THE HIDDEN LOVE{completed} - Page 41

RES...
This time me first 😛


Wonderful update Dhivii dear 🤗

First of all I like that you have started with a conversation plot between Uruvi, Karn & also Vrushali. Uruvi's intuitions made her ask questions as her brain was not able to process the news that Kauravs & Pandavas can be one friendly side...maybe she knew both the sets of cousins since childhood & she ruled out the possibility of truce betn them. Karn observed Uruvi's behavior how she was becoming a bit inclined to Panchali despite how the empress behaved with him & the yuvraj. It was obvious that he did not like this from his wife & told her those words.

Secondly, Uruvi observed how Gandhar Raj was so excited & happy with the inaguration that even Karn was surprised by his sudden warm greetings. At that time did Karn not know what Gadhar Raj conspired with Yuvraj against the Pandavas... I mean there is some contradictions in this part that Karn did not know about the dice game earlier until it was rolled on 😳

And what a way to get punished...Karn surely knows charming ways to get sweetly punished by his wife 😆 thousand of kisses...what a punishment?? ☺️ 😳 😆

Thirdly I am happy that you have written about the reactions and emotions of the royal women folk regarding the news of the ongoing dice game... I missed this part in the show... especially BHanu's reaction since she knew her husband is going to cheat his cousins in the most insulting way including Panchali. And dushasan...he completely did a 360 degree turn & keeping his conscience in the back gear... came forward to obey his elder brother's order.

You have aptly described the emotions & helplessness of Gandhari, Kunthi & Panchali, Inner turmoil & angst of Panchali, Guilt of Bhanu & shocking reaction of Uruvi in the last part...
Dhivii if you could write a convo betwn Bhanu & Uruvi where Uruvi questions Bhanu why she did not stop her husband or do anything to stop this injustice if she knew before hand... It will be an interesting one... since not much is written betwn Bhanu's & Panchali's relations...bhanu & panchali may have greeted cold to each other.

So the next chappy will be VH... & how Uruvi will react to Karn's action in the dice hall
Update soon Dhivii dear 😊

no PM no mssg 😭
whenever u update u first msg me ki Sansii where r u? I updated! What happnd now😡😭
u forgot me😭
I will also punish u now like Uruvi😛!!😡 abb decide ur punisshment😡
...
Oh actually I got ur PM😳
Sowwieee😳

now ur update it was well penned like always my shweetuu😊
so VH started nd as far as I know u I mean nw if I understand u it ended too here😉 hey na?
I dnt think u will drag it to next update! Like u dint drag Swayamvar too! Am I right!😳
waise if u have planned it in next update too I dnt have prob ha do whatever u want!😛 dnt think I wont comment😆

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi

RES...
This time me first 😛


Wonderful update Dhivii dear 🤗

First of all I like that you have started with a conversation plot between Uruvi, Karn & also Vrushali. Uruvi's intuitions made her ask questions as her brain was not able to process the news that Kauravs & Pandavas can be one friendly side...maybe she knew both the sets of cousins since childhood & she ruled out the possibility of truce betn them. Karn observed Uruvi's behavior how she was becoming a bit inclined to Panchali despite how the empress behaved with him & the yuvraj. It was obvious that he did not like this from his wife & told her those words. thanks 😳 I have a reason for karn's angry say u at last

Secondly, Uruvi observed how Gandhar Raj was so excited & happy with the inaguration that even Karn was surprised by his sudden warm greetings. At that time did Karn not know what Gadhar Raj conspired with Yuvraj against the Pandavas... I mean there is some contradictions in this part that Karn did not know about the dice game earlier until it was rolled on 😳 exactly i felt the same contradiction..I thought of writing the plan of dice game on one episode..but I cannot do it..My pen refused to do so..to be frank as a karnali I cannot do that..I am not dare to face the truth..I know I should accept the reality but but..I hope u will understand me hemu😭 😭 that's why I wrote karn's opinion about panchali ..his anger in the first part.

And what a way to get punished...Karn surely knows charming ways to get sweetly punished by his wife 😆 thousand of kisses...what a punishment?? ☺️ 😳 😆 HEHEHEHEH😃

Thirdly I am happy that you have written about the reactions and emotions of the royal women folk regarding the news of the ongoing dice game... I missed this part in the show... especially BHanu's reaction since she knew her husband is going to cheat his cousins in the most insulting way including Panchali. And dushasan...he completely did a 360 degree turn & keeping his conscience in the back gear... came forward to obey his elder brother's order.

You have aptly described the emotions & helplessness of Gandhari, Kunthi & Panchali, Inner turmoil & angst of Panchali, Guilt of Bhanu & shocking reaction of Uruvi in the last part...
Dhivii if you could write a convo betwn Bhanu & Uruvi where Uruvi questions Bhanu why she did not stop her husband or do anything to stop this injustice if she knew before hand... It will be an interesting one... since not much is written betwn Bhanu's & Panchali's relations...bhanu & panchali may have greeted cold to each other. I thought of questioning banu..but It may look like over reaction of uruvi..pandavas are loosing kauravas are cheating..what is for uruvi..then It may show the intimacy or soft corner of panchali in uruvi's heart..actually panchali is neither her friend nor enemy ..that's all about their relationship.she hate her for her rude behavior but as a woman she can understand the panchali's life ..that's all..more over..banu jiji cannot do anything..that she knows..I have mentioned some letter communication stating yuvraj's madness..and she herself heard his aggressiveness in the lake palace.even her husband cannot stop him..how could banu...sorry If I did not made it clear..

coming to the next question..the relationship between banu and panchali..panchali arrived hastinapur before uruvi arrived there..so banu and panchali intro wud be over in uruvi's absence..moreover it is said she is sick and rarely comes out..relationship of banu and panchali was given in indraprasth itself..banu wud receive her properly and formally..that was my opinion..

So the next chappy will be VH... & how Uruvi will react to Karn's action in the dice hall
Update soon Dhivii dear 😊 no hemu I am going to skip VH..I dont want the same sort of descriptions..a maid saying angaraj uttered those words..of course uruvi will come to know in the same way...but the episode will start by the reactions of uruvi of vh..and hemu two days before we were discussing about the dressing style of people during mb period..diala said she believe that women may not cover their breasts during that period..I do belive the same..in that case wht is the meaning of vastraharan..krishna gave the vastra only to cover her waist..dudhashan was exhausted by pulling the waist cloth??? so this must be added on ...interpolation as Jamy said..this could be an added reason for no vh..

thank u so much hemu darling for sharing ur opinion here instead of saying good alone..I am happy darling

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

no PM no mssg 😭
whenever u update u first msg me ki Sansii where r u? I updated! What happnd now😡😭
u forgot me😭
I will also punish u now like Uruvi😛!!😡 abb decide ur punisshment😡

Originally posted by: Aartii26

Dice game started finally .

awesome update Dhivya.
U beautifully penned down each & every descriptions.
Loved the Convo of Karna, Uruvi, Vrushali.
& I love Uruvi's observations.
She noticed each person's expressions.Thats why I always love Uruvi more than Vrushali as Karna's wife.
then, Karna Uruvi's cute convo.
ohh, I always love this romantic side of Karna in all the FF here.
& then, the most beautiful writing in this part.U brillaintly wrote the dice game part with the reactions of Royal women.
infact, I want to say U wrote this dice game part more brillaintly than any famous Author.
& then, the last paragraph, Uruvi's trust on her husband.
I am eagarly waiting for the next part Dhivya.Want to read Uruvi & Karna's confrontation.;
Great going. Loved this part.