~His First Love~ 2 Part 31 (Pg 134) OCT 23 Note on 140

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Samanika

@SpringBreakers

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1081

Originally posted by: chandgothia

now if u write amazingly den we have to prasie u...update soon...desparately waiting for it...

❤️❤️

Awww

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Samanika

@SpringBreakers

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1082

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Awesome Sammy... Love entire chapter... this chapter is cutest out of all...

Bhavi Di!🤗 Thanks a lot! I am glad you loved the chapter!😳

they both are so sweet... and romantic... ...

Aww😳😳

the way Jodha told him can I sleep with you tonight... Jalal ka jackpot...

😉😳

then dinner date... she got dressed in pink dress... aww god the way you describe detail... mar java yaar... I imagine how preety Jodha looked... How Jalal controlled...

Aww..Thanks a lot!🤗

I thought at the night something hot will happen but.. this too are pretty good controlling...

Haan, they will wait for some more time😉

but they sweetly sleep while hugging... I love how caring Jalal is...he made her breakfast... so cute...

Best hot part... putting lotion on Jodha's back...really hot... love it superb yaar...

☺️☺️☺️☺️

Sorry for late comment... I will soon read next chapter and comment...😃

Aww...its okay! Comment whenever you have the time!😳

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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#1083

Hey sammy... 😊 Cheer up GIRL... You are one of the best writers I have come across... 😛 You have no idea what magic your STORY has build up on this FORUM... 😳 All of US love to read your creation... It's not just you who is working hard on thsi chapter, but also who have worked even more hard to keep waiting for the NEW UPDATE... 😛 SO never do you think that we aren't interested in reading your FF... You are JAAN of this Forum my frnd... Just keep WRITING... We are eagerly waiting for the NEW CHAPTER... 😃 JUST KEEP SMILING... WE ALL LOVE YOU TONS!!!!! ❤️

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Ashwini

@LekhSha

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#1084

Dear,

Please don't put an end to this amazing story it has lot of potential to go further. I can understand studies is the main priority.

Please write a chapter when ever you get time and feel like writing it.

If we are only feeling like this , i know as a author how you would have felt saying this.

Thank you

Ashwini

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nadja

@nadja_love-91

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#1085

wow it's great to tros really love❤️ what you did, and I 'm all there is to know how everyone will react when😳 he will know that Jodha and jalal are lovers😳❤️ of both but especially the family Jodha ( his father and mother).
update please!!!!😭😭😭😭😭😳

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Samanika

@SpringBreakers

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#1086

Originally posted by: nadja_love-91
wow it's great to tros really love❤️ what you did, and I 'm all there is to know how everyone will react when😳 he will know that Jodha and jalal are lovers😳❤️ of both but especially the family Jodha ( his father and mother).
update please!!!!😳

Thanks a lot dear! I am glad you loved this story! Will update soon!😳