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Its Awsome!!
Super Interesting ya...
Abhi nans n cabir cousins... nyc...
I guess murthy's n malhotra's gonna b family
friends... is it?? I hope I am right... ⭐️
Nans is modern, a business woman n a fashion designer...
Tats like awsome!!
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Chapter 1 ( NANDINI )

Morning 5; 00 AM ,

The girl wake up early , doing yoga on tarrence listing her daily rotiune on voice mail , by navya ( assistance ) send by yesterday night she was listing carefully .

Navya s voice mail,

Mam today at 8 you having breakfast with mr .patel about land deal nd inthis deal tough compietition is given by malhotra construction .

Nd land meeting is on tomorrow , nd today is malika mam is coming for the dress specially design by you .

Nd nandini this navya , we have 3 days for destination engagement nd weekend with family nd friendzs mandvi , I now you are not intreseted in this , nd I know you not came but cabir nd me plz , I want my friend nandini , nd cabir's nandu in our specail day plz,

Nandini has tear in her eyes , she never attend any function fully she only go on shadi for only 2 hours ,but for cabir she can do anything . she call navya

Nans; hello its ...

Navya; its.. my friend nandini , not boss

Nans; yahh , voh..

Navya ; plz nandini me tumhe janti huki tum jajur avgi, or ek baate , voh land nani ka sapna hai we have to

Nandini confident ; don't weary land is my

Navya ; no malhotra are strong you don't know him

Nandini; whatever but nandini murthy is born to win , nd ha I will design your cab dress don't weary

Navya exited ; superb thanks bye

Other side at , Mumbai

Ny; manic get up you are getting last

M; plz let me sleep mom I am tried

Ny ; kise kah tha ke 3 baje office se avo

M; mom 5 min plz

Ny ; manik its about that land which murthys are trying to grab it

Manik site on bed no mom its our time to show malhotra power to murthy , nd that land is my I will do what ever to grab it.

Ny ; okk bacha I know you can do that , but 3 din ke bade we all have to go mandvi you know that right

M; oh shit aje to cabir ke sathe jana that pakka mara aje toh

Ny laugh , manik run nd go washroom nd get ready fast , as breakfast was held in cabir house with fab5 family an as usally he is late , he entrened all giving deadly glare to him . he make cute pout nd navya melt taking him nd make seat nd serving to him.

Cabir ; its not far , tum esi kyu bithya.

Mukti ; ha pura maza kirkira kare diya.

Navya ruffle his hair ; he is my bro toh me uski side lungi.

Cabir make angry pout nd manik show tounge all laugh , navya go nd kiss on cabir cheek ( making pleads face ) cabir melt .they start doing breakfast

Cabir ; nandu a rahi hai na

Navya ; yeah she is coming after emotion blackmail drama

Mukti ; cabir nandu

Cabir ; nandu me bulata hu nandini name hai uska

Navya ; kabhi bhi nandu mate bolana voh bahut gussa hoti hai

Mukti uppsss bahut dangers sound karti hai

Cabir emtionly; voh dangers nahi hai bas pretend karti hai , nani ke bad akli hogai hai , kahne ko ham joint family ha sab hai mama mani , rishu , abhi ,nina but vo nani se bahut jaida pyar karti hai , nani ki death US me hui tab toh ( tears are coming from his nd navya eyes , navya hold him ) vo tute gai , nani nandu ko promise karti ke she never leave , but she leaves nandu on darkness , jab hum collage jate , party karte , weekend pe jate , par voh sirf kaam usne dream achive kiya , nani ki company takeover ki , voh kabhi ghare nahi ati thi hame sah kaam kaam , hamsa to bahut pareshan hogai thi , ki ek nanhi masum etni sari respondsbilty utha rahi hai , kahi apne apko kho na de , or yahi huva , we lost our bubby , smiliy , prankster girls , she became strict , living alone with out us , hard to her , slient , workaholic , perfectionlist person which does not have personal life , doesn't have love .

Navya moving hand on back of cabir; cabir vo payar ko apne age nahi ane deti , kyuki wo weak nahi bana chati , jab bhi nani ki yaad ati hai vo US usi room me band ho gati ha jab 17 sala ki ladki apni dadi ke sathe unki story , moments share karti thi . nani payar se use angel , or nandu bolti thi , or voh hak sirf dadi or cabir ko diya hai or kisiko nahi .

Cabir hug navy and cried ; I want my nandu back ,plz I want her , I lost her , I tried to make her cried out , console , but she became stubborn never listen to me .( breaking hug ) me last month goa gaya tha

Dhurv ; goa ????

Cabir ; she live alone go , voh mama ,mami ke sath nahi rehna chati , because vo week na padh jai , I told her to try to take new start but she change topic nd sharing his boutique deals , nd stars design , she feel I forgot topic but no I was seening who she was trying to change the topic.

Navya; bas cabir its important she is coming for us nd that's it we will try to talk to her to spend weekend with us ,our family .

Navya wiped his tear , cabir kiss her hand ; thank for be my life love , thank he was going to kiss mukti cough

Mukti ; guyzs we are here so plz control

Manik was thinking ( who can a girl so hard on herself , she is fully in darkness , cabir has to do something before he go in deeply , I hve to see her , who make cabir cry )

Manic; cabir kuch kare use phele wo fully darkness me jai

Dhurv ; ha cabir buddy thik kah raha hai , kuch toh karna pade ga

Manik ; if you say fab5 can help to nandini for bring out of darkness

Cabir was overwhelmed about his friend concered , they had group hug

So guyzs its my first chapter hope you guyzs like it

chapter 2 - page 3 ( nokha jokha )

Looking forward for manans meeting.. And it was really good ..Thanks for pm