Arhi SS : Chemistry #2 [ Completed : IMP NOTE : Pg 148 : 7/3 ] - Page 58

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Posted: 10 years ago
Okay Mints-ve, I guess I will be the only one who is in minority who kind of didn't like this update. Don't get wrong - the way you write is awesome and there is no doubt on that and I throughly enjoyed your writing. However where I am lost is that Arnav making love to Khushi before marriage - I gather that he did that to make Khushi forget Shyam's dirty touch but I didn't expect him to go till the end. I expected him to console her and they indulge in some romantic talks where he proposes to Khushi and Khushi accepts it and then they get married. But Arnav really went high speed and made love to Khushi. I hope you can write out about this when you write Arnav's POV. What made him jump everything and make love to Khushi - Was it just to assure her that he is hers and to make her forget Shyam's touch.

Looking forward to the next update and also the epilogue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome
nice update
in need in sorrow we girl's just need our man's touch love care
that what arnav is doing
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ahhh what a beautiful update dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it. I'm so happy that Khushi realized how her pushing Arnav was not only wrong but how it has affected him. And the best part is that she understood that she needed him to let go off the pain she has been holding since that incident.
I loved the poolside of Shantivan. I too want to take a dip in it. Waise bhi it's so hot here. Arnav's idea to take her out was definitely good. It not only bridged the gap which had come between them post launch but also helped Khushi from her self imposed solitude.
The pain and trauma such incident incurs on the victim and her loved ones is immense. Not everyone is lucky like Khushi to have a lover like Arnav and her family who supported her completely.
And finally they confessed their love in clear words leaving no ambiguity here. Sometimes hard times make us do the biggest realizations.
Thank you so much.. Good that you decided to go for one more chapter 😳 Abhi bahut kuch baaki hai😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update...
totally loved the way you have described khushi's state and Arnav's love for her...

the way finally Khushi was able to overcome her fear and share everything with Arnav...

beautiful confession
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was amazing update
Loved it
Thanks for pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
i just loveddd the update...
finally they are together...a perfect Hamesha...
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Posted: 10 years ago
😭
😭

You had me crying almost! Not to scare you, I have my board exam tomorrow and I was literally exhausted from head to toe, then I opened your PM and saw the update (I had almost forgotten that you had written giving an update on Monday) and I started reading and God Bless you for having such brilliant writing skills. The love making part was the most unexpected and when I read I was in such an awe that it had me all emotional I wanted to hug you that moment 😆
Again, the update was sensual, romantic, emotional where Arnav got a bit touchy on Khushi for not letting him in and overall it was mind blowing. <3
I wish we had an emoji who's mind was blowing (just in case to show the correct emotion we are feeling 😳)

So yeah, you are finishing both your stories, will you start any other? I desperately wish you to do so plisss!😊
Lots of Love <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful n Passionate update..
Loved it <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello,
This is my first time reading your story. I don't know where I found it, but as soon as I opened the thread, I have been reading non stop. They were a good few hours.

Absolutely loved it. Simply fantastic. This story was all about the couple and their developing relationship. I loved the simplicity of story telling at the same I loved the complexity of the emotions.

You are a terrific writer. And look at that in your signature I found your index. In the next few days I will be reading all of it.

It was a pleasure reading this one. Can't wait for Thursday.

Anvha
Edited by anvha - 10 years ago

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