manan ff: is it love? ( ch 16 pg 32)important note pg 35

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As in the program same characters
Manik-19 years old college hunk,a bully and he loves his family and friends. He is very stubborn and arrogant.
Nandini- a 19 years old college beauty ,she is simple but rich and loves her amms the most in her family. She is arrogant stubborn and does what she wishes to do.
Cabir- manik's bestie and a group member of fab 5.
Navya - small town girl and nandini's bestie in space. She fears the fab 5 as they bully everyone.
Multi,alya,dhruv -members of fab 5.

Precap:
In Australia
Kalpana murthy(nandu mom):nandu get ready beta we have to leave for the airport we are late.
Sanjay murthy(nandu dad): arey kya hua sab kuch pack Kar liya na? He told sounding sad don't leave anything here we will not come back to Australia we are going to sell this house and settle in Mumbai.
Nandini bedroom
Nandu was crying when her mom enters looking sad
Kalpana: nandu kya hua beta kyu ro rahi ho?</font>
Nandu:Maa I don't want to leave Australia ,this house ,my friends :( :'( .
Kalpana:nandu this is a phase of life bacha you should learn to face it and be strong.
Nandu: but ma how will I adjust in Mumbai , the lifestyle there is completely different ma
Kalpana: bacha Learn to adjust with situations we have to go to Mumbai as your amms is not keeping well these days. She said looking sadly.
and friends you can make new friends there .we are sending you to India's best music college S.P.A.C.E .now be a good girl and come down we have to leave, don't leave any of your things here . i will go look at your brother .saying this she shut the door behind her
Nandu thinking: aiyappa give me strength that I am able to adjust there even after living in Australia for 17 years.
She tries to smile and takes her bags and goes down to the car.
In the airport
The checking in was going on as Sanjay was talking to airport staff and telling them the reason to migrate.
In plain
Nandu thinking: this is a new start of my life I hope it turns out good.

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Hi guys I don't know if you will accept my story I am trying to make it epic and as I hated nyonika being a bitch I thought she should be a great mom please do comment on how you like it and also whether I should continue
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As of now
index
Chapter 1- page 1
Chapter 2- page 2
Chapter 3- page 2
Chapter 4- page 4
Chapter 5- page 5
Chapter 6- page 7
Chapter 7- page 9
Chapter 8- page 11
Chapter 9- page 12
Chapter 10 part A- page 14
chapter 10 B-page 16
chapter 11-page 17
chapter 12-page 19
chapter 13-page 21
chapter 14-page 23
Chapter 15-pg 29
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awsm cs and concept
cont soon
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Hi i am new my name is Angela
Wow it surely is a nice topic plsss start it soon
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Nice start!!!
Loved your way of nyonika making a good mother!!!
Nyc storyline!!!
Keep writing!!!
Continue soon!!!
N plzz PM me your story if u can!!!
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Nice start ... i love ur concept.. update soon
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Thank you guys for the appreciation I will continue soon:)
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Chapter 2
In Mumbai
Maniks house :
Nyonika malhotra(manik's mom): manik get up your getting late for college. Hurry up wake up . oh god why do you sleep so late at night. Get up manik.
Manik: ma just some more time please.
Seeing him sleep like a baby she smiled.
Nyonika: no enough your late get up.
Saying this she poured water on his face :p
Manik: Maa what yaar sone do na.
Nyonika: aur pani dalo? She asked him.
Manik: nahi nahi mei jaa raha hu .
he got up in sleepy mood and went into the bathroom.
Nyonika left the room with a giggle.
Meanwhile in space:
Cabir: arey yeh manik kaha hai aaj toh definitely wo pitega raghav ke hato . cabir told the rest of the fab 5 members in tension.
Meanwhile raghav enters the class all of them take their places.
Manik ran to the classroom as he was late
Manik: sir, may I come in.
Raghav: you are again late manik, for a musician punctuality maters the most, but you , you are not at all punctual. Manik interrupted him
Manik: sir, I know all this you don't need to tell, now may I enter. He told in an irritated way.
Raghav: yes come in . class we will have a new student joining she is from Australia and she is the daughter of the famous scientist Dr Sanjay murthy. She will join us from tomorrow probably.
At the airport
Mahesh murthy (nandu chachu): arey is the plane late yeh log abhi tak aaye kyu nahi.
Radhika murthy(nandu chachi): arey murthy ji wo log apna luggage le rahe honge aap tension mat lejiye . lo wo aagaye ab khush? She said waving vigorously at them
Kalpana: kaise hai aap ? Sab thik to hai?
Mahesh: hum theek hai. Plane ki journey kaise thi ?
Sanjay : ha chote Sab theek tha. Amma kaisi hai?
Radhika: arey nandu rishu tum log kitne bade ho Gaye ho.
They touch chacha and chachi feet
Mahesh and Radhika: khush raho .
Ab chalo murthy ji gadi leke aao.
Nandu thinking: aiyappa I hope everything goes good.
They reach murthy mansion .
The kaka came and took the luggage in.
They all sat and spoke of the journey
Rishu showed them their presents from Australia. When suddenly kalpana got call.
Kalpana: hello? Yes kaun.
Nyonika: arey wah you forgot your buddy na kalpana tu ruk jab milenge tab thuje nahi jodungi.
Kalpana: oye hoye meri nika kaisi ho. She told with a big smile on her face
Nyonika: meri nunu main thik ho. Sanjay kaisa hai how are the kids. Is rishu fine his attacks and all gone kya?
Kalpana: yes yes sanju is fine how is veer . yes rishu is also fine we gave him proper treatment in Australia :) come home na waise how is your son manik right? How is he?
Nyonika: yes I will definitely come home veer and manik both are healthy gods grace :)
Kalpana: OK meet you soon yes bye:)
Nandu thinking: nika? Who is she ? Veer and manik who are all of them I don't remember anything . I'll ask ma when she finishes thinking
Nandu: ma who is nika? Manik? And veer? Who are they?
Sanjay: arey nandu they are our friends you don't remember kya you used to play with manik when you were small.
Nandu: no pa I don't remember.
Kalpana: its OK when u meet them today you will know. Sanju they are coming at 7 today. Kaka today get all nice dishes made tike?
Meanwhile malhotra mansion
Manik walks in with fab 5
Dhruv cabir alya mukti: hi aunty
Nyonika: hello beta aap upar jao mei snacks bhej thi hu.
Veer veer kaha ho tum. Aaj Hume murthy's ke yaha Jana hai. Manik be ready at 7 OK murthy's are very punctual.
Manik: yes mom.
He starts practicing with fab 5

Precap: manik and nandini meet while she was watching the fire flies .
They have a romantic moment.




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Awesome update..! loved it... if possible aaj hi next part update kardo bcz can't wait after knowing the precap...!

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