Ab Tum hi ho - My new Short FF (Part 7 Page 40) - New Part Updated

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Manik Malhotra is rich, handsome and fun loving 23 years old guy. He is the only son of Nyonika and Sharad Malhotra .Manik is very talented and is a cricketer. He is supposed to be making his debut in National team soon. He is very serious about his career. He has been quite popular with girls and is now dating an upcoming model Soha.

However a freak accident is going to change is life forever.

Nandini Murthy is a young and sweet 22 years old girl. After completing her engineering , she is working in a multinational company. She is single at present but have had good no.of guys drooling over her. She believes in true love and is yet to find one. Her only weakness is her chacha and chachi. Her parents died at young age and she worships her chachu-chachi who have done every possible thing to bring her up. Risabh is her cousin brother and son on chacha and chachi.

Her life is going to change because she will agree to sacrifice her happiness for her family.😊😳

Pic Credit : Cute - Aly (Special Thanks)

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Part 4 Page 9

Part 5 Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome character sketch... continue soon
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First I liked your writing
Second I liked your story
Third I hope it will turn out to be long instead of a short story 😆

What I found a bit scary is that Manik is dating Soha, I cant stand her but since it's a manan story, I think there won't be much of them (hopefully)

Manik a crikertar? I have never watched a game nor do I understand it, so I gusee I will learn here something new 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome cs
Cont soon
Pm updates plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nicecs, waiting eagerly for the first part.

Ps also update ur other story, very much exited for it
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Part 1

Manik is extremely happy today. He walks out of the stadium , he has been selected to play for India today. As soon as he comes out, he sees a Ferrari and a guy hands him the keys of the car saying that this is the gift from his parents. Manik is extremely thrilled. He calls his parents and thank them. Nyonika and Sharad are most of the time out of country as their work involves lot of travel.

Cabir comes and shakes hand with Manik. They both hug. Cabir is manik's friend and teammate. He has missed out on selection this time but is very very happy for Manik. Infact cabir is the only genuine and down to earth friend of Manik, rest are all showoff, however Manik doesn't realize that but he respects Cabir a lot.

M : Chal cabir , tujhe Ferrari ki sawari karaoon.

Both Laugh.

C: No yaar I have my wife navya waiting for me.

M : Come on yaar, learn to enjoy, ye kya meri wife wait kar rahi hai and all that

Cabir belongs to a simple family and got married early. He completely respects and love his wife Navya, who is a teacher and has been cabir's support all d way through tough time.

M: Acha yaar, I m leaving , I have a party to attend.

Soha calls : Sweety , Im waiting for you , please come, tonight is going to be special.

Soha is after Manik's life, manik thinks she is hot but he is not in love with her. They have not had any physical relationship as yet but Soha tonight wants to take their relationship to next level as she feels that he is a nice catch.

Manik is very excited about his new car. Harshad(spoilt brat) his other friend calls him.

H : So Manik I believe uncle gifted u a lavish car, why donot we have a small race till the party venue.

Manik agrees.

That's when the tragedy strikes, Manik meets with a deadly accident, and his lower left leg gets paralyzed. His dreams are shattered.

Its been 1 year - Nyonika and Sharad have tried their level best to get their son treated but no hope is left now. Doctors have given up . Manik now is a completely shattered man, Cabir is the only true friend left for him who comes and meets him on regular basis and tries to cheer him up. 1 year back cabir got to play for india as Manik got injured. He is now a successful cricketer.

Nyonika and Sharad are really worried about their son , they both are very ambitious and have to travel a lot and their business has been suffering because of Manik's health as they have been busy with manik's illness.

After lot of thinking and discussion, they both decide to find a decent girl for manik and get him married.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nyc start!!!
I loved the update!!!
Post next part ASAP!!!
Eagerly waiting for the next part!!!
Continue soon!!!
Plzz PM me if u can!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ye kya... Their business is suffering so get your son married ?? Like really??
And Soha has dumped Manik? Right?
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So manik had seen everyone real face, now waiting for his angel nandini to come ibto his life and set him happy, continue soon
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Part 2

Nandini's chachu has lost lot of money in shares and stocks. He is facing financial crises. Nandu has taken some loan to help them but that's not enough to sustain their expenses. Nandu is very stresses in seeing her family in such condition.

Nyonika and Sharad get to know about Nandini through someone. He lets them know how good Nandini is and she would be an ideal partner for Manik but he is not sure whether their family would accept the proposal bcoz of Manik's disability.

Cabir and navya as usual come to spend some quality time with Manik and motivate him. Manik is broken from inside but always portrays a happy face for his family. Cabir and Navya talk to manik about his marriage as manik's parents have told them about manik not agreeing to it. Finally they are able to convince him

Due to financial difficulties faced by her chacha chahi, nandini agrees to marry manik against chahcha's wish. Chacha and family decide to move back to mangalore after nandu's wedding.

Nandini makes it clear to Manik's parents that she is not marrying him to be his nurse. She will continue working after marriage. However she has the option of work at times so will be there for Manik always.

Nandini is sad about how things have turned up for her however she believes in God and destiny and she is now ready to get into sacred relationship of marriage with Manik. She is ready to give herself away to manik both emotionally and physically. She is strong and ready to take responsibility of her own decision of marrying Manik.

Manik and Nandini meet directly at the court first time and get married. They both did not feel the need to meeting each other as the decision has been made. Manik walks but with crutches supporting his left leg.

Nandini looks at him for the first time and a very strange feeling hits her heart as if he is the man of her dreams , she looks at him in his eyes and find a very strange and strong force driving her towards him as if for her manik's disability doesnot exists.

Manik is kind of lost and finds her ordinary plus he doesnot have but to get married to her .

They finally get married. Cabir and Navya end up spending some time with Nandini and finally manik and nandini leave for their own apartment ( Manik;s parents have gifted him a lavish apartment and want them to lead an independent life. This is their effort to make manik feel confident about himself).

Cabir and Navya are very happy after meeting Nandini and Cabir is sure that this girl will change Manik's life

Manik and Nandini enter their bedroom. Its lavish and big. Nandini is taken aback as she has never seen something that big .

Manik and Nandini have barely spoken to each other.

M : You go and change, just feel comfortable

N : Looks at him , yes sure.

Nandini had no clue what manik is expecting from her. She is little nervous as to if manik wants to estabhish physical relation today itself. She changes , takes a deep breathe and comes out. To her surprise manik is already asleep.

Nandini looks at him and smiles

N : He looks like a baby, a sweet baby.

Nandini lies next to him and sleeps .

Next morning , Manik gets up as usual late and by that time Nandini is done with her puja.

She enters the room wearing her salwar kameez and looking simple as usual.

Manik's parents leave next day for USA and ask Nandini to take care of their son. In few times they have met her, they have become really fond of her and are quite sure that they made a good decision.

1 week pass by . Nandini and Manik are trying to adjust to one another.

Manik finds her very very different. She is nothing what Manik had ever imagined of his life partner. She is extremely simple, tied hair and wear spects while working on her laptop. But since the day she has come she has given manik his space and never tried to overdo anything. She always check things and make sure he is comfortable.

Nandini often thinks that how this guy must have been before his accident. She has gone through his medals and pictures decorated in their drawing room and his achievements are unbelievable. Nandini has always been that studious kid and this all is so different for her. She also feels sad for him that his life look such a bad turn.

In their bedroom ( night )

N : Manik , who kal se mujhe office join karna hai

M : Haa so driver se kehna chod dega tumhe

N: Matlab ur ok with me joining back the office so soon

Manik smiles

M : Yes ofcourse nandini

N : Manik who dad ka bhi phone aya tha usa se, unhone kaha hai ki kal few people would be coming from their company to take you through the company growth and financials

M : Haan dad ne bataya mujhe, he wants me to get involved in the business slowly , I will meet them

M : Nandini , are u comfortable , I mean I know the way we get married

N : Manik im very comfortable , thanks

Edited by backwithabang - 10 years ago

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