A Blast From The Past . OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: SanaHolic

vry vry nice..
beautifully penned down...
emotional too
keep on writing😉

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Very Lovely...😳👏

for a Moment, I feel the Glum and Living Skeleton on My Self...😭😭

that Lorry, Knife even Head off...😲

so many Shocks and Gruesome Treatments I feel in My Body...

that Sadness, Pain and Hurt...😔

but then I ve got I read Your OS...😳👏

what a Lovely Aura U Created with Your Words...⭐️⭐️

Truly Sparkling...⭐️⭐️

Thank You so very much...😳😳

Originally posted by: Angel_Arya

Awesome...

beautifully written

do write more

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: IArmageddonI

Wow... I am very very impressed with this little piece of writing.

I must say day by day you're writing skills are increasing :)

However I am intrigued to know as to why some of ur stories deal with a sudden adhoora pyaar... *thinking*

Jokes apart, good going girl!

Originally posted by: aditya_anjaana

good things r always liked by be😃

And mention not nanad jee😆

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

nice 👍🏼

Originally posted by: IArmageddonI

Yeah, no matter how busy I am, I do feel it's a must to leave at least a line for u - especially for ur os's.

For they are truly phenomenal, actually you should start blogging.

And I have understood what you lightly underlined but sweetheart let me tell you one thing...

These are a few lines for you,

Mohabbat samundar ki tarha hoti hai,

Jo jiska hota hai woh har dafa sirf usko hi milta hai,

Chahe khuda hi kyu na pohoch jaye unko uski manzil se judaa karne ke liye,

Aur jo jiska nahi hota hai woh kabhi kabhi adhoora aur kabhi akela reh jaata hai,

Chahe khuda hi kya na pohoch jaye unko uski manzil ke saath jodne ke liye.

Lehron ki khilaf terna bewakoofi hai

Lehron ki khilaf terna bewakoofi hai agar woh kisi aur ke chah ho

Woh chah khud ke liye aazmao aur zindagi ko ek bar seene se laga ke toh dekho

Woh chah khud ke liye aazmao aur zindagi ko ek bar seene se laga ke toh dekho

Khubsoorti khud mein hai

Mohabbat khud se hai

Zindagi khud ke liye hai

Kya pata koi aur tumhe manzil banane ke chah main jee raha ho...

You are wonderful and highly intelligent...

Love you loads little sister ❤️

Yours truly,

Anokhi Di

Originally posted by: SaNa_sTaR

Wow!

You are such an awesome writer! 👏

Your stories are short but they have a huge impact..

Loved this OS <3

Her depression was penned down beautifully

At the end when it said "oh, I hallucinated again", I was like woahhh 😲

Hats off...superb shot!

Keep writing like this!