IshRa OS: Climax [Consummation] (Attempted: Dark. Mature.) Edit #1

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columbia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

I like it.. It's like those knots in a thin threads.. The more you try and open the more they knot!

Nice really nice!

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Kiara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ABBY92
More than anything, this was hauntingly beautiful. I could feel Ishita's pain and longing for Raman's love.

I am officially lost for words.

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Read it ! Knowing you, i thought this would be way more darker and explicit.

Waiting for you to edit again. 🤗

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Kiara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: meenu_taarey
hmmm
lovely os

Thanks. But rereading it.. I feel not. 😆

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

I thought I had commented long ago but turns out I was wrong so here I am.

As I read, I found it getting better. The realistic way of taking things. He was avoiding her and she was bent on healing him. The yearn to belong and just be together. And when he said, "you should have asked for more" that did it for me.

An absolute treat it was. Why have you styipped writing now?! Okay, exams. I remember.

It looks like the real characters are now only to be found in such masterpieces, highly disappointed in the show and its characters.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Pretty Dark. But, was worth a read. You presented it really well, kudos to that. :)

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Kiara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

And I found this. Wow.

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