Kabir's Pov OS: Mai bachhi hi toh hu.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello every1
I re-watched day before yesterdays episode and I so wanted to write this so much...
Its different and is bolder than the show!

BTW ek baat kehni hai, joote mat maarna I think our AManav looked really CUTE (and devilish ofcourse) when he teased and taunted Malvika... for this I'm ready to excuse all his irritating factors.

"Dil tootne k bhi awaaz hote hai, magar ye guroor tootne ki awaz thi" line was epic... kudos to the writer,
Anyway.
Hope U enjoy!!

love,

Sumaya

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kabir's POV.

My eyes flicker over to her every now and then, she sits at the farthest corner of the table, her head in her notebook, she is engrossed in writing something, though I doubt she is doing any work, probably doodling sweet nothings and reflecting about us, usually I would have called to have her attention, today I let her be, poor girl, how can I blame her!! I'm having a very hard time concentrating myself. yesterday had been a very emotionally challenging day for both of us, I'm glad we overcame our clash of egos... we're finally together... She is mine, finally mine, My Ms. Kashyap.. Mrs. Sharma sounds better doesn't it? but we'll leave that for a little while. I didn't even realize when I fell silent thinking about our future together...

I was pulled out of my euphoric state by "dearest" (note the sarcasm) Malvika...

Dear God, though I dont believe in you, It is my sincere prayer, kindly grant the woman some compassion so as to leave me alone, she annoys the living hell out of me.

"Dekho Kabir, Ananya apne senior reporter banne k chance ko gawane ka afsos mana rahi hai" Malvika taunts, She should be thankful I don't hit women.

I look at Ananya, I hope she isn't offended..
she smiles cheekily, she isn't. Good! my girl knows better than to give a shit about someone like Malvika.

"Nahi mai to notes bana rahi hu" comes her reply, she subtly winks at me, this isn't good.
"Toh dikhao" Malvika presses.

She blushes and rises from her chair, her eyes on me. what is she up to?

don't embarrass me love, don't embarrass me, I chant in my head,
she gives me the paper.

Had I been a teenaged girl I would have gone all "aww"... It was such a cute little drawing, there was a boy which I presume was me, and a girl which was her and a big I love U in the middle.

She smirked at me, God! This girl will be the death of me!

"Acchi lead hai na sir? mai follow karu?" she probes naughtily, glad to have the upper hand for once.

"Yes good story" is all I can manage to say. I tell her to return to her seat. she does.
I clear my throat, I haven't felt so tongue tied in my whole life, everyone's eyes are on me but I am fumbling for words, something I haven't ever done... The things this girl does to me.

"Toh kahaa they hum?" I try taking the conference back to track.
"Hum toh Yahi they Kabir sahab, aap kahan the?" Manav mocks me! The audacious scumbag!
Isski bhi ye majal hogayi!! ruko Ms. kashyap aaj khabr leta hu mai tumhari!! kin kinse taane sunwa rahi ho mujhe

After wrapping up the meeting I call her to my cabin...
I'm trying to make her understand how childish it all is!
She can be really thick skulled sometimes, but how can I remain angry when she pouts so adorably! But I need to mark a line. Office me decorum toh maintain karna parega na!

"Ye andar kya karrahi thi tum! mat karo aise, mujhse handle nahi hota!" I chide her her.
"Mai sirf apni khushi zahir karrahi thi!"
"Lekin Ye bachpana hai Ananya"
"Haa toh mai bachhi hi toh hu!" she insists...
I scoff, "Mai utna bhi bara nahi hu!"
she makes a face and tries to take the paper...her "notes" but I snatch it away, that's mine not gonna give it back!

"Par sir"" "Nahi ab jao tum, koi aajayga" I cut her off! A whole longer and I wont be able to resist, and I guess kissing your stupid junior reporter really is against office protocols...

"Kyu dar lagraha hai aapko?" she advances towards me, trying to be seductive.
The effect she has on me is debilitating. - You don't have to try babe, you're already turning me on.

of course I can't say that can I? "Arre Jao na!" I shoo her, she scowls and storms off muttering under her breath. "Kiss bhi nahi karte!"
very soon baby very soon! I promise her in my mind.

I finally allow that stifled smile to creep up to my lips.

-.-.-

A few hours later, Laxman calls to give me a lead about the new MLA, the story is interesting, I call MLA jadav's PA to arrange an interview, He agrees. That should be enough to increase today's TRPs.

I call Sunny to prepare the equipments, we must leave shortly.
I look through the glass doors, Ms. Kashyap is chatting animatedly with Trisha as the latter is typing.
She doesn't look my way, maybe I was a bit too strict with her, she's been avoiding me all time, I should make it up to her. I'll take her along.

"Mere Cabin me aao" I text her.
she looks up, our eyes meet, she blushes and shakes her head.
"Nahi ana mujhe, aap hi ne toh bhaga dia tha na"
I grin at her msg.
"Arrey gussa kyu karrahi ho? Its important Plz come na" I reply.
"shona" I add as an afterthought...

Her resolve shattered into a huge smile. Its really adorable how she tries to remain stoic but one word from me brings out so many different reactions from her, its good to know I have the same effect on her, probably more.


Edited by SumuDaEscapist - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Joote kyu maru?? I am glad glad mujhe koi partner-in-fangirling-for-Manav mil gaya 😆 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome...really like WOW!!. 😃 👏 ...Plz keep writing more a and more...
Especially I loved this line-"She should be thankful I don't hit women" 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome... Abhi waiting for the two to handle the case together
Pl continue sooonn
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww this was cute 👏
Glad to know Kabir's POV 😳 ...eager to know more 😳
So, will kiss happen again... 😉 since miss kashyap is complaining. ..."kiss bhi nahi karte" 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow such a cute OS! Really loved the way u expressed his thoughts!😆
His cute cute Shona hayee! Surely, Ananya cant resist Kabir's charm!😆

But will she again lure him into a kiss?😉 I m sure! 😛but sunny praji is thr with thmright ?


Oh! i so luved his "jaaooo na" in the epi..😆 and also his "please main handle nahi kar sakta" such honest confession.. Ananya lapped on the opportunity to tease him.. "Accha.. aur agar nahi gayi to kya kar loge!" She is killer!😆

I wonder how cud he resist a kiss when she was being so cute in tht day b4 yesteray's epi.. "yani aap mujhe kiss nahi karoge?"

Surely if he wasnt mature and a lot wasnt going on in his mind at tht moment, he wud've surely loved to kiss her! *sigh* but he is The Kabir Sharma The Oh! So All Knowing Kabir Sharma. He knows wher to draw the line!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful sachi..
Cabin main aao...😆
Amazing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome part
continue soon
pm me please
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very cute os
Liked the extra addition thoughts to the scenes
Great job
Thanks

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