Ishveer ff -burning in the love( chapter -17updated page -14 )

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hey guys i am thinking of writing of an ishveer ff on current track but not acctual repatence of the c
urrent track so lets strat the story please i am extremly sorry for any typing mistake or any mistake
preview- it was devarsh and krisha marrage rv in deep thoght of Event happening in the day of devarsh krisha marrage ishani and ranveer are renew their marrage vows which was shock everyone and happend very fast suddenly ishani notices rittika and slaped her and fainted .ranveer looked worried for ishani condition .he take ishani home for rest .
part-1 Better truth of past
ranveer carried ishani in his arm and take her to the room and laid her in doble size bed .ishani sleeping peacefully and ranveer mesmerizing with the beauty of ishani .ranveer haunting of the fact of ishani past behaviour which broken his trust and hurt .he will thought that what was happening in the past that has been change our relationship.ranveer decided to find out the truth By him self what was happening in 8 month ago that change our life
ranveer come close to ishani and kisses ishani forehead and grab the car key and leave the room in hurry
ranveer get into his car and driving towards pune jail to met jailor didi to find out the truth of ishani
his was deeply in thought that what was happening that day that change our love life completly and why god testing our love every time
flashback of 8 months ago of black day
ranveer and ishani and every other member of their family are happy of sharman and rittika marrge it was a day of sharman and rittika sangeet every one busy preparing for the ceremony
ishani was looking stunning in peach colour lehenga choli he is doing home and food arrangement for the guest
rv was mesmerizing of the beauty of ishani suddenly ishani is entering in the room rv grab ishani and push towards wall and getting colesers to ishani
ranveer -what are doing somebody sees us please leave me i have lots of work to do
ranveer to ishani - i will leave you in one condition that you will give me a warm kiss and he was gettimg closers to ishani ranveer was about to kiss ishani manas knock the door
hey manas how are you ishani answer politly excuse me ishani i have an important talk with rv so please excuse us for some time
ishani leave the room so what the talk in that day when his brother in law mehendi has been happening today actually rv you have go panvel for the diamond confernce ishani was sad hearing the news but he knows that you have piority for work first then personal things after
ranveer tell i have finish my work early and come back home before the function start
ishani -ranveer take care of your and drive safe and call me when you reach ranveer kissed ishani forehead and leave the house
end of flashback
ranveer is in full of tears when he thought of this point .he thought how smoothly our lives have run but this incident has take u turn of life in this 8 months i will convinced by you that you hate me but why are doing this ishani why you giving us such pain that we are gone through sitmulasly that we are spend sleeplesh night together .i have to find an answer for this mess created by you ishani .i will
find out the truth hang on ishani hang on .suddenly ranveer pulling break forcefully .it was outside the jail .ranveer thought of the ishani past jail life and face an cruel life for the sake of whom happiness
ranveer step out the car and proceeding towards jail authority superintend cabin which saves ishani life here is the first chapter let me know how is this

chapter index
capter 1 And 2 in page
chapter-3 in page3
chapter-4 in page 4
chapter -5 in page 5
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good good 👏 u may continue as it is d way we wanted it to proceed , wish rv used his mind on other decisive things rather than using silly methods to bring d truth to light
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you for your spports and i am glad that you like it and this ff there was lots of revealation which i am disclose in further chapter and thank you for the inspiration of writing the ff 😳 i will update the next chapter very soon
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Originally posted by: Erasa

thank you for your spports and i am glad that you like it and this ff there was lots of revealation which i am disclose in further chapter and thank you for the inspiration of writing the ff 😳 i will update the next chapter very soon

erasa , if u want u can put up my ideas also in ur ff , only if u want cuz i'm not getting enough time to write d ffs
here's d link , will be glad if u liked it & use it as a tool 😊
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4410904
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Okey i will thought of the idea and anybody free to give idea and suggestion and your prescious comment i will love to get your support of completing the ff and thank you every one i will try to update till tommorow or sunday
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chapert -2 The dark day of our lives
ranveer has entered in jail superintend cabin.ranveer waited for the jailor didi to come she was a busy in an important meeting of jail authority.jailor didi has come to his office .she regognise ranveer very much.
jailordidi- ranveer you are here in this time .any promblem in the house .every thing is okey .
ranveer - everything is okey .i am coming here because i have an qustion regarding ishani past behaviour .tell me please for whom sake he is doing all the mess .
jailordidi- ranveer its an painfull secret which you dont dig out its better for you because its gives you tears and pain .please ranveer dont dig out ishani past wound
ranveer- i have to find an answer for my happiness for the sake of my loved happiness .
jailordidi- okey i will tell you the whole truth 's but you have an gut to bear the truth
jailor didi started narreting the whole story of ishani sacrifise and past behaviour and whom did he want to save him
flashback of the whole scnerio
ishani was getting ready for the function .parul came in and handed over a gift box which attached an small note of ranveer.
hey sunny i will extremly pleased you wore this dress In the evening .ishani cheeck has been blushed .his cheeck has been truned red.it was an beautiful revealing red colour gown which has floral motive.
ishani take the dress with him and headed towards washroom for changing into this dress.
after 15 minute later ishani came out of the washroom and admiring her beauty in mirror
suddenly ishani phone rang .it was an unknown number.ishani thinking whos calling this time.ishani
picks up the call .
ishani- hello, who is this
chirag- hello , beby me chirag i will inform you that your husband game is over today .he is on the way to panvel he is not reaching panvel today
Ishani - how dare you to call me and regarding life of ranveer you will not fullfill this wish beacause i will vow to protect him in any harm .i will warn you dont touch my husband or i will kill you
ishani has became tensed regarding this called he is called parul and tell everything and he is bound promises that not disclose its any other family member
ishani called ranveer but his phone has been not reacheble he more worried regarding ranveer scurity
ishani grab his car keys and left for the panvel .
on the way to panvel
ranveer smoothly drive his car and listing music enjoy the atompismre .he is hoping for getting contract for his company .he is happy for his marrage and family life.suddenly ranveer saw an accident occured .
ranveer get out of his car and look for the injured man but ranveer shcked its was chirag who laid the trap for kidnapping and killing ranveer .
chirag throw chilli powder in ranveer eyes and kidnapped ranveer on his own car .
in the car chirag bruttaly brush ranveer and talking the car into cliff and jump out of the car but somehow ranveer manges to come out of the car
on the way ishani find ranveer cars number plate which has blood stain in it.ishani was scare what was happen to ranveer she is totally devasted and completly broke down
suddrnly a man passes By ishani enquire about ranveer .
the man has answred that a man has been kidnapped and taking to the route of death cliff .ishani run trough direction and reached the spot and notices ranveer and chirag are fighting and ishani fainted
ishani when regain concisness he saw a man lying on the road dead he rushed to see its ranveer or not but it was chirag who were spotted dead .
ishani think about of saving ranveer from the clutches of law
he quickly throw his bangle and earring near chirag deadbody
ishani throws ranveer car in the cliff and returned home and start the drama of hating ranveer and he is behind ranveer
ranveer was angry at ishani at the same time heart broken
ranveer called the divorce lawyer and sighn the divorce paper before ishani sighing the divorce paper police came and arrest ishani for the muder case of chirag which everyone in the family member shock
ishani smilingly arrested and thoght in her mind that he has been saved ranveer from the clutches of law
ranveer was total heart broken of ishani behaviour he is supported by his family member
ishani has been orderd by court sentenced death
ishani was shifted by pune jail
pune jail authority has been suspisous about ishani behaviour and authority was sure he did not commiting any crime like muder
ishani told the truth to jailor didi that he was doing all this to save ranveer from the clutches of law
end of flashback
ranveer was stunned at the revelation of chirag muder mystry and ishani truth
ranveer was tottaly devasted for the fact that he was doing all this to protect me from any harm which can ruin my entire life.
ranveer feeling gulty for the accusation he was throwing at ishani that he was an gold digger selfish and thief criminal but the fact he love has more power than his love
ranveer was thinking of saying sorry to ishani for doing all the past beheviour and talking an starting an new life with ishani
someone has an eye on ranveer and he is watching every move of ranveer and he is waiting to strike at the right time
ranveer thanks the jailor didi and leave the jailor didi office
at home ishani is is gaining consesness and he is alone in the room he is worried for Ranveer .
he is heading todwards the wash room and take an nap change into an appling revealing nighty which was in red colour .he is arranged some flowers and candle and decorated her room
and waiting for ranveer to arrive
here is another chapter guys please help with your suggestion Consertive ciritismr
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start Erasa!
How I wish that we were being shown all the same things.
anyways,please do continue and plz make ur chptrs a lil long.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanx for every one supports and love guys i will defenetly continue with the ff and hey you will free to give me suggesition and valuable comment .i will update the next chapter asap . I am glad that you liked the chapter ⭐️ this chapter is you like the most
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Chapter -3 facing the hard truth of life
ishani was looking tensed for ranveer .she was thinking where was he gone in the late night .he called ranveer but he is not picking up his call
ishani knew that ranveer was hurt for her past behaviour but he is reticfy his mistake done by him .ishani was thinking that he was broken his heart completly and he is the only man that bring back his trust and love .
ishani was looking at the wall clock its midnight .ishani was all frightend and looked worried because he know that rittika is not an good girl she only moto was ranveer love
ishani was again calling ranveer and this time and unknown person pick up the call and inform about ranveer accident
ishani was shocked for regarding the news of ranveer accident .she rushed to the room of amba and kailash his mother in law and father in law with the sad news of ranveer accident.
ishani knocked the door
amba open the door and says what was happend ishani
ishani -we need to go the hospital
amba- hospital but why everything is alright
ishani -i will tell you everything please get ready imedeatly because ranveer was an accident occured
amba -lets go
ishani was on the way to hospital he was praying for the ranveer 's well Being and his heart says that ranveer was alright
ishani was reached hospital and enquring in reception for recent accident case which was occured just
the nurse will inform him that he will go to the emergency word
in emergency word ishani was asked doctor about ranveer health the doctor was inform the family member that ranveer is out danger
flashback of the accident scnerio
ranveer was happy that ishani did not doing wrong .he is happy knowing the fact that he is doing all this drama to protect him from every disaster which can burn my name and fame.
ranveer think that what was he doing in all this 8 months that hating ishani to the core of heart and planning to marry someone else which i was dont love him
he is feeling guilty and he was to face ishani for the insult i have gave ishani in 8 month .
he was open his car door and entered his car.he was happy because of the fact that her ishani has not change in 8th month he is the same ishani which she love from the begining of the day .
he start the car leave for the house and thinking for an surprize romantic night
when ranveer leave from the jail a lady appeared behind the wall and he was saying that he was not reached home tonight
the lady called someone from his cell phone .she says thats ranveer did not reached home tonight
in another side of the phone 'the person says that ranveer did not reached home tonight
he cut the call and enter in his tempo and waiting for ranveer car to reach the venue
ranveer was driving slowly listing romantic music and extremly happy
ranveer notices a flower shop he get out of the car and buys ishani favourite flower and faovrite choclate .he payed the bill and again headed towards his home
suddenly an tempo speedily reaching towards ranveer cars and crash ranveer cars badly .
the public of that place take ranveer to the nearby hospital for the treatment
end of flashback
in the hospital ranveer was shifted to his hospital cabin .ishani was standing near the hospital bed .she is unable to control his feeling regarding ranveer condition
ishani is curshing his luck for the fortune that give them only pain and pain .
ranveer open your eyes please. Ishani voice has been full of emotion .
amba take ishani out of the hospital cabin and tell ishani that dont give up hope ' you will have to fight for your love .amba tell which one responsible for my son health you will punish with your own hand.
amba tell ishani that this accident was not an ordinary accident it was an preplanned attempt to muder
ishani was deeply on thought and sure who can do this accident
ishani was out of jail with the help of shikhar and jailor didi.she was extremly happy that he was meeting his love and confess his true feeling
when ishani reach ranveers home he was badly treated by ranveer and his newly found friend and take carer rittika .he is devasted with the insult but he is walking in silently .
falguni notices ishani and take her along with his home.ishani tell everything to his mom .here amba and kailash and baa also here there conversation .they are both feeling guilty amba says sorry to ishani
here falguni will assure ishani that he was tatk to ranveer
here devarsh will love shikhar sister krisha which was an true friend of ishani .
there marrage has been fixed and it was krisha engagement and falguni massege ranveer to meet me in terris in shikhar home .falguni waiting for ranveer arrival but some body pused him from the terris and he was spotted dead
ishani was completly broke down he was supported by shikhar
in few days ishani was kidnapped by few goons take her along with an isolated place
ishani was noticing a lady arrived in her bridal attire and confess her crime and stabbed ishani.
ishani was some how saved by shikhar
end of falshback
ishani was enter in ranveer hospital cabin .sit comfortablly in couch and waiting for gaining consussness
he was thinking today we have to do lot of thing which sorted our lives
here is another chapter let me know how it is

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is so good! Even better then the previous one..
Plz do continue :)

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