OS #2 - Unique Love - TogetherNess

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Hi ...
This is a Random story which came to my mind...
Raman /Ishita /Subbu - same as YHM , plot you will get to know while you read this.Its a one shot.

Not ProofRead : sorry for the typos if any..

OS #2 - Unique Love - Togetherness






"Ishita... Mujhe ek din ke liye chandigarh jana h... site inspection ke liye... pls pack my bag..." ,
"kab tak jana h" ,
"kal subah" ,
"Kab aaoge" ,
"filhal toh , ek hi din ka plan h... but it may take a couple of days more... " ,
"Jana jaroori h"

Her Face Fell... She already was not in mood , as she heard him speak after many days. The smirk in his face, the tone in which he spoke to her made it difficult for her to digest.She had been thinking since then, why is she blamed every time as if she has done a grave mistake. Its a medical problem which can occur to anyone.. The other mind roared but it just occurred to you not to those who point it out to you. and a part of her heart cried is this is why Raman doesn't share any physical relationship with her. though he tries to get closer but he never closes the distance between them.
Raman had noticed her face's changing reactions, he had heard that bas***d speak that way to her. He was angry at him but more than that he was angry why did she not respond or retorted back to his nonsense talks. he felt does she all so feel the same as he said. does she still Love him in any corner of her heart. but hell no... she said that day that she is happy with me... Is she really happy with me. he started to think.

Both were thinking on same lines..she does care for me, she has attraction towards me, she likes me, n i know she loves me back but what is that really stopping us from being normal husband and wife.though our nok jhoks are our way of expressing our love and we do understand between the lines what the other exactly wants to say... but y don't we not say it on the face.. what is that stopping us from saying..

Exactly why i did not say him anything back.. why did i get affected as if really Raman doesn't care for me, he is the best husband a girl could ever get in her life. then why was i so stupidly hearing him say such nonsense about our unique relationship. He wont even understand about it in his life time. I was being so stupid. why did i not say him I love my husband more than my life that which never happened with him and if my husband leaves me like him , i would probably die the next moment... which again dint happened with HIM..

A Part of her logical mind said you really didn't not have to explain a third person about your relationship Ishita..That person whom you know doesn't know what love is, then why would you waste your energy to explain him.what you did was correct by not explaining him. but you know where you went wrong. you felt bad and he did affect you.. yes why did it affect me... whatever he said was bull shit... My Raman loves me a lot and i know that.. Action speaks louder than words.. Then where i went wrong, Your Mistake was you let him affect you... Nooo , that's not true... y will he affect me.. does he.. no no... he doesn't affect me... I was just confused with Raman and my Relationship. we do share a unique relationship which cannot be understood by others but you Ishita, her inner voice roared... Ya i know we have a great understanding , love ,care and concern towards each other but...there is something which is still missing, is that what you thinking Ishita...

After a long pause, she accepted herself... there is something... but Marriage is not all about sharing a physical relationship... why would that be a concern to me... or Is it That important to have that bond to be called as a husband and wife... Her logical mind told her... YES ... but her heart said Noo... its not about the physical relationship which you are willing to share with him.. Then she thought to herself...

Ishita do you really feel what you share with raman in this relationship is complete... She was silent to her ownself... there is something that is stopping you or rather both of you to be a normal husband and wife.. The way amma appa are... don't you think... its just that we talk to each other through sarcasm but we do talk to each other... her heart replied her mind... but why you both are not comfortable enough sharing it at a personal level ... word to word... basically talk to each other with out any so called nok jhok of yours... we do... her mind retorted back you do to share other's matters not which you wanna share to him personally... her heart told her mind but i do show anything and everything in action likewise he does..

Is that enough ishita.. she stirred in her couch and nodded her face saying to herself its not enough... and as she opened her eyes she saw him working on something on her laptop... Reached her mobile the next moment to see the time.. it shocked her, why is he working round the clock.. whats the matter.. as the clock showed her 3.30 am..

Raman looked at her and asked concern...

"Soye nahi ab tak" ,
"yeh maine apse puchna chahiye... "
, "Thoda kaam tha"
, "last time i checked i was married to a CEO" ,
"You are still "
"aap itna kyun over work kar rhe ho... " ,
"mujhe koyi lecture nh sunna please, im very tired and im yet to finish my work... " ,
"main lecture nahi de rhi hoon Raman... im just being concerned for your health" ,
"ohhh hooo so jao... mera kaam bas khatam hone ko aaya h... aur waise bhi i will sleep in flight also but you wont get that extra time... " ,
"haan haan... US travel karne wale ho jo ek do din lag jayega... " ,
"Bohot khush ho naa... Mujhse ek do din ka chutkara mil jayega.. maine jaise hi kaha main jaa rha hu... toh room se bahar chale gayi... aur bas sone ko wapas aayi ho..." ,

"Ruhi ka Project krna tha... " ,
"ab go to sleep... mujhe kaam khatam karne do...Warna woh Ash... i mean my boss ash.. ashwin mujhe aur tang karega.. woh bhi madrasi jo tehra.. theka le rkha h tum madrasiyon ne mera dimag kharab karne ka.." ,
"Raman if you aren't comfortable working under him leave the job... " ,
"yaar tum to serious hogayi... woh bas main majak kar rha tha... im not over worked up n all... woh ek important tender h... so main khud karna chahta tha... to prove myself... and keep that Best CEO award that you gave the other day " ,
" huh... CEOs ko maine kabhi baithke presentations banate hue nahi dekha... " ,
"toh ab dekhlo... aur ohh madam get some sleep... bfr its time to ur alarm to wake you up.." ,
"haan ... apko disturb nahi krne wali... paani peene uthi thi..."

Saying so she had a sip of water and turned her back on him thinking was this different from our normal nok jhoks... just smacked herself mentally... saying noo... tum ne normally baat nahi ki... soch smjh ke baat ki... still its not how you talk to your husband... i didn't really think ... before speaking.. it is because you are use to it by now... exactly... im use to it... and its just that... whatever we wanted to tell the other, we did say that to each other.. with that she shut her mind...
suddenly she got up... as she heard him speak to ASHOk named person... yeh is time pe ashok se kyun baat kar rhe hen.. she thought to herself... then she heard him say that... she welled up her eyes..

"Ashok main just because tumhare neeche kaam kar rha hu doesn't give you the right to treat me as ur slave... i have a job description given in my letter and will do that much alone... and mind you this won't last for too longer from here... Usi din chod deta main... kam... jis din rinky ki shadi khatam huya aur ishita ne sab kuch sambhal liya just because of your stupidity... main sirf Mihika aur Tumhare shadi ka sach janna chahta tha... ab jab main jaan chuka hu... i wont think twice... mind you.. aur haan... abhi bhi main isiliye us office main kadam rakh ta hu... warna tumhare koyi sign kiye huye clauses mujhe kuch nahi kar sakta..."

With that he cut the call and turned back only to see her face flushed and tears roling down her cheeks... he got stunned... her face had a mixture of emotions in it... it was a mixture of anguish, sorrow , anger and what not... but what affected him was her disappointment... that her face reflected more than anything...

That is when it happened...
They spoke to each other...
initially it was fight ,
then consoling each other ,
then their wishes ,
then their heart spoke to each other..
all of these happened through their eyes...
then they found words ...

Raman told her the truth of his employer, and the reason , then about Mihika's truth...
while she just said... what came to her mind at that point of time...

"Can we not be as normal as any other couple.."

she left it half way as he saw him chuckling , her face flared up ... Mouthed "RavanKumar" ...
"Hum kabhi normal nahi ho skte... kyun ki tum ho jhansi ki rani aur mein tehra tumhara Ravan Kumar... and this is something which is between us... that is not between any other couple Ishita... I would like to share everything and anything but in our way... through our sarcasms , nok jhoks n whatever you call that... for the world this may not be normal ishita... par mere liye wahi normalcy hain... humare beech... "

Next she hugged him and spoke about what subbu said and the aftermath thought process she has... He hugged her back tight and said

" Maine bhi suna usne jo kaha.. Tum jis soch mein pad gayi main bhi ussi soch mein pad gya... but then i realized ki we love that way..."

she cooconed herself more as though there was still some distance to go... when he heard her say...

"Ravan Kumar se Pyaar karne lagi hoon... "

In a very mild voice... and hid herself to him... as he stroked her hairs saying

"mera kehna jaroori h..."

when she nodded her head initially with no then yes... making him chuckle at her childish antics... he said..

"Main tumse pyaar thoda jyada karta hoon... tumse jyada... " ,
"main jyada karti hoon..."

he heard her say next to his heart and a ravanish plan came to his mind as he voiced it out... by saying

"Then kiss me , make love to me and then let me rethink who loves whom more"

she got stunned , numbed and what not... got out of his hold the next moment the words sank in into her...

But she did, she let go of that barrier... she kissed him, a feathery kiss... which he responded the same way softly and deepened it as his hands traversed her hair down to her waist and hers to his neck.. ... That is when the alarm buzzed...

They realized it, they dont have time anymore to continue with when she heard him say...

"Aaj ke din chutti logi"
she blushed and nodded
"aapki flight "

He dint wait for her to finish her query when he started kissing her senslessly and it continued till they heard her phone snooze again and they parted when she said...

"Ruhi school"

...he let go off her reluctantly... when she was about to leave the room after getting ready he said
ready rahna... bahar jayenge... hum dono Chandigarh jaa rhe h... " romantic trip 😉😉...
she smiled and blushed at him assuring the same...

They enjoyed the day of togetherness and they spoke their heart out to each other...

Thanks For reading...😳😉
Hope it wasn't too long.😳
do lemme know you valuable critics.
and Please hit the like button if you really do...😳😳

with Love,
Shravs😳😳
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shravani_2311 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sharu its awesome...

loved the way hw thy comunicated and understnd each otehr well...

im in ishra land...when ishu heard raman talking to ashok and raman saying truth to ishu and hw ty hug and hw thy propose each other...

kitna cutely mein jyada pyar karti hoon...aww...<3...


raman's dialouge was nice to prove her tht she loves more by kissing and making love to him...


they are JKR and ravan kumar...thy cant b lik normal couple thy are unique nd thy expres their love uniquly...

ishu taking frst step is really nice...

thy going to chnadigarh together...its lovely... finally thy can talk with each other without any hesitations...

ready rehna...hum log saath mein ja rehae hain...it touched my heart...

wonderful dear...im in ishra land...
Edited by shravani_2311 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A unique update as a title states😉...

Ishra reading each other mind nice, the thoughts which going thorough them was just perfectly show love, care and concern👍🏼...
⭐️Marriage is not all about sharing a physical relationship⭐️
ishitha analysis about the relationship and the line by her -*My Raman loves me a lot and i know that.. Action speaks louder than words👏... too good
the war between mind and heart by ishita simply beautiful shown...
ishra convo as usually filled all types of emotions - nok-jhok, concern, care esp
Love❤️...
the way ishitha feeling slight changes in his behavior was just wow...sensitive things was just shown perfect...
finally ishita got to know the truth , but the way you pictured ishita's expression just amazing...

ishita questioning raman was so cute -Can we not be as normal as any other couple..
reply by raman -kyun ki tum ho jhansi ki rani aur mein tehra tumhara Ravan Kumar, esp tum and tehra words gave so much peace...
confession was Unique and just excellent❤️❤️❤️...
kiss☺️❤️...
raman never leaves a chance to be naughty bhalla😉...
ishita taking the first move was awesome ...
oh alarm is kabab mai haddi😡...

hayee❤️ raman saying -* "ready rahna... bahar jayenge... hum dono Chandigarh jaa rhe h... " romantic trip 😉😉...


well written sharu👏👏...
just enjoyed it thoroughly...




Edited by Akshatha19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@anku , @shavi , @akshu @panku , @aru and @babu(piyu)...😳😳
#DKD rocks yaar...
Unres bhi kardo... jaldi se...


hope no eggs n tomatos...





Edited by shravsss - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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DIDDUUU
AWESOME 👏👏👏

Though I'm very poor in understanding the pati Patni the language of love, but still can figure out their inner feelings.
And I remember everything you told me the other day.
Relationship is about understanding each other's feelings without uttering a word.
And IshRa (I don't know about the show), here, does it so well.

Ishita's and Subbu convo that made her analyse the relation, the bond, that she shared with Raman.
Her struggle when she was confuse between the feelings that came out of her heart and the thoughts from her logical mind, was so beautifully represented. (Tears)

And Raman, Raman, Raman...he never fails when it comes to his kinkiness 😆
"Toh mujhe kiss karo" 😛

Awesome OS.
See we told you, write it again, it's going to get a better shape. And there you are, with the beauty and a wonderful masterpiece.
(DKD ka jaadu 😛)

How I love it when you talk about relationships. Be it a relation between a husband and a wife or a mother and child. You always work it out perfectly.

I love you for this one. <3
Edited by Piyu97 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shravani_2311

sharu its awesome...

loved the way hw thy comunicated and understnd each otehr well...

im in ishra land...when ishu heard raman talking to ashok and raman saying truth to ishu and hw ty hug and hw thy propose each other...

kitna cutely mein jyada pyar karti hoon...aww...<3...


raman's dialouge was nice to prove her tht she loves more by kissing and making love to him...


they are JKR and ravan kumar...thy cant b lik normal couple thy are unique nd thy expres their love uniquly...

ishu taking frst step is really nice...

thy going to chnadigarh together...its lovely... finally thy can talk with each other without any hesitations...

ready rehna...hum log saath mein ja rehae hain...it touched my heart...

wonderful dear...im in ishra land...


😳😳
thankyou shavi...

i was expecting Tomatoes and eggs... but now somewhat okay after reading your comment tat its not that bad...

hihi... Its all about their Uniqueness dear...

Welcome to IshraLand...😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gondi

Wonderful as usual 👏..

thnks dear...😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Piyu97



DIDDUUU
AWESOME 👏👏👏

Though I'm very poor in understanding the pati Patni the language of love, but still can figure out their inner feelings.
And I remember every you told me the other day.
Relationship about understanding each other's feelings without uttering a word.
And IshRa (I don't know about the show), here, does it so well.

Ishita's and Subbu convo that made her analyse the relation, the bond, that she shared with Raman.
Her struggle when she was confuse between the feelings that came out of her heart and the thoughts from her logical mind, was so beautifully represented. (Tears)

And Raman, Raman, Raman...he never fails when it comes to his kinkiness 😆
"Toh mujhe kiss karo" 😛

Awesome OS.
See we told you, write it again, it's going to get a better shape. And there you are, with the beauty and a wonderful masterpiece.

How I love it when you talk about relationships. Be it a relation between a husband and a wife or a mother and child. You always work it out perfectly.

I love you for this one.



Babu First of all i love you too...
I just tried my level best to get the inner turmoil of a wife and a hubby, when they really analyze their relationship in terms of what they really share...
Its quite different to understand... Though im telling you, you will soon understand that... 😳😳..

babu... i dint complete that OS yet... this was written tdy and will hopefully complete the other one with Toshiji's dialogues and post it soon for my bachcha...

well about the OS , i really dont know, how people will relate to my rants... but then reading yu , shavi , im pretty much confident its not too bad...

Love yu Babu...😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shravsss

@anku , @shavi , @akshu @panku , @aru and @babu(piyu)...😳😳
#DKD rocks yaar...
Unres bhi kardo... jaldi se...


hope no eggs n tomatos...






Arrey nahi itna awesome hai write up.
And best thing is all of us resed in series.
Shravu Di, Panku Di, Akku Di, Anki Di and me 😆

It reminded me of Anki di's dialog DKD jaadu 😆😆
Sahi hai yaar 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnkyu...😳😳

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