SANDHIR FF- DISGUISED LOVE (ON HOLD TILL MARCH) - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
M havinh scul
Res 4 now
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Posted: 11 years ago
it feels like after ages I have read an update regarding this ff..
The ff was really nice and by their outfits, I can imagine how drool worthy they might be looking..
Continue it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey anu..
its AWESOME...
lvd it soo much..
Sanyukta's outfit was mindblowing..
And Randhir's outfit was superb...
update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
This fiction here is really amazing and splendid.
This chapter is pretty interesting given the fact that everyone got their share of partners and affection.
Ah! A beautiful portrayal of all the characters and an equally fantastic description of their dress-up. I loved Sanyukt's rather Riya's choice of outfit... suits her well and Randhir's complimenting attire.
Jeezz!! It's good to have our Yoyo paired up.
So, the party's up! Can't wait to read what's gonna happen in the party..
Update the next chapter pretty soonish.

Regards
Keya
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Posted: 11 years ago
update update update update update update update update
AGAR NAHI UPDATE KIYA TOHH -- TOH... TOH..
MEIN
MERE JAISE DESPO KI GANG BANA KE TERE JAISE LATE COMERS KO PITWA DUNGI

SACHI BOL RHI HOON..
UPDATE FAST
:D

P.S - I M ALSO A LATECOMER 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing amazing amazing...
This chapter was really cute...
Loved...
N I really loved the outfits...cool n hot...paRan ka teasing wala thing was really funny...
Update sooom..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it to core... plz update nxt part soonish
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Posted: 10 years ago
plz update ASAP & PM me when you update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Ajj toh maine saare records tod diye late honenge 😆

sorry!!! plz gussa mat hona abh😛

im really...sorry...laziness ki wajah se nahi late hui per i was stuck with the story...

happy reading 😃

Chapter-9

They finally reached the venue

Sanyukta was about to enter through the huge gate but Randhir stopped her

R-Riya'

S-yeah?'

Randhir forward his hand to her to hold it... Sanyu hesitated at first but then gave her hand in his... both smiled at eachother... and enterd inside hand-in-hand looking like a picture perfect couple

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They entered n found their whole group standing together at a little distance... Randhir n Sanyukta approached them

Y-oye randhir... Tum toh Riya ji ke saath aane wale thee na... toh yeh kaun hai?' he asked looking at the gorgeous girl Randhir had entered in the party with

V-abee oye! Ghanchakkar... Voh Riya hi hai'

Yoyo scaned Sanyu from top to bottom

Y-oye Vidhushi! Kya kuch bhi...yeh Riya ji ho hi nahi sakti'

All gave him confused

S-Yoyo...kyu nahi ho sakti mai Riya Ji???' she raised her eyebrow stressing on Riya ji

Y-aree!!! Yeh toh Riya Ji hi hai' he sounded amazed

V-Toh mai aur kya kehe rahi hu tabse' she narrowed her eyes

Y-Mujhe kya pata tum kya bol rahi ho...jab dekho bak-bak kerti reheti ho'

Vidhushi widened her eyes at his comment

Before she could retort back...Sahil interrupted

Sa-Bas!! Ho gaya abh'

Y-ha ji!! Ho gaya...Sahil chup kara iss billi (vids) ko...Riya ji..vaise aap bahut acchi lag rahe ho' she smiled at his comment

S-Thank U'

Yoyo introduced Ester to Sandhir...later the group found a corner for them...n stood their sipping on their drinks... chitting chatting n enjoying

Suddenly the loud music stopped...earning a groan from the students

"Attention!!!" the loud voice echoed through the hall...Everyone shifted their gaze to the stage n found the students of 4th year n the organizers of the fresher's party standing there...holding a mike ready to speak

"Chotte...nanhee...1st year ke baccho!!!" the voice boomed through the speakers

V-1st year ke bacche??' vidhushi twisted her nose looking at her friends

"ek hi jagha khade hoke baate-shaate bahut ho gayi...abh yaha hoga ek couple dance competition" he shouted earning a loud hoot from the audience... Ha toh ji rules sunn lo...Ek bowl mai hai jodiyon (couples) ke naam...aur dusre mai hai songs...Hum yaha per ek chit couple bowl se nikalenge...aur jiska naam aayge...voh couple iss song bowl mai se ek chit nikalega...aur usper dance karge!!!! Sajhe bacche log???'

The students downstage...shouted a big "YES" all excited for the competition

A-Mazaa ayeega...'she beamed at Parth...while he nodded smiling

S-mujhe dance nahi aata' she lied eyeing Randhir...she was clearly not in a mood to dance

Sa-Koi nahi Riya...Randhir bahut accha dance kerta hai...so he will help u' he winked while Randhir raised the collars of his shirt giving a Im-so-great look...n all broke in fits of laughter

"Abh hum first chit pick kerte hai" the guy choosed a chit from the bowl n opened it

"Ha toh yeh hai...Ekta aur Raj" all clapped while the couple...came on the stage n did their dance

After 3 more performances... The guy announced "Parth and Arpita'

Papita looked at eachother with a shy smile...while the whole gang shouted for them

Sanyu side hugged Arpi before she went to stage with her partner

As the night grew old...may more couples danced on stage earning loud applause from the audience

N finally (the most awaited moment 😆 ) the guy called "Randhir n Riya"

They both smiled the rushed to the stage

R-Riya...pick up a chit'

Sanyu picked a chit...they showed it to the host n went back stage

The lights went dim...n music started


I met a boy and his name is Anjaana

Sanyu enterd the stage lipsing the words...moving with the tune

Anjaani raahon mein ek humsafar mili

Randhir too entered dancing n stood next to her

I met a girl and her name is Anjaani Anjaana

He pointed at Sanyu... keeping his finger on his horhead n twisting it...showing the mad gestur' n showed his tongue

khwab tha, ban gaya zindagi

she hit him on his stomach with her elbow...n winked

Yoon hi hoti hai na

He gave Sanyu a puppy look

Sab ki kahaani

She nodded slightly

Shuru hogi kaha

He moved his hands as if gesturing to ask

Kisi ne na jaani

She shrugged her shoulder

itfaaqon mein, laakhon mein, miltein hain ajnabi

He held her left palm in his right one, He held her waist n her another hand found way on his chest

Anjaana-aa-aa

He moved with her in perfect sync

Anjaani-ee-ee

He swirled her round

Mil gaye-eh-eh

H returned moving with her

toh banee-ee-ee kahaani-ee-ee

he brought her close n smiled

Jeele yoon

He tilted her a little

Jeele ek pal hi jaise jeena ho

He straightened her again

Kal ko phir

He lifted her off her feet

Koi na jaane, na jaane kya ho

She opened her arms...smiling wide

Gham kahan,

He brought her down

Hum yahan hai,

He pinched her nose

Hain khushi aur tu

She giggled

hum agar

he brushed his nose with hers

Hum jo mil jayein toh baatein hongi

She shuddered at the proximity

Phir kahaan Na jaane kab aisi ratein hoongi

He swirled her again

Ab jo hum, sang hain

He held her hand tight

Hai koi jadoo

He picked her

Ab toh fikar naa ho

N swriled round with her in his arms

Gham ka zikar naa ho

He made stand on her feet n nodded softly in no'

Chal yuhi chalte hain

They walked dancing n came at front of the stage

Khatm safar naa ho

They swayed on the song...lisping the lyrics

Lagne lagaa hain kismat ne hi sunli ho Khwaahishein ankaheee

They raised their hand...n entwined their fingers

Anjaana-aa-aa Anjaani-ee-ee

They swayed

Mil gaye-eh-eh toh banee-ee-ee kahaani-ee-ee

He swriled her again

Anjaanas say yeah yeah yeah

She left his hand n went forward...n raised her hands...gesturing all the guys to shout to

All the Anjaanis say yeah yeah yeah

Randhir gave her a look n gestured all the girls to shout

All the Anjaanas All the Anjaanis come on everybody say yeah yeah

Randhir n Sanyu jumped n gestured everyone to join

All the Anjaanas say yeah yeah yeah

The guys shouted

All the Anjaanis say yeah yeah yeah

Girls to shouted

All the Anjaanas All the Anjaanis come on everybody say yeah yeah

Everyone present in the hall hooted while sandhir swayed with eachother

Anjaana-aa-aa Anjaani-ee-ee

Mil gaye-eh-eh toh

banee-ee-ee kahaani-ee-ee

Anjaana-aa-aa Anjaani-ee-ee

Mil gaye-eh-eh toh

banee-ee-ee kahaani-ee-ee

they swayed with perfect snyc...the song ended...n a loud applaud n hooting sound filled the hall...while Sandhir stood their in eachothers' arms gazing in eachother

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Somewhere down in the audience

Girl 1-Hey listen'

Girl 2- hmm'

G1-this guy is hot na??'

G2-yeah!' she answered confused

G1-how will we look together??' she winked

G2-W...What???'

G1-say na...we will make an awesome couple no?'

G2-but he is with that girl... N it seems they r together

G1-As if I care' she shrugged her shoulders

G2-but Ishika...'

G1-oh cut it bebe!!! U just know that he is mine...n I want him...better this girl go to hell' she twisted her nose vaise...what was his name?? umm...Randhir?? Yeah! So Mr Randhir...be ready cuz soon u will be Ishika Khanna's property' she smirked while her friends sighed sadly

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so??? how was it???

Ishika ki ki entry...maarna mat 😆😆

it was pretty long😉

plz tell me how the song sequence was...mera bahut dimaag kharab kiya hai isne 😛

bye-bye

will come back soon😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally yaad aa gya that u r writing this fic also
I thought u forget abut it

This tym u r hell late
Moi very angry with u not going to talk u


Bt update k saath kya gussa
I will cmmnt

It was lovely
Yoyo is really amzng
So funny he makes every scene so awsme
I really like him



Wow dance competition
Sandhir dance sequence was mind blowing
U described everything so well
I can envision

Really enjoyed it a lot


Omg yeh ishika I so hate her aaarrrggghhh yaha b aa gyi
Oh ho rd will be mine property dream on babe
He's only sanyu private property



Plz this is a requsrt yeh ishika k track jldi khtaam kar dena
I cnt tolerate her


Update soon
Wtng


And I'm still angry

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