New Sandhir FF - Mr. Homemaker

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Posted: 11 years ago
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OK so i had a few ideas before i kind of absconded from here... and this is one among them... do tell me if i should continue...


Part 1

Friday Night, 1 A.M, Cherry Night Club, Melbourne

A girl clad in a black tight fit jean and blue tube top was grooving to an old song "Friday on my mind" which went like this

Monday morning feels so bad
Everybody seems to nag me
Comin' Tuesday I'll feel better
Even my old man looks good
Wednesday just won't go
Thursday goes too slow
I've got Friday on my mind

She was surrounded by a number of girls and guys who were following her steps in sync. Suddenly she stopped dancing and went up to a guy and said "Where is your girlfriend dude?"

"We fought!" "What? Again? Why?" "Well she didn't wanna come with me tonight to this club. And do you even know what reason she gave me?" he asked bewildered to which the girl just shook her head while she emptied a shot of tequila. "I might be highly modern, but my family is not. And am not that modern to spend the whole night with you. Am an Indian basically Parth!!!!" the guy mimicked his girlfriend.

The girl laughed out loud, leaving a bunch of guys to drool over her again and she said "Parth!! Vids is a sweetheart. But don't you think you were too early to propose? I mean how did you even propose to her within a week? Seriously?"

"Hey she was amazing. I mean she still is. I know its her. But... Gosh!!! Now I actually do feel she might not get along with my lifestyle." Parth whined

"See am always right BFF!!!" the girl replied and patted her friend on his back

"Hmmm how is it going along with Steve?" Parth asked changing the topic

"Steve!!!!!!!" she dreamed. "Yup he is awesome as always. And he is all smitten by me. But... am not sure if he is the guy."she replied frowning

"Haha... This you say everytime. Right from high school. I guess you would get married to whom uncle aunty see." He teased her

"Never" came her instant reply "My prince charming will be of my choice" she said and continued "Chalo lets dance" she got up and pulled Parth and the two were dancing like maniacs.

Suddenly the dance floor went silent and everyone stopped dancing immediately and looked towards the DJ. "Hey. What's up dude!! Keep playing the numbers" came a sassy lady's voice

"I want Parth and Sanyukta to come along with me right this instance" came a raging voice which shocked both Sanyukta and Parth. The next second people made way to let the owner of the voice enter deeper into the club in search of the two people for whom he had come. On spotting them, he walked up to them and caught their hands and dragged them out of the club.

On reaching the parking lot, Sanyukta jerked her hands away and yelled "Dad!!! Don't you have manners. Is this the way you pull your daughter out?"

"Not a word young woman! Everything can be talked at home. And Parth I will be dropping you home en-route. NO more questions or arguments." The man replied sternly but his voice had mellowed a little.

After dropping Parth at his house, Sanyukta's dad drove to their house which was just a few minutes away. Upon reaching Sanyukta got down in anger and slammed the door pretty hard and her dad let out a chuckle as she had got this only from him.

"Mom! Mom!" she shouted. A lady came out of her room putting her hair in a bun and said "Aa gayi maharani? Itna chilla kyun rahe ho aap?"

"Just stop irritating me mom by talking in hindi. And what the hell dad? Why did you have to do that?" she yelled on top of her voice

"Betiyan ghar ke andar hote hain iss waqt!" came his reply

"Ugh! Why this restriction? Just coz am a girl? You never stopped Ankit!" and she regretted her words

"Yes we didn't, and we are repenting that now!" replied her dad calmly

"I didn't mean to talk about him. But he's my brother. And I cant let go off him the way he did." She replied nearly crying.

"Hmmm.. its ok. Go and sleep darling. Its almost 3 now. We will talk in the morning." Her mother lovingly said

"No way!!! I want to clear the mess right away!!! Why did you drag us like that from the club? Do you have any idea what others would be thinking about us?" she yelled again

"We had to talk to you. Its something urgent!!" her dad replied

"Urgent? You could have called dad or WA"she said

"And you would have picked up your cell? In that loud noise? And in WA your last seen was 9 PM." Her mom said a little harshly

"Hmm what was so urgent?" she said understanding that there was no other mode of communication to her

"Gussa mat karo Sanyu. Par hum kal India jaa rahe hain. Wait let me complete fully before you start your banter!" her father said and raised his hands calling for peace. Once she nodded he continued "Beta Devki maasi is in her last stage. She wants all her children and grandchildren to be with her at this time. I know you love her and you wont mind coming along with us." Her dad stated

"But office?" she asked

"Didn't you tell me that your boss was busy with some merger stuff and so he had given a week's off?" asked her mom

"Hmmm... And Ankit?" she asked

"Yes he is coming as well. After all he is dadi's fav" gleamed her mother. Sanyukta nodded her head and went off to her room. After she had reached her room, her parents continued to discuss "Kishor I hope she will forgive us for what we are doing"

"Of course Anju. Its high time she gets hitched." Replied Kishor


PS: Please like the prologue and send me buddy request if you are not in my list to receive pm's when i update if you guys like the story... thank you in advance... 😊😳


Index

Part 2 Part 11

Part 3 Part 12

Part 4 Part 13

Part 5 Part 14

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9

Part 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Interesting..very interesting 👏
I really liked Sanyukta's character
Gosh she's not that boring atleast here 😆
And what's with this forgiving thing
Excited:D
Update soon :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Wow new story

I loved the starting

Sanyu a spoilbrat
Lives in her own wrld

Loved parth and sanyu bond


Omg sanyu dad literally dragged them out from the pub



They e planning to get her hitched without her knowledge
This is gonna be intrstng

Wtng for update

Do update soon

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
This is unbelievable, you are back again, this is awesome, please keep blessing us with awesome stuff, and I can't wait to read it...
So they are taking her to get married, this is super awesome...
Yet one memorable love story to remember is on the way, won't miss even one update..
But please do update soon..

Prishi

P.S I hope you remember me ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Interesting story
Continue soon

Thanks for PM
Keep writing
Keep smile

Love
Sejal :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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another fantastic start dear. prologue looks quite interesting. sanyu is a spoilbrat who lives her life according to her. she is waiting for her prince charming. but whats her parent is hiding with her. I think they r getting her married. n this ll b hell interesting. do update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
interesting prolongue

thanx for pm
continue asap :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
wow...new story with new concept
it looks quite interesting...
superb starting
plz do pm me😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
awsm update..loved it..cant wait to read d next part!! Do update soon..😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
prologue is intresting
plzz update soon

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