FF_MANAN_LOVE BY CHANCE PART 2 - PAGE 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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NOTE-(CAN'T STOP MYSELF.. TO WRITE THIS STORY.. BUT THIS IS GOING TO BE. VERY SHORT..FF.. I WILL FINISH IT WITH IN FEW UPDATES :P)

who had not read yet here is the link of my other FF's

1. MADLY_IN_LOVE
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4384148

2. BROKEN_SOUL
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4390968

INDEX-
PAGE 1- INTRODUCTION
PART 1 - PAGE 2
PART 2 - PAGE 2
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Posted: 10 years ago
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INTRODUCTION-

"GRANDPAA HOW U MEAT GRANDMOM PLZ TELL US NA"
A 6 YEAR OLD BOY SITTING ON HIS GRANDFATHER LAP.. ASK HIS GRANDFATHER.. A MAN IN HIS 70'S SMILED AT HIS QUESTION..'CABIR' HOW MANY TIMES U WANT TO LISTEN THE SAME STORY.. HIS MOM ASKED HIM.. MOM U NOW NA IT'S OUR FAVORITE BED TYM STORY.. HE REPLIED BACK TO HIS MOM.. ITS OK NAINTARA.. IF THEY WANT TO HERE IT ONE MORE TYM.. THEY WILL..SAID THE OLD MAN.. BUT PAPA.. NAINTARA WANT TO PROTEST.. I SAID NA OK THEN.. NO MORE FURTHER QUESTIONS.. U GO ND ATTEND UR HUSBAND.. HE MAY BE COMING BACK, HOME.. ANY MINUTE.. U GO.. HE ALMOST ORDER HER.. OK PAPA NAINTARA SIGHED.. SHE KNW ITS USELESS TO ARGUE WITH HIM.. SO SHE JUST LEAVE FROM THERE.. GRANDPAA MOM IS GONE.. PLZ WE WANT TO HEAR UR ND GRANDMAA LUV STORY.. MUKTI .. CABIR SISTER AGAIN ASK HIS GRANDFATHER..MAKING A CUTE PUPPY FACE..
HER GRANDFATHER CHUKLED AT HET CUTE ANTICS ND PULL HER CHEEKS..
'OK DADIAMMA'

WELL THIS IS THE STORY OF MANIK MALHOTRA ND HIS WIFE NANDANI MANIK MALHOTRA.. THE MAN WHO IS GOING TO NARRATE THE STORY IS OUR VERY OWN.MANIK MALHOTRA..
SHOULD I CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY??
Edited by masoomii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ohh h wow! This is something new so plz continue :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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intro was good
continue soon
waiting for ur update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART-1
Manik starts to narrate his story .. His nd his nandani story to his grandchildrens..before he start his story there was a pin drop silence in his room
He look at his grandchildren faces.. al were silently looking at him..he smile while luking at them..
MANIK- so sorry started when we get married.. nd,ur grandmom...
Before he complete his sentence.. a voice came..
No dadu.. u.always do cheating.. nd tell us half story.. We want to listen from start.. Haina cabbu bhaiyu.. it was alia.. his youngest grandchild
Right aloo.. cabir mukti said together...
Alia ran to them.. nd sit on other syd of manik lap..
daddu u never tell us how u met dadi.. It was dhruv.. MANIK daughter naina son
Manik sighs luking at these four monsters sitting in front of him..
Manik- ohk if u ar done with ur complaint then.. shall I start
All four together yes..
Manik close his eyes.. nd was lost in memories of nandani.. nandani his love his lyf.. his everything...!!!

FLASHBACK..!!!
DAD MOM ... NANDANI was shouting on her top of voice.calling her mom dad.. today was her engagement ..nd she was really really happy.. it was her dream.. to get married to a boy.. Whom she wanted.. To married since from her clg day ... Rahul.. Her dad best friend son.. nd her friend too..nandani dad mom came around when they heared nandani calling them..
Nandani mom - what happen baby.. Why ar u screaming..??
Nandani dad- is everything ok beta??
Nandani- offo mom dad aap khamkha tension lete ho.. I called u to inform u guys.. that after engagement im going on worldtour.. it was a surprise gift by my friends.. As they knw I always wanted to go on world tour before my weeding.
Nandani mom- but how can u go lyk this?? What will ur inlows think abt u..
Nandani- God mom..hw u always do this.. Unko kya problem hoga??
Nandani dad - have u told rahul abt ur world tour..
Nandani- offcourse dad. nd use kya problem hoga.. Mai apni personal lyf mai kuch bhi karu.. Isse usko koi issue nhi hona chahiye..
Nandani mom- but beta he is ur would be husband
Nandani- so what mom..he is my friend too..he will understand.. Ok bye mom..
Im going parlour.. I'll get ready there.. Nd wahi say mai venue bhi aa jaugi..
Nandani dad ok beta..
Meanwhile she got call from rahul..
Nandani- hey handsome..
Rahul- hey beautiful excited??
Nandani- not at all..
Rahul-sadly) ok
Nandani-laughs) I was joking yr.. super excited
Rahul- laughs) ur such a.. anyway see u at engagement ceremony.. Bye luv u loads..
Nandani- same 2 u bye..
They hangedup there call

PRESENT..!!
Cabir- what dadu.. dadi was going to engage sumone else..
Manik- yes beta..
Mukti- to engagement hui
Manik- yes..
All 4 little monster bcm sad..
Ohhh!!!

TO BE CONTINUED...!!!!!!!!!!!


Finish writing frst part tell mee guys hwz it???!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutebesties

intro was good
continue soon
waiting for ur update


updated dear :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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continue soon plzzz.how manik & nandhini met & how thy fell in love thr marriage childrens.lots of thoughts running im my mind.update soon plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow
awesome concept
plz continue nd pm me plz
post nxt part soon
can't wait till long
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 2



FLASHBACK
Nandani engagement ceremony time was 8 in the
night nd she reached on her own engagement
one hour late..she was wearing peach colour
gown. And was wearing some light weight
matching jewellery with it.her mom pulled her
corner before she could reach on stage..
Nandani mom- Nandani how irresponsible you
are apni engagement pr koi late ata hai..? Kya
soch rhe honge tere in laws..??
Nandani- turn her face to look at her in laws..
They are not at all looking happy at all.. ) chill
mom I'll manage them...
She headed toward stage..
Her would be mother in law was standing on
stage with rahul..she is not looking at al happy
with this engagement..actually she didn't lyk
Nandani at all because of her free mind
nature..she was against this marriage ..but
agreed to it because of her son.
Nandani,mother,in law- taunt,her) u forget time
of your own engagement ceremony?
Nandani- actually mom..
Nandani mother in law- when u get married to
my son only then u can call mee mom u got
that..
Rahul - relax,mom I knw u don't,lyk nandani but
for my sake can u plz try to accept her atleast as
my would be wife?
Nandani mother in law- I am trying to do that
only.. But she need to understand her
responsibilities.. As ur fiance nd my would be..
Ask her why came late on her own engagement..
Rahul- look at nandani for answer..
Nandani- I got struck in traffic she lied
(masoomii forget to tell u guys nandani has done
ph.d in lying :P ) (she actually met her old friend
on parlour.. Then she get engross in chit chatting
with her nd actually forget today is her
engagement) (masoomi want to tell u guys she
just luv talking nd she doesn't need a topic for
that :P)
Nandani mother in law felt guilty for accusing her
without any reason..
Nandani mil- im sorry..
Rahul knw her very well -that she is lying.. But
he prefer to stay quite.. Till engagement
ceremony got over..
Nandani mom dad come on stage with there
engagement rings.. Nd hand over rings to them.
Nandani mom did there tilak.. Nd they both
exchange there rings..guest come one by one nd
congratulate them.. Nandani friends uploaded her
engagement pictures on Facebook in no time..
After cermony nandani came back home with her
parents nd drop herself on bed nd slept.. Next
morning she had to leave for delhi airport...her
friends already done her packing. She came out
from room wearing white colour loose t-shirt
revealing her belly button with black colour tight
fitted jeans. Rahul was already present in hall..
he had come to drop her on airport.. Nandani
parents friends all came together to see off her..
They were on airport nandani was looking quite
irritated because of her mom.. she
was,continuously giving her lectures..
Not to do this not to do that not to talk to
strangers specially with boys..her friends
handover there list of things which they wanted
as gifts..
There was a boy who was present on airport..
Who was listening there silly talks with
amusement .. He didn't saw nandani face only
her back was visible to him.. Neither nandani
saw him..
Nandani - irritated) relax mom I understood
everything stop repeating it again nd again.. see
everyone is looking at us..
Nandani mom - had tears in her eyes) saw what
my daughter is going away from mee for a long
mnth.. ab kya mujhe fikar bhi ni hogi..
There was announcement for Nandani flight..
Which is abt to take off in 5 min..
Nandani- hug her mom.. Ok mom plz now don't
cry im going for mnth then I'll come back to u
only..she hug her dad..rahul plz take care of
mom dad..
Rahul- sure nandani.. Nd u take care of urself
There was a final announcement nandani pick up
her bag nd ran toward plane..
nandani mom - screams) mujhe daily call krna
Nandani-screams back) ok mom
Soon she vanished from everyone sight..
INSIDE PLANE
She look after her seat saw a boy was sleeping
on her seat his face was covered with
hanky..Nandani thought this is my seat how can
he sleep on my seat ..
Nandani- excuse mee mr this my seat.. Ur
sleeping on my seat.. She tried to wake him up
Boy- no response
Nandani- hello ar u listening to mee?
Boy- still no response
Nandani- hesitantly poke his shoulder
Boy- didnt move a inch..
Nandani- shake him with both hands
Boy finally wake up nd remove hanky from his
face nd clean his nose with it
Nandani- felt disgusted..) ewww
Boy- did u said anything to mee? Actually mujhe
cold hai..
Nandani- still eeww. Look on her face) this is my
seat can u plz move away from my seat?
Boy- no
Nandani- why?
Boy- first give mee ur intro?
Nandani- excuse mee why on earth im going to
give u my intro to u.. I didn't even knw ur name..
Boy- ohh lyk that im manik malhotra I told u to
give ur intro Bcz this plane is going uk
Nandani- yeah so what?
Manik- im going uk ur also going uk
Nandani- confused toh..??
Manik- he cleaned his nose with his palms)
(nandani again felt disgusted) (again her
expressions changed to eww one) toh he pointed
on seat. next to Nandani seat this is my seat im
going,to sit,with u in entire journey so I need to
know ur name na..
Nandani- rolled her eyes.. I am nandani..
Nandani murthy..
Manik- smiles) pretty name he extended his hand
for hand shake
But nandani move back its ok
Nandani-its ok..
Manik- showed her his hands) mere hath pe
kuch lga hua hai..
Nandani- recalled what he was doing few
minutes back) no nothing lyk that can u plz move
away ur hands plz
Manik- ok he move away his hands
Nandani- sighs nd sit on her seat
Manik- again showed her his hands are u sure u
don't have any problem with my hands
Nandani- close her eyes in frustration) little move
back.. Can u plz move ur hands.. from mee..(she
pulled out sanitizer from her bag..nd gave it to
manik) clean ur hands with this..
Manik- look at sanitizer) but why
Nandani- annoyed) can u plz clean ur hands
with,this
Manik- ohh knw I understood tumhe germs
bacteria say problem hai?
Nandani- what? No nothing lyk that just clean ur
hands
Manik- ok he cleaned his hands with sanitizer
finally..(nandani took s deep sigh) now u can
shake hand with mee I cleaned my hands he
showed her his hands
Nandani- gave him a forced smile yeah..she
hesitantly shake hand with manik..
To be continued..!!
Edited by masoomii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Haha... Awesome...
Grandpaa manik n grandmaa nandini ...


Soo damn awesome yaar...
I really cudnt imagine nythng lyk dis eva cumin up...

Just soo loved ua stry especially deir intro... The way dey frst met... Seriously lol...


I neva knew manik malhotra can eva b soo dirty...

M soo lovin it...plz cont soon...
N pm me if possible

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