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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Guys,

Another one of mine..
With no disclaimer...

Be ready to throw chappals..

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Suraj held Both his babies in his hands and was caressing them.. The happiness was clearly visible in his eyes.. He got tears of happiness..
He said "Beta! Beta! Papa.. See your Papa.. This is the most beautiful day of your papa's life.. I was waiting for this moment for complete 9 months.. "

The babies smiled hearing their papa's words..😳

Suraj was extreamly happy. Sandhya was sleeping on the bed..

Meanwhile Sandhya slowly opened her eyes and said "Suraj ji!" Her voice was weak due to the delivery..

Suraj turned to look her sandhya.. He proceeded further towards her Sandhya and said.. "Look Sandhya ji!.. I have caught both the babies in my arms.. Now you can't tease me anymore.. That I cannot take care of both the babies.."😳

Sandhya seeing her hubby so happy, got tears in her eyes..😊

Suraj "Sandhya ji!.. What happened?" gave both the babies to BB to keep them in the baby bed and went immediately to Sandhya..

BB ordered everyone to go outside to give some time and space to SurYa and their babies..

Suraj wiped her tears and asked "What happened Sandhya Ji!"
Sandhya "Nothing! It is just the tears of happiness.. I love you Surajji!"
Suraj caressed her cheek and said "I love you too.." and kissed her forhead.

Sandhya "Are you happy?"
Suraj hugged her "Hmm! This is the happiest moment of my life."
Sandhya in anger "Suraj ji!" and pushed him away..
Suraj "Ok Sorry Baba.. This is the 2nd most happiest moment of my life.. Ok?"
Sandhya Blushed and Suraj hugged her again..

Sandhya "How are the babies Suraj ji!"
Suraj immediatly broke the hug and said "You did not see the babies Sandhya?"
Sandhya nodded in negative with a cute baby face..
Suraj "ek to bilkul aap per gaya hai.. [One of them is the copy of your]".. and went to the baby bed and brought one of the babies..
He showed the baby to Sandhya and Sandhya was escatic.. She touched his cute little fingers, his hands, and caressed his cheeks while he was in Suraj's hand..😳
Sandhya "Give him to me Suraj ji"..
Suraj took the baby away and said "No Sandhya ji! The baby is mine Sandhya ji.. I won't give him to you.." with a wink smile..😉
Sandhya "Suraj ji! Don't tease me please! Give him to me na!"

Suraj took the baby to Sandhya and gave him is her hands.. Sandhya lovingly looked at her baby and kissed gently on his face..
Suraj sat beside her and wrapped her shoulders with his hands and collided his head with her gently.. "Look at his eys, his mouth, his fingers.. All are just like you.." and kissed her below her ears..
Sandhya "Hmm! I see! why the nose is not as beaultiful as mine.. It went on you na!" giigling..😆
Suraj "What did you say? my nose are not beautiful.."
Sandhya "I did not say that! I just said not as beautiful as mine.." with a wink smile..😉
Suraj "That's true!" and both laughed..😆😆

Suraj brought the other baby and gave him to Sandhya..
Sandhya "He has gone totally on you Suraj ji.. Just as I wished.." and kissed the baby on his forhead..
After finishing, she turned towards Suraj and pecked his lips gently and looked his face longingly..😳
Suraj "What happened.."
Sandhya didn't say anything but nodded her head in negative with a cute face.. "Wo Ai nee Suraj ji!.."
He hugged her tightly..

While SurYa were busy in eyelock and caressing both the babies, doctor came to checkup and told Suraj that he can now take her to home..

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At home, Suraj used to not get much time to spend privately with her sandhya as BB used to always be around...

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It is time for RP to leave for their home.. While packing Suraj's eyes went to the pic gifted by Ankita..He remembered the promise he made to Ankita..
His eyes were filled with tears..

Sandhya "All the packing is done., Nothing is getting left.. Let's go Surajji!"
Suraj "One thing we need to leave.."
Sandhya "What Surajji!"
Suraj "One of the baby.."
Sandhya clutches her dupatta and turned to not show the pain to Suraj.. "Hmmm! I remember.."
Suraj "Which baby to give Sandhya!"
Sandhya "Can't we not give the baby?"
Suraj "We promised Sandhya Ji"
Sandhya's eyes were full of tears... She turned the other side...
Suraj went near her and hugs her tightly from behind...
Sandhya started crying, turned towards him and hugged him tightly.. she was crying like anything..😭
He wiped her tears from her cheeks and tried to break the hug but sandhya didn't let him..
Sandhya "I can't do this Suraj ji.. I can't keep my child away from me.. Please Suraj ji.. Please don't ask me to do that.. I can't.."
Suraj "Me too Sandhya ji... Do you think it is easy for me??" He got tears..
He cupped her face and said "Sandhya ji! We promised.. We promised to that little girl.. (EVIL)"
Sandhya "No Suraj ji!..😭"
She broke the hug and went to her children and hugged one of them tightly.. 😭

All this was witnessed by AA..😡

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Continued by Dee...😊


" Suraj while consoling Sandya, tried to make her understand that they can't back out now as it is not only them but even Bhabo had promised Bulbul about giving one of the baby to her. Now if they don't fulfill their promise, the child will think them as liars and also even she will start telling lies thinking that as right. By not sticking to our words, we will not only hurt Bulbul, but also will set a wrong example to her as it is OK to lie if that is beneficial for the person etc., . Later both went to Bulbul's room with one of their child and Bhabo had tears in her eyes and went away from the sight but she could not miss to see her grand child once last before he was handed over to Kotari's.
Sandya called Bulbul and handed her the baby and asked her to take good care of him as he is too small and doesn't know how to express his feelings of hunger, pain sleepy etc. By then she was already choking and Suraj took her into his folds and said, Sandya ji, don't worry, Ankita Bhabi is there to take care of the child. She is more experienced than you as she has raised Bulbul and will take utmost care of the child and will not make it miss us as she knows how it feels to lose a child and hence she will be extra careful with our Kush (our happiness). This was enough for Ankita to break down and she started sobbing and Bulbul was hell scared seeing her mom cry. She rushed to mom with the child in her hand and showed it her and said, see mama, I got my baby and from now on, I will take care of the child and it will be my baby and no one else can even touch him. The words left every one shocked and that was realization call for Ankur & Ankita that they should not continue with this baby drama of their daughter any further. Ankita asked Bulbul to give the baby to her with a pinch of anger in her voice which made Bulbul grumpy but she obeyed her mother.
Ankita gave the baby to Sandya and said, Sandya and Suraj ji, thank for thinking of giving your child to us. You were too good to be true and are so selfless to give one of your child to us just because I lost my child before its birth. Sandya when you people are so selfless (the whole family), how could you expect us to be selfish to accept your child which is only few days old and who needs his mother more than anyone else. If it hurts me so much about the loss of a child who was only 2 months in my womb, I can understand your pain while handing over the child whom you had in your womb for the full 9 months and gave birth to him by putting your life as stake.No Sandya, the baby will be with you and grow as your son only. Why he should be separated from you and his brother and his whole family. We can love him as our nephew whole heartedly and there is no need for him to call us Maa & Dad. We are Ok to be called as Mama & Mami and Bulbul will be his sister whether he stays with you or with us. We will visit you on weekends and Bulbul can spend her time playing with both the babies than one. She can shower her love on both kids than one. Bulbul wont that be great that you will have 2 brothers than have only one.
When Bulbul was not happy with this turn of events and was about to run to her room to lock her up, Ankur switched on the TV where they were showing an add which said, to save the children from all illness, mother's milk is the best and they should never be deprived with mother's milk and put on with bottled milk. Ankur showed that to Bulbul and said, do you want your brother to fall sick because he miss the mother's milk and care. Don't you like him to be as strong as you are and other children are. So please understand the situation and accept the reality that the baby should be with his mother. So what if he is with your Bua, you can go to their place, when ever you are free (after school and home work etc) and be there for some time, play with thema nd come back. instead of shopping for 1 brother now you can shop for 2 or even you can shop for 3 as Golu will also be there. Wont you think that would be amazing to have 3 brother and 2 sisters than having only one brother..
Slowly bulbul came back to her papa and said, really papa, I will have 3 brothers and 2 sisters. Wow I can tell all my friends that I have more sisters and brother than everyone. But you should promise to take me on all weekends to bua.


Please throw chappals..
Please give your feedback.. It will help me to improve my writting..


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Rosy.L thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love the 1st part Anjana . But I can't handle the last part. I'm already crying .😭😭. It's too emotional 😭😭. But u written very nicely Anjana⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS dost..
cute surYa in d hospital ...
but ending.. according to me it s a tragic one ...
I am nt able to guess how CVs are gonna show surYa handing over d baby to devil

More than that the funny bgm they are giving for bulbul nd ankita convo irritates me to d core ..


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice part anjana.
Waiting for next part.
Dont give baby to AA atleast in your os.
Plz write next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dabh9

Nice part anjana.
Waiting for next part.
Dont give baby to AA atleast in your os.
Plz write next part.


Thanks SP..
Could not complete it today.. As I have to rush to office..
Don't worry.. I will not let SurYa go their child easily.. .😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely OS FM. thanks for leaving the end hanging even though it is cliff hanger. and thanks for making AA witness the whole scenario of how difficult is it for the parents to part with their child.
wish it goes like this...
" Suraj while consoling Sandya, tried to make her understand that they can't back out now as it is not only them but even Bhabo had promised Bulbul about giving one of the baby to her. Now if they don't fulfill their promise, the child will think them as liars and also even she will start telling lies thinking that as right. By not sticking to our words, we will not only hurt Bulbul, but also will set a wrong example to her as it is OK to lie if that is beneficial for the person etc., . Later both went to Bulbul's room with one of their child and Bhabo had tears in her eyes and went away from the sight but she could not miss to see her grand child once last before he was handed over to Kotari's.
Sandya called Bulbul and handed her the baby and asked her to take good care of him as he is too small and doesn't know how to express his feelings of hunger, pain sleepy etc. By then she was already choking and Suraj took her into his folds and said, Sandya ji, don't worry, Ankita Bhabi is there to take care of the child. She is more experienced than you as she has raised Bulbul and will take utmost care of the child and will not make it miss us as she knows how it feels to lose a child and hence she will be extra careful with our Kush (our happiness). This was enough for Ankita to break down and she started sobbing and Bulbul was hell scared seeing her mom cry. She rushed to mom with the child in her hand and showed it her and said, see mama, I got my baby and from now on, I will take care of the child and it will be my baby and no one else can even touch him. The words left every one shocked and that was realization call for Ankur & Ankita that they should not continue with this baby drama of their daughter any further. Ankita asked Bulbul to give the baby to her with a pinch of anger in her voice which made Bulbul grumpy but she obeyed her mother.
Ankita gave the baby to Sandya and said, Sandya and Suraj ji, thank for thinking of giving your child to us. You were too good to be true and are so selfless to give one of your child to us just because I lost my child before its birth. Sandya when you people are so selfless (the whole family), how could you expect us to be selfish to accept your child which is only few days old and who needs his mother more than anyone else. If it hurts me so much about the loss of a child who was only 2 months in my womb, I can understand your pain while handing over the child whom you had in your womb for the full 9 months and gave birth to him by putting your life as stake.No Sandya, the baby will be with you and grow as your son only. Why he should be separated from you and his brother and his whole family. We can love him as our nephew whole heartedly and there is no need for him to call us Maa & Dad. We are Ok to be called as Mama & Mami and Bulbul will be his sister whether he stays with you or with us. We will visit you on weekends and Bulbul can spend her time playing with both the babies than one. She can shower her love on both kids than one. Bulbul wont that be great that you will have 2 brothers than have only one.
When Bulbul was not happy with this turn of events and was about to run to her room to lock her up, Ankur switched on the TV where they were showing an add which said, to save the children from all illness, mother's milk is the best and they should never be deprived with mother's milk and put on with bottled milk. Ankur showed that to Bulbul and said, do you want your brother to fall sick because he miss the mother's milk and care. Don't you like him to be as strong as you are and other children are. So please understand the situation and accept the reality that the baby should be with his mother. So what if he is with your Bua, you can go to their place, when ever you are free (after school and home work etc) and be there for some time, play with thema nd come back. instead of shopping for 1 brother now you can shop for 2 or even you can shop for 3 as Golu will also be there. Wont you think that would be amazing to have 3 brother and 2 sisters than having only one brother..
Slowly bulbul came back to her papa and said, really papa, I will have 3 brothers and 2 sisters. Wow I can tell all my friends that I have more sisters and brother than everyone. But you should promise to take me on all weekends to bua.
Sorry guys if I had gone too far...😉
Edited by deejagi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome end dee
Ankur nd ankita didnt even take an attempt to make her understand

CVs 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Subha it is difficult for a mother to send her kids to hostel and how did Ankita & Ankur expect their little sister to part with her child for ever? Is it the same Ankita who claimed her love for her SIL overtake her love for her husband? What happened to that love now? If the arrival of her daughter has pushed Sandya to a corner, how do they expect to love Sandya's son with whole heart? the boy will always be a second grade citizen in their family and will never get a place as equal to bulbul. So they should better rethink about taking Sandya's baby.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice ending Dee . Cvs 😕😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am really sorry FM. I didn't realize the fact that you wanted to do the justice by writing the next part, so I just write something which I thought ... Sorry for meddling with your OS 😳

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