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Posted: 10 years ago
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hiii frnds this is my first ever os which i am going for my dear frnds hope dey all like it...
my first os is about naksh first anniversary where naitik plans a surprise for akshi and take her to a resort...
naitik plans a very anokhi surprise for akshi and he packs all the stuff without akshi letting know about plan and takes all permissions from house members and booked everything...
nk is in his room when akshi comes
ak:naitik yaad hain appko kal kya hain?
nk:ha ak aise kaise bool sakthi hoon mujhe marne ka koi shauk nahi hain..jab mein aapki bday bool gayi toh aap ktni naaraz hogayi mujhe woh din phir nahi dekhna... kal humari anniv hain na sab yaad hain madam... aur kuch kehna hain?
ak:ohh acchi baat hain ki aapko yaad hain warna mujhe laga meri bulakkad pati phir se bhool gaya...
toh kal kya plans hain aap mujhe kya gift karne waali hain?
nk:uffo ak kal mein busy hoon aur i have no time in house we have pooja and after dat i need to for a meeting ouside udaipur...
ak(angrily):koi zarrorat nahi hain for me u no need to waste ur time and go to sleep...
they both dont talk to each other at n8 and in mng
both akshi and naitik do hawan and all family mem wish dem and dey take blessings from all...
later nk comes to his room where akshi is already angry on him...
nk:naaraz hain?
ak:nahi u go i think its time for ur meeting
nk:toh aap bhi mere saath chaliye
ak:sacchi mein?
nk:ha i will go for meeting and come at n8 and we will return atleast in journey we can be together na?
ak:no..wen gay3 comes and says ha bahu u too go with him
ak gets shocked but agrees to go
nk:very gud toh chale and both go ...on d way
ak:kya zaroorat hain mujhe lejaane keliye i will become alone and kya faida aapke saath jaane ka
nk:ak plss aisa math kahiye pls samajhne ki koshish kijiye u know na i love u
ak:i love u too and sry
nk:koi baat nahi and both smile and reach resort
nk says ak i will come u go to room and get fresh
ak:ok
she opens the door and get surprised seeing all room decorated and on bed beautifully written with flowers happy anniversary my love
she has tears in her eyes
nk comes from behind and hugs her kaisa laga mera surprise?
ak:breaks hug and turn opposite side and hugs nk tightly and say i loveee uuu sooo muchhh and i a xtremelyyy sryyy
nk:pagli i love u tooo but humari beech mein sirf pyaar no sry and all okeiii?
ak:hmmm 😊
dey both get ready and on akshi says i wanna eat icecream
ak:bhaiyya ek icecream dijiye
nk:ek hi kyun aur mer liye?
ak:kya ek ice cream donon nahi khaa sakthi aap bhi na kitni buddu hain...
nk smiles and both eat same ice cream form both sides and when icecream is about to end both end up with a lip lock
they ghoomofy full resort and it became n8...
ak:i am hungry
nk:okei..and dey both go in restaurant and order chinese and both feed each other...
both complete food and den naitik says to ak
nk:open d gift i gave u and wear it and come near swimming pool i will be w8ing for u...
ak agrees and go
nk is w8ing for her near swimming pool and akshi comes with blue colored long gown and looking so elegant...
ak comes and see the beautiful place which is none other like heaven on earth...
der is a water bed in middle of pool and its a beautiful place where no one can come as it was specially designed...
ak is astonished to see all dis she goes running to nk and hug him tightlyyy... tqq so much for everything u have done for me for making me feel so spll love u and kisses him all over his face
nk:arey wah itni saari kisses kismat chamkaa gayi hain meri aaj
ak(blushes)
nk:we will sit in the corner and both go and keep their legs in water and njoy the beauty
ak:rests and shoulder on naitik so as nk ...both holds each other and njoying the beauty of place...
ak feels naughty and splashes water on nk and run away
nk gets angry and he ons the swithces where water fountains falls on dem both and get wet...
ak:ye kya hain nk
nk:jo aap ne mere saath kiya uska natiza 😆
but nw ak njoys the water falling on dem...
nk gets lost in her beauty and slowly moves towards her...
he goes so close to her ak feels shy and try to leave but naitik catches her and pulls her towards him
aaj ye raat sirf hum donon keliye hain
nk gives lip lock to ak and both njoy it in the beautiful waterfall
later nk offs the switches and utaaofy ak and place her on the bed
both get lost in each other and njoy the beautiful n8 in each others embrace...
nxt mng dey leave back to udaipur
the end

so frnds this is my first ever os...
hope u like it...
am sry i know i am not a gud writer but just tried it...




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Why sry u wrote vry well dear ..finally u wrote nd its vvry beautiful. .conogo my star⭐️👏
Natik ka sweet surprise vry well yr u write many more parts dear ...u r good writer..keep it up ..pls aur os likhne ki try karo🥳vry sweet nd vry cute romance🤗😳
Edited by ruchigarg - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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pranu mai kya kahu yaar.. first when I came to the if I was shocked seeing that you wrote a os i must say your first attempt is very good... haye naksh ki first anniversary its so cute love akshi anger first then ice cream scene after that naksh romance all are superb... pls do wrote more os
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hamari princess k undar bhut telent hai jisse chupa k rakha hai.swly swly hame pata chal raha h pragati
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

pranu mai kya kahu yaar.. first when I came to the if I was shocked seeing that you wrote a os i must say your first attempt is very good... haye naksh ki first anniversary its so cute love akshi anger first then ice cream scene after that naksh romance all are superb... pls do wrote more os

thanqq but i knwo u are saying to keep me happy na...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchigarg

Why sry u wrote vry well dear ..finally u wrote nd its vvry beautiful. .conogo my star⭐️👏

Natik ka sweet surprise vry well yr u write many more parts dear ...u r good writer..keep it up ..pls aur os likhne ki try karo🥳vry sweet nd vry cute romance🤗😳

thanqqq so much sweetu 😊
i tried it i know its not so good
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchigarg

Hamari princess k undar bhut telent hai jisse chupa k rakha hai.swly swly hame pata chal raha h pragati

wat u had known?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --pranu--


thanqq but i knwo u are saying to keep me happy na...

why you think like that.. mai sach kah rahi hu isme koi fault nahi hai
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

why you think like that.. mai sach kah rahi hu isme koi fault nahi hai

tqqq so muchhh... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --pranu--


tqqq so muchhh...😊

dubara aisi baat mat karna

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