam... I think he is going to be my favorite in this story...

Lav? ... What is he going to do... He realized that someone has to take stand...

Will Nilani buy Shyam's excuse? I don't think..

Dying to findout Lav's action...