Please point out my flaws in TWO BROTHERS

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Hey guys , it is for my readers who have tolerated my story for so long...

I was reading Durjoy Dutta's story & was thinking that what is needed to become a full-fledged writer?

Nice plot , story telling capability , well developed characters , right grammar , good language & nice end...

Then I started thinking whether I have that or not? I thought for a long time & then concluded that I have a nice plot ...my story telling capability is not that bad...my characters are complex but is it worth reading? My grammar is poor & my language is not that good which I know...About the end , well I will try to give a nice ending...

So , it is a request that from now onwards if u can , please point out my flaws like my grammar or like something which makes less convincing...like some loopholes...I will try to fill it up...Even if it is from ch 1 , I don't mind...But in stating try to be polite , so that my feelings are not hurt as I am very sensitive...

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

I think u r gud

Everybody cant be perfect so from my side u r too gud n everybody improves with the passage of time so dont worry if u vl have any negative point in u than it vl automatically get removed

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Anntempleton

@Anntempleton

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

I think you are a good writer. I like your writing n story. If I have anything to say, it will be keep up the good work. 😊

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Rksuperstar

@Rksuperstar

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

U such a awesome and talented writer. I love you story. I love every character of your story. But I fan of rishbala .Please keep writing dear. I know u little bit disheartened. Don't worry be happy. God bless you.