Write your Dream Scenes! (7931s Family in Manali - Page 5)

As we know the end of the show is approaching and the last track is in an EPIC mess, few of us thought why not have our own endings and share it? (As we don't think the ending is going to be effective either)

Location: Gangwal House

@Ranju Yes. They should have shown Dolly wanting a LS. The family deciding on separation instead of just saying Dolly doesn't want to be with Sumit. Dolly has definitely been consistent with her decisions and it's good to see a strong girl like her.

Well tbh they are many loose ends with the cousins and the elders. But I wanted to give it a try.

Venue: The Royal Palace Hotel

The GF just finished celebrating their 50 years being in business celebration with their friends, family, clients and business partners. During the dinner, everybody asked Nemichand Gangwal to give a speech:
Firstly, I thank The Lord for showering his blessings upon me and my family. If it wasn't for my wife supporting and encouraging me in my dreams I would not be here. (Dadiji smiled sweetly.). It's important to have dreams (he was looking directly at ramesh) and more important to have people support you (there was a tear rolling down Ramesh's eyes, as he knew his dad had finally understood him) As for my kids, I love each and everyone of you. You have been the pillars upon which I stand (everyone was smiling.) My biggest supporters, however, are my grand kids. What would I be without them? (All the cousins routed loudly for Singham, as any young group of kids would.) He also thanked his clients and business partners for the many years of company and support. At the end of the celebration, dadaji and Dadiji and the elders were tired and decided to go home.

The cousins however decided to stay around a bit for some coffee while the crew cleaned up.
They were all discussing their futures. Umesh and Aman were exited about their own new restaurant called "Aroma". Infact, this was their first catered event, and Singham was proud that they had done such a fab job. They got many orders after this.
Kirti was also proud. She had dressed everybody for the event. She also received many compliments. But she was a little sad. Fashion world belonged in Dehli and she was going to move there. But all the cousins assured her Delhi isn't too far and they would come to her to raid her closets!!! She felt better after this.
Dolly was now in the third month of her pregnancy. She had officially divorced from Sumit who was still in jail. Definitely, Saurav had feelings for her and slowly dolly was developing feelings for him. Their company was doing well and Kirti was to market their products in the Delhi too.
Sukku decided to shift to Mumbai as he wanted to try being in Bollywood. Everybody was like you better become a star fast as we want to meet all the Bollywood stars!!! They hugged him hard. Plus, we won't pay to get to see your movies...you better send us free tickets.
Jwala decided she wanted to become a lawyer and Bunty wanted to become the next Tendulkar and everybody laughed.
Next, they asked Nisha what were her plans next...Nisha...Nisha everybody was calling. Yeh larkhi kaha gayi??? And when they turned their heads towards the dance floor, there they saw them, Kabir and Nisha. They were in each other's arms dazing into each other's eyes, dancing slowly and the music had stopped so long ago. All the cousins were smiling at them. Dolly said, "nisha ka sirf ekhi plan hai, to be Mrs. Nisha Gangwal Kabir Kumar." All the cousins stared to laugh. "Chalo guys, let's leave these two love birds alone" Umesh said shyly.
N-"I hate you, Kabir. How did it occur to you to leave me??? I hate you so much and why did you come back."
K-"bb told me how much you love me and he didn't want to get in the way. He realized that we both love each other and i love him for that. He explained that to mom too. After all (he swung nisha around and was behind her now) he is my big bro!"
N-"aacha, so now all the musunderstanding is cleared and now you want to be with me. Well, guess what I don't. (And she left his grip eventhough she didn't want to)."
K-(held unto her arm) "please don't leave me...I said I was sorry. What can I say I am a real duffer, idiot, dummy..."
N-"You forgot gadha."
K-"Jitna gaalis dehena hai dedo, but don't leave me...I love you..always and forever"
N-(now smiling because she couldn't keep her feelings from him). I never thought I would be in love with a gadha, but kya karu, dil ko kaise samjayun"
K-(now he pulled her close to him with their forheads touching) I will never ever leave you.
N-(blushing and moving closer to him) I know.
And they continued their silent, slow dance under the full moon.

Sorry, it got long. I would have written more. But got emotional...
😭 I'll miss this show so much!!!

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

As we know the end of the show is approaching and the last track is in an EPIC mess, few of us thought why not have our own endings and share it? (As we don't think the ending is going to be effective either)

To be more clear, we can all come up with our own dream scenes/endings, scenes which we want to see before the show ends. It can be a OS, TS, SS on your favorite characters. Your work needn't necessarily be the ending scene of the show, but a scene which you want to see before the ending. For eg: KN confession, Dadaji-Ramesh patch up, Cousins supporting Nisha, etc.

We also thought, may be we can send the links to all our work to the cast. If they read, they can have a good time too.

You can have your own thread for your work. But kindly reserve a comment in this thread and update the link to your work. I will keep updating the main thread.

It's not a competition..😆 There is no registering or applying or anything...😆 Anyone can write. This is just an idea few of us thought of..and wanted to share it with everyone.

Last date for the updates would be 25th June.

As for the backstory...you can base it on from VJs entry and she wanting to take revenge and wanting to create a MU. After that, the choice is yours.

Put on your thinking hats!

You can reserve your first comment...and then can carry out discussions regarding your ideas.

Thanks so much for this idea...it is the therapy I needed. Love all the posts on motd!

Originally posted by: Nhk2001

Well tbh they are many loose ends with the cousins and the elders. But I wanted to give it a try.

Venue: The Royal Palace Hotel

The GF just finished celebrating their 50 years being in business celebration with their friends, family, clients and business partners. During the dinner, everybody asked Nemichand Gangwal to give a speech:
Firstly, I thank The Lord for showering his blessings upon me and my family. If it wasn't for my wife supporting and encouraging me in my dreams I would not be here. (Dadiji smiled sweetly.). It's important to have dreams (he was looking directly at ramesh) and more important to have people support you (there was a tear rolling down Ramesh's eyes, as he knew his dad had finally understood him) As for my kids, I love each and everyone of you. You have been the pillars upon which I stand (everyone was smiling.) My biggest supporters, however, are my grand kids. What would I be without them? (All the cousins routed loudly for Singham, as any young group of kids would.) He also thanked his clients and business partners for the many years of company and support. At the end of the celebration, dadaji and Dadiji and the elders were tired and decided to go home.

The cousins however decided to stay around a bit for some coffee while the crew cleaned up.
They were all discussing their futures. Umesh and Aman were exited about their own new restaurant called "Aroma". Infact, this was their first catered event, and Singham was proud that they had done such a fab job. They got many orders after this.
Kirti was also proud. She had dressed everybody for the event. She also received many compliments. But she was a little sad. Fashion world belonged in Dehli and she was going to move there. But all the cousins assured her Delhi isn't too far and they would come to her to raid her closets!!! She felt better after this.
Dolly was now in the third month of her pregnancy. She had officially divorced from Sumit who was still in jail. Definitely, Saurav had feelings for her and slowly dolly was developing feelings for him. Their company was doing well and Kirti was to market their products in the Delhi too.
Sukku decided to shift to Mumbai as he wanted to try being in Bollywood. Everybody was like you better become a star fast as we want to meet all the Bollywood stars!!! They hugged him hard. Plus, we won't pay to get to see your movies...you better send us free tickets.
Jwala decided she wanted to become a lawyer and Bunty wanted to become the next Tendulkar and everybody laughed.
Next, they asked Nisha what were her plans next...Nisha...Nisha everybody was calling. Yeh larkhi kaha gayi??? And when they turned their heads towards the dance floor, there they saw them, Kabir and Nisha. They were in each other's arms dazing into each other's eyes, dancing slowly and the music had stopped so long ago. All the cousins were smiling at them. Dolly said, "nisha ka sirf ekhi plan hai, to be Mrs. Nisha Gangwal Kabir Kumar." All the cousins stared to laugh. "Chalo guys, let's leave these two love birds alone" Umesh said shyly.
N-"I hate you, Kabir. How did it occur to you to leave me??? I hate you so much and why did you come back."
K-"bb told me how much you love me and he didn't want to get in the way. He realized that we both love each other and i love him for that. He explained that to mom too. After all (he swung nisha around and was behind her now) he is my big bro!"
N-"aacha, so now all the musunderstanding is cleared and now you want to be with me. Well, guess what I don't. (And she left his grip eventhough she didn't want to)."
K-(held unto her arm) "please don't leave me...I said I was sorry. What can I say I am a real duffer, idiot, dummy..."
N-"You forgot gadha."
K-"Jitna gaalis dehena hai dedo, but don't leave me...I love you..always and forever"
N-(now smiling because she couldn't keep her feelings from him). I never thought I would be in love with a gadha, but kya karu, dil ko kaise samjayun"
K-(now he pulled her close to him with their forheads touching) I will never ever leave you.
N-(blushing and moving closer to him) I know.
And they continued their silent, slow dance under the full moon.

Sorry, it got long. I would have written more. But got emotional...
😭 I'll miss this show so much!!!

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

I am officially rooting for a Dadaji speech at the end...and good detailed one.

Very nicely written. Loved how cousins are all thinking about their careers and future.

Thanks so much...having a proper ending meant a lot for me. They all should be give a respectful ending. I couldn't fit in Kabir's dream and Nishas career though...couldn't continue 😭

^Just write a separate oe..😊

Originally posted by: Nhk2001

Well tbh they are many loose ends with the cousins and the elders. But I wanted to give it a try.

Venue: The Royal Palace Hotel

The GF just finished celebrating their 50 years being in business celebration with their friends, family, clients and business partners. During the dinner, everybody asked Nemichand Gangwal to give a speech:
Firstly, I thank The Lord for showering his blessings upon me and my family. If it wasn't for my wife supporting and encouraging me in my dreams I would not be here. (Dadiji smiled sweetly.). It's important to have dreams (he was looking directly at ramesh) and more important to have people support you (there was a tear rolling down Ramesh's eyes, as he knew his dad had finally understood him) As for my kids, I love each and everyone of you. You have been the pillars upon which I stand (everyone was smiling.) My biggest supporters, however, are my grand kids. What would I be without them? (All the cousins routed loudly for Singham, as any young group of kids would.) He also thanked his clients and business partners for the many years of company and support. At the end of the celebration, dadaji and Dadiji and the elders were tired and decided to go home.

The cousins however decided to stay around a bit for some coffee while the crew cleaned up.
They were all discussing their futures. Umesh and Aman were exited about their own new restaurant called "Aroma". Infact, this was their first catered event, and Singham was proud that they had done such a fab job. They got many orders after this.
Kirti was also proud. She had dressed everybody for the event. She also received many compliments. But she was a little sad. Fashion world belonged in Dehli and she was going to move there. But all the cousins assured her Delhi isn't too far and they would come to her to raid her closets!!! She felt better after this.
Dolly was now in the third month of her pregnancy. She had officially divorced from Sumit who was still in jail. Definitely, Saurav had feelings for her and slowly dolly was developing feelings for him. Their company was doing well and Kirti was to market their products in the Delhi too.
Sukku decided to shift to Mumbai as he wanted to try being in Bollywood. Everybody was like you better become a star fast as we want to meet all the Bollywood stars!!! They hugged him hard. Plus, we won't pay to get to see your movies...you better send us free tickets.
Jwala decided she wanted to become a lawyer and Bunty wanted to become the next Tendulkar and everybody laughed.
Next, they asked Nisha what were her plans next...Nisha...Nisha everybody was calling. Yeh larkhi kaha gayi??? And when they turned their heads towards the dance floor, there they saw them, Kabir and Nisha. They were in each other's arms dazing into each other's eyes, dancing slowly and the music had stopped so long ago. All the cousins were smiling at them. Dolly said, "nisha ka sirf ekhi plan hai, to be Mrs. Nisha Gangwal Kabir Kumar." All the cousins stared to laugh. "Chalo guys, let's leave these two love birds alone" Umesh said shyly.
N-"I hate you, Kabir. How did it occur to you to leave me??? I hate you so much and why did you come back."
K-"bb told me how much you love me and he didn't want to get in the way. He realized that we both love each other and i love him for that. He explained that to mom too. After all (he swung nisha around and was behind her now) he is my big bro!"
N-"aacha, so now all the musunderstanding is cleared and now you want to be with me. Well, guess what I don't. (And she left his grip eventhough she didn't want to)."
K-(held unto her arm) "please don't leave me...I said I was sorry. What can I say I am a real duffer, idiot, dummy..."
N-"You forgot gadha."
K-"Jitna gaalis dehena hai dedo, but don't leave me...I love you..always and forever"
N-(now smiling because she couldn't keep her feelings from him). I never thought I would be in love with a gadha, but kya karu, dil ko kaise samjayun"
K-(now he pulled her close to him with their forheads touching) I will never ever leave you.
N-(blushing and moving closer to him) I know.
And they continued their silent, slow dance under the full moon.

Sorry, it got long. I would have written more. But got emotional...
😭 I'll miss this show so much!!!

Awesome👏

Originally posted by: braich_gal

This is not an OS or anything...but I want to see a scene like this or something similar. Note: am not sure how the legal stuff on divorce works so am just making it up.

Location: Gangwal House

A lawyer comes to the house and rings the doorbell. Jwala answers the door and the lawyer tells that he is there to meet Dolly Gangwal. Jwala lets him in and calls Dolly. Dolly greets the lawyer and asks him if the papers are ready. He says yes and gives some papers to Dolly who reads it, then signs the papers. This is witness by the family & Leela who came to the drawing room when they heard a lawyer came to see Dolly. Viren asks Dolly what is going on. She introduces her lawyer and explains that she is getting a divorce from Summit and have just signed the papers. The lawyer says that he will send the summons/papers to Summit /Summit's lawyer for his signature as well and then complete all whatever procedures required. V2 and Leela gets shock. Rupan tries to butt in with some nonsense...trying to poke fire...but Dolly stops her...and says she has made her decision and no one...not even V2 can change her decision. Viren starts talking about samajh again and Dolly says she doesn't give a damn about this samajh Viren is talking about as she is only thinking of her child...oh well...something along those lines...where she defends her decision and shows that it is the right thing to do.

Cousins & RL are proud of Dolly. Dada ji and dadi supports Dolly's decision. Mohan is Mohan. Leela starts to do her drama nonsense and Dolly tells her to pack her things...the door is there and leave this instant. Leela protest but in the meantime, cousins run to Leela's room and chucks her things into a bag and brings bag out and gives it to her. Dadaji tells her...his granddaughter has made a decision which he fully support..tells Leela to leave...and never darken their door again...he then tells the lawyer to make sure Summit signs the divorce papers and warns that these ma-beta are very chalakis...Dolly also asks the lawyer to prepare custody papers for her baby as she does not want any chance of Summit getting hold of the baby. Lawyer says don't worry...he will handle everything and leaves.

Nice👏... want Dolly to get rid of Sumeet and Leela jald se jald