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Hello everyone.. Its my first NiBir writting... I am not good when it comes to write stories so please read this at your own risk 🤣
I was listening to this song and NiBir flashbacks from the Hospital came in my mind and I knew that this song is perfect .. So I just wrote it down or elese it would keep giving me headaches 😆 so now I am going to give you headache by posting this OS ...😆 And yaa I haven't proof read it so please ignore the mistakes😛


Das Dae ..

Nisha.. His Nisha was there fighting for her life... Though she proved him innocent but she risked her own for this.. Seeing her in ICU he felt something.. Something which he couldn't understand what it was.. He felt that his own life is at sake.. It was difficult for him to breathe .. He just closed his eyes and tried to calm himself so that he could figureout what feeling was it...

Das dae ve rabba saanu das dae
Kyun rou pende nain jadon hansde
Das dae ve rabba saanu das dae
Kyun rou pende nain jadon hansde

Kivein sahaanga tutte khwaban da nuksaan
Kivein sahaanga tutte khwaban da nuksaan
Unglaan te reh gaye chhalleyan de nishan
Unglaan te reh gaye chhalleyan de nishan
Das de ve rabba saanu das de
Kyun rou pende nain jadon hansde

As he closed his eyes all flashbacks came in his mind.. When he saw her first time she was crying because Viraj had blamed her for playing with his feelings for breaking his trust...


He remembered how the met on that trip.. When
they saved Chandu.. When she didn't think even once about her own safety of her life.. She was so self-less.. Chandu was a complete stranger for her still she was ready to risk her own life to save her...

Naal naal tur de hoyan raahan kat gayiaan
Ohde baajon meriyan saahan ghat gayiaan
Naal naal tur de hoyan raahan kat gayiaan
Ohde baajon meriyan saahan ghat gayiaan

Zindagi nu kho ke jeena nahi aasaan
Zindagi nu kho ke jeena nahi aasaan
Unglaan te reh gaye chhalleyan de nishan
Unglaan te reh gaye chhalleyan de nishan
Das de ve rabba saanu das de
Kyun rou pende nain jadon hansde

He remembered how they got married in that Samuhik Vivaah to save Chandu.. He remembered how concerned she was for him when he came home with Papa after he saved him from BhabhiJi and her goons.. He remembered the time they got married again infornt of the family ..

He remembered how she stood for him .. Against everyone.. Against her family .. Her Dadaji.. He remembered how she fought with Sumit to prove him innocent.. And she did it... He remembered how she was hanging on the bamboo when he reached there.. He remembered how her hand slipped from his hand...

Hathaan vicho jadon ohde hath mera chutteya
Ki dasaan laqeeran vichon kujh si tutteya
Hathaan vichi jadon ohde hath mera chutteya
Ki dasaan laqeeran vichon kujh si tutteya

Taqdeeran nu jodan waali koi nahi dukaan
Taqdeeran nu jodan waali koi nahi dukaan
Unglaan te reh gaye chhalleyan de nishan
Unglaan te reh gaye chhalleyan de nishan
Das de ve rabba saanu das dae
Kyun rou pende nain jadon hansde

He saw Nisha's smiling face ... Her mischevious eyes.. That innocent smile .. A smile appeared on his face as soon as he thought about those happy moments they spent together.. He couldn't see her like this.. He couldn't see his LOVE like this... Yes he loved her...

Kivein sahaanga tutte khwaban da nuksaan
Kivein sahaanga tutte khwaban da nuksaan
Unglaan te reh gaye chhalleyan de nishan
Unglaan te reh gaye chhalleyan de nishan
Das de ve rabba saanu das de
Kyun rou pende nain jadon hansde

She will come back... She has to come back for him.. For his love... His love will bring her back to him...

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Please leave your comments and likes😳
I'll accept you jhutas and chappals also but only size 6🤣
And no tomatos please because I hate them🤢
And eggs bhi nahi because I am pure vegetarian🤣

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice song dr!!
well written!👏
Edited by ..krystal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it..very well written..!!!! 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing OS Niya 😊

Well wriiten😃
P.s Take some chappals (size 6) from my side for saying that ur os is not good and will give us a headache !
🤣🤣🤣🤣
Edited by arviabhigya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaara610

Loved it..very well written..!!!! 😛

Thank you 🤗😃
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Niyaji very well written
U should write more
I liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: P_shah

Niyaji very well written
U should write more
I liked it

Thanks Peru I'll try to write more 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice one dear!😉
well written
do write more!

waise i thought of taking u to Spain's la Tomatina for honeymoon🤣🤣🤣
ready to go?🤣🤣🤣
Edited by anulovessarun - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..krystal

nice song dr!!

well written!👏

Thanks😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Amazing OS Niya 😊

Well wriiten😃
P.s Take some chappals (size 6) from my side for saying that ur os is not good and will give us a headache !
🤣

Thank you I am ready to accept it🤣

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