ArHi SS#3:One Winter.COMPLETED. Replies:Pg 72. 24/3,01/4,22/4, 30/05 - Page 67

Even though I joined the adventure of your story a bit late but I enjoyed reading every single update and I admire your effort to respond every single comment.

HI. I had your story when you started but then studies took me away.

I have no idea how did I miss the ending :(

I loved the conversation between Aakash, Khushi and Manorama...by the going of things I'd have expected either one of them to explain everything to Aaksah and Manorama was even ready for that but I loved it that they protected the secret between themselves and reached a truce with Aakash

And the secret itself! God Saiyu... why didn't I think of it?I had considered so many complicated scenarios (Now don't ask mte what because they're wrong anyway and I don't remember much) but this one... next time you write a story I want to be able to find your mystery bas! And now I have to go through the chapters to find the clues you said you left?

Having your nephew asleep in a bundle in your hands is the best feeling ever. I loved that situation... their conversation was just so mature considering their ages... and seriously was it even necessary to inform their elders officially that they were dating? Like he said they've been caught in awkward positions a lot of times for that :P

So many dears'? Because Khushi said it was nice when he called her that? The ring was so beautiful especially so when he so endearingly told her that it was bought with the little money he had earned by working... monetary value doesn't determine the actual value of the gift ... The promise of hamesha ... So dreamy

So Aman and Savita finally? I tried so hard to put a face to them ... I failed 😭

And finally I loved the way how the ending of the story was similar to the beginning in extremely different circumstances... The story began with Khushi swinging, Arnav jogging, Manorama watching and ended in the same swing ... A comical character from the show and you made her the center here... I don't know the original character so without comparison I would say that your characterization of Manorama was fantastic! And even though Mama didn't have much space he played his part well... I wish the show had handled these characters better too

Finally... I'm so sorry for taking so long to read and comment Saiyu .. Really sorry

And again I wish you come up with another story soon. This story of yours brought out the reader in me once again after a long time and it was a feel good read. Thanks for that 🤗

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Hi..I am Radhika.

Finally got to read this!!!!
School got me so busy
So sad that this story is over...I enjoyed reading it

Amazing and an extremely fresh piece of work. The characters were awesome. Not black or white but with shades of grey. Extremely realistic. Btw, your opinion of Pakistani shows mirrors mine! I loved ZGH and Ghazala! I could feel the hill station vibe when I was reading your story. Loved it! Please do write more often. And PM me your stories. You did justice to each character you brought into your story. The story was well woven with no loopholes. I loved all the banners and the extra effort that you and some people did to give us those pictures! Amazing!

A good read. Aaungi aur likhne kl. Abhi ninni aarI :P