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Posted: 11 years ago
Anju as I promise read part 5 to 8 in one go.Sorry for late reading. Back to story Raman was fighting in regal process but not working and he came up with wonderful idea to steal his daughter from school by the help of Romi and Mihir. I really love the convo that Romi talk to Raman. Romi vehave like young teenager but his taught is big and it is right. He said to take Ruhi is not only take her away from her Mom but It take away of her world of childhood she have to hide and cannot contact with other people and still have to move around. she not deserve this kind of life that Ramna did not think or prepare so far his taught only to get Ruhi for himself and just get out of it. Cause he lost his time for 5 years not be with her so he want to catch up time with her and in wrong process. Your daughter writing was so good such young age she can describe the emotion of different characters what should they be really great.you must be very proud of her dear. Ok now I catch up all the chapter waiting to see it is going to be smooth like their planning or not. Will wait for next part. To be honest the start of this story made me feel like serious case but it is turn out to be this kind of love story from father. The last two more question no Ishu till now in this story is she going to be here and the other one who is the women that Raman help her? Sorry for long writing but all sum of 4 parts review together.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
un res... akirti dear u r super talented.. each one of ur characters are distinctive individual... awww i love romi😳atlast ruhi smiled...my favs hav been quoted already i think.. let me go through once again😊

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