Arshi SS: Crack of the Dawn *REMOVED*

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sanjida123

@sanjida123

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Posted: 10 years ago

Lovely...os...thanks... 👏

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Rish_Rubles

@Rish_Rubles

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

mera reswa!

--Editing--- as promised tonight 😳

From where shall I actually start Sadh? The piece of writing which is your first is so brilliant. The one you sent me for proofread had actually no mistakes except for no paragraphs and i was really thrilled when i read it 😲 nobody has such a good sense to catch the words and form sentences out of those in their first try which you did have.

Not only that, the plot you chose was equally thrilling! It didnt unveil the suspense of what is happening and whats gonna happen next, there could be no guessings as each sentence had a meaning in its own 😊 it was described beautifully and the end part was absolutely fab you know <3 Obviously you kknow😆

its like any reader cant be in peace unless he/she reads a continuation to it and know what happened further. Arnav'srole is uite different here and very intriguing.

Love you babes. It was simply fab!

Kepp goin girl, you'll just rock someday 😉 which is very soon.

Edited by Rishaal - 10 years ago

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Shalini

@TwisterGirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wowww Sadh...so nice to see your OS here...

It seemed such a matured writing Sadh darling...are you sure you are writing for the first time?

First I thought that Khushi is running away from Arnav...but then...then...I was proved wrong! You had described the place so beautifully, I felt like I am standing there 😊

So the flirty Raizada claims to love her and is not willing to let her go...and wait a minute, he wants to marry her!! What the...!

And then it ended...I was so engrossed in reading...I am sure you can convert it in a SS! What say? There are so many questions to be answered...like Why was Khushi running, from whom was she running, how are Arnav & Khushi linked? How did Arnav fell in love with Khushi? do they belong to the royal bloodline...errmm I dont know! And above all, does Arnav fulfill his promise? And how did her...and so many others why, when and how!!

Continue soon baby 🤗

Edited by shalini.ranjan - 10 years ago

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 10 years ago

Are you serious?

This was utyerly beautiful not even close to any crap you mentioned lol.

Miss Impossible please do write a second part to this, yes I'm loving this role reversal.. I'll be nagging you until you write the next part.

Jhanda gadhke baith jaongi,

love ya Rish bae for pressing her.. This is awesome..

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Rish_Rubles

@Rish_Rubles

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -FriedriceJi-
Are you serious?

This was utyerly beautiful not even close to any crap you mentioned lol.

Miss Impossible please do write a second part to this, yes I'm loving this role reversal.. I'll be nagging you until you write the next part.

Jhanda gadhke baith jaongi,

love ya Rish bae for pressing her.. This is awesome..

The pleasure is all mine Chawal 😆

Yes I'm with you in gaaring the jhanda too, this OS deserves a part 2

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tina_1234
Nice

Thanks!😉

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pree2605
Nice os..
really gud

Thanks a lot!!!😊😉

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

Lovely os yr
Loved it to the core

Keep smiling

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -FriedriceJi-
Are you serious?

This was utyerly beautiful not even close to any crap you mentioned lol.

Miss Impossible please do write a second part to this, yes I'm loving this role reversal.. I'll be nagging you until you write the next part.

Jhanda gadhke baith jaongi,

love ya Rish bae for pressing her.. This is awesome..

Hehe thanks a lot chechi 😳]

It means a lot..and that means I need to quit the idea of not writing.. :P

Second part?? For now I am too happy with a first part..to go to a second.. Hehe my nagging will top urs..so never mind :D

Lol :D

Thank u again my dear chechi

Edited by Sadh123 - 10 years ago