Jst A Moment Of Love : Mature /MINTENSE ;)

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HELLO EVERYONE
ANYONE REMEMBER ME WOOHOO THIS IS PROTHA GUYS REMEMBER ME HUH I GUESS NO HUH U GUYS FORGOT ME HAWWW I WONT SPARE ANYONE THIS TIME HOW COULD U GUYS OK FINE FOR THIS I M GONNA PUNISH U N UR PUNISHMENT IS TO READ MA WORST OS TILL DATE BWAHAHAHA HWS THE PUNISHMENT
THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I M TRYING A MATURE CONTENT SO PLZZZ BE HONEST IF I DID JUSTICE WITH IT OR NOT

N YEAH THIS OS OF MINE IS DEDICATED TO ALL THE ARMY PPL WHO SACRIFICE THEIR OWN LIFE FOR OUR SAKE HATS OFF TOO THEM
DUNNO WHY BUT I M SO MUCH OBSESSED BY THM
I M WARNING THIS IS GONNA BE HELL BORIN N YEAH WORST WRITUP I HV EVER WROTE SO BEWARE

N YEAH TO THM WHO PMED ABOUT ABT THEIR UPDATES I WANNA SAY A BIB WALA SORRY TO THM CUZ I ACCIDENTLY DELETED ALL MA PMS SO SORRY GUYS N ALSO I M STILL INACTIVE SO I COULDNT CATCH UP WITH ALL UR UPDATES I JUST COMMENT ON FEW WHICH I ACCIDENTLY OR SHOULD O SAY BY MY LUCK CATCH UP SO SO SOOO SORRY GUYS PLZ IS NAANDAN LADKI KO MAAFI DE DOOO

Today was the best day of their life the day when they r finally gonna be of each other in every sense . For them it feels as if they hv been waiting for this since ages. But still they cant be truly happy. With the happiness of being tied with the marriage knot to the person whom u love woth ur soul theres a pain of separation n fear...
*wht if i wont be able to see him again*
*no no no this wont happen he wont let tht happen he hs promised me he will come back to me n he will fulfill it at any cost i know him n i trust him yes i do*
Takin a deep breathe sanyu looked at rd sittin behind her absolutely who was absolutely gettin bored wantin to finish these rituals n spend sum quality time with his newly wedded bride. N he now noticed she ws lookin at him one look at her face n he knew wht ws goon in her mind. For a sec she saw pain in his eyes jst then she noticed he hid tht pain with his to die for smile. He knew he needs to be strong its his responsibility n he wont back off but today he want forget all those responsibilities , just wants to remember only one responsibility thts towards his wife his love of life his sanyu.
Finally all rituals over , they were together finally.

He saw she ws waiting for him in their bed he slowly moved towards her n removed her veil.
For a min they couldnt help but stare each other wanting to believe tht its not a dream, n him assuring her tht he is finally hers n will always be n he will be with her always. As if trusting to wht his eyes depicted she closed her eyes makin him realize tht she trusted him n is ready to take a step further.
Takin her permission he held her hands n took her to the slowly removin her jewelleries n placing soft kisses there. She closed her eyes but it didnt felt the way she expected it did not fel right she didnt knew why but it didnt felt the same. Jst then she felt his lips trembling nw she knew the reason .

Till nw he was the one who was assurin her makin promises to her , being strong in order to support her but wht about him . Hw could she forget he too ws goin through the same pain which she ws experiencin.
Jst then she turned n saw sum glint of moisture in his eyes which he tried to hide but failed . She cupped his face n kissed his eyes n then pecked his forhead. Nw it was impossible for him to hold on he too needed to ease his pain he was tired of being strong. Nw he got the support he needed his sanyu whom he can show this vulnerable side of his .
They both kept hugging each other passionately letting no air pass between them ,soothing each others pain n assuring tht nthin can separate them not even death. Finally frm wht seems like etrnity they broke their hug.

She looked in his passion filled eyes. He slowly moved his face near to hers giving in to their passion finally kissing each other madly as if its their last kiss. She heard him mumbling smthing between the kiss.

Rd: wht if smthing happens to me at...

She didnt let him cmplt his sentence. Before he could cmplt it she deepened the kiss again n started nibbling his lips punishing him to even think like tht. She continued her assault on his lips and as a result earned a moan frm him

S: Dare to even think like tht mr shekhawat if anythin happens to him tht day would be the last day of mine

Nw it ws his turn to punish her. As soon as she complted those lines he bit her hard making her moan his name loudly. Her moans made him go crazy. His name never sounded so melodious to his. He wanted to listen it again n again frm his whole life. *Whole life* heck he didnt even knew hw much life he had to spend. He loved his job but right nw smwhere he is hating it but wht an agony he cant even hate it its his passion his dream to die while serving his country but wht about sanyukta was it an injustice with her was he being selfish. He stopped adruptly n moved away frm her.

Rd: sanyukta i m so selfish i played with ur life . Here i hv no clue about my life n i tagged u along with me i ruined ur life sanyukta i m sorry plz forgive me

*THAP* he got a tight slap across his cheek . He looked at her shocked as she grabbed pulled him to herself.


S: So Mr RSS hs finally realised it but isnt it too soon huh u idiot couldnt u hv realised it when u used help me all the time in studies n with ma dads probs , while savin me frm goons n those bullies , or while proposin me in frnt of whole , or while makin promises to come back safe n sound while goin to border huh, u should hv realised it when u married to me rd, when u mafe me fall in love with u so madly tht jst live few hrs or mins of my i m ready to give up my whole life in ur memories why didnt u realised it then rd.

Rd : I m so...

Before he could she kissed him

S: jst dont rd i dont want hear ot nw wht i want is just u plzz rd i dont know whts written in the future atleast we hv our present in our hands lets jst make it memorable . plzz give few memories of ours to help me survive this distance. Jst make urs in every way rd.

As she finished her words he grabbed her by waist pullin her to himself bringing his lips close to hers clearly statin hw much he needed her. She slid her hands through his hair pressing him. Soon they were fightin for dominance none ready to give in but he was RSS could he let her dominate him in this field NO. He bit her lips . She gasped , finally grabbing the chance he entered her mouth exploring its each n every bit of her mouth. As if he ws trying to keep each n every corner of her mouth he made love to her mouth.

She became breathless n he realised it but he didnt wanted to give in so soon he wanted to love every part of her as much as he wanted to but right nw its important for her . So he left her mouth still not satisfied with himself.

As soon as he left her she started placing wet n fiery kisses on his neck with on hand tugging his hairs n another unbottoning his sherwani. Just as her trembling fingers touched his chest his control snapped. Nw its impossible for him to hold himself back her mere touch is enough to make him control freak . But nw he didnt want to lose his control he wanted take things slow ,to make it beautiful memorable for her n for himself.

He tugged her hairs to make her stop her assaults on him he guided her hands to unbutton his sherwani placing soft lingering kisses on her neck . Soon she freed him frm his shirt nw ws roamin her hands on his chest n back . Both closed their eyes to memorise each others touch to feel each other. Somehow he opened his eyes still feeling dizzy due to her touch. She hs still her eyes closed wantin to feel him more.

He admired the beautiful sight in frnt of him her flushed angelic face in bright , n she in her bridal dress with no jewelleries but a mangalsutra of his name around her neck and vermillion which he filled in her partition which clearly indicated she was his fully. He placed soft lingering kiss on her closed eyes due to which she opened her to look into eyes of her husband which held immense love n care for her .

As she opened her eyes he started kissin her all over her face with all love he held for her then kissin her nape n then neck slowly sliding down the blouse frm her shoulder placing soft kisses there .

Before he could compltely took it off frm her he stared her eyes wantin to know was she ready for him. Only he knew how much aroused he was right now it was tough for him to hold on to himself he didnt wanted to scare her frm the he had for her n moreover he wanted their first time to be beautiful n perfect n above all memorable just as she wanted .She kissed him in approval she hs waited for him for long but nw she didnt wanted to she wanted their love n passion to lead them.

He didnt knew when he lead them towards their bed with him sittin on edge of the bed n she standing bw his legs . He wound his arms around her hips n she holding his head pulling him closer to herself as he ws kissing her bare stomach feeling every bit of he ,soon he felt her stiffening .

She saw the clock pointin it ws 3 O'clock just 3 more hrs with each other n then he would be gone. Tears started forming in her eyes . He looked at her then the clock he looked into her eyes n saw a pain of longing in them. He stood up n started kissing her madly wanting to forget all his pain all his longing she too started responding with equal passion wanting to live the moment fully pouring their all the pain inside each other.

Due to the urgent need to breathe they broke their kiss n rested their foreheads on each other breathing heavily n looking passionately in each others eyes. He then lifted her delicately in his arms n placed her on their bed with him over her. He pecked her forehead n took her in an urgent embrace puttin his full weight upon her pressing her. It ws painful for but this gave her pleasure more thn it ws right she felt loved , with him in her arms it seemed perfect. Finally after lettin out his bottled up emotions he somehow balanced himself. He ws about to say sorry to her but she again stopped him by kissin him on his lips. He smiled n trailed his fingers on sides of her neck , shoulder tickled sides of hr breast n then wrapped his arms twrds her waist . He then trailed his hands her back tryin to undo her blouse . Finally relievin her frm her blouse he lowered himself on her takin her hardened mounds in his mouth suckin and nibbling then gently to please her . She moan in pleasure n ran her hands on his chest then his back pullin him more to herself makin their bodies come on contact as much as they can. She ws meltin with each and every touch , his kisses were makin her insane she wanted more she wanted to feel him fully , she wanted keep every bit of this moment in her memories till her last breathe. Soon she felt him pleasin her another peak with his mouth while the other one with his hands .

Finally givin equal pleasure to both her mouths he started placing soft lingerin kisses on her abdomen n waist not leavin even a bit of them while she struggled with zip of his pants . Soon their all the clothes were laying while these two lovebirds were trying to live their love as much as they can . He didnt let any part of her body untouched with his love. She saw sum stitches on his body which she kissed in a need to feel the pain he must hv felt tht time

Now it ws time to pour their love which ws throbbin inside them in each other . He eased himself inside very delicately n careful enough so tht he dont hurt with the hardness he hd inside him. It ws painful for her to take him inside jst as it ws painful for her to love him but ot would be much more painful if she didnt love this man who ws ready to give up on all his desires n necessities for her. She had adjusted herself for him. He pressed his lips on hers swallowin her moans him. Soon they were on heights of pleasure of becoming one, two bodies with one soul .
They joined each other to heights of their passion of their fulfillin each other . They mended their souls in each pouring their love tht they had finally he bacame hers n she became in every sense they became one.

He collapsed on her exhausted. Both feelin an unknown happiness of fulfillment . He dipped his head in her cleavin wantin to feel this moment .

Soon the clock ticked 5:49 O'clock and their blissful moment. Just as she heard the clock she clung onto not letting him leave he too held her in a tight embrance doesnt want to leave either but tht ws needed he needed to fulfill his responsibility towards his country n for tht he needed leave a sanyu . He didnt knew tht this time would he be able to come back to her as this ws goin to be toughest war tht they had faced till nw but he knew she will wait even if it meant to wait lifetime she will ,damn she ws stubborn. Somehow gatherin himslf he extracted himself frm hr n grabbed his clothes.

S: dont go plzz atleast this time i promise frm nxt time i wont stop u

Rd: i need to plzz dont stop me dont make it more difficult

S: i will . Plzz rd stop i beg u

Rd: i cant sanyu plzz

Not listenin her furthe he went to bathroom takin quick strides. She clutched the sheets which were still warm due to his warmth . He came out of bathroom n without sparin a glance towards her he left her.

She drew her knees towards her chest silently crying to fight the emptiess tht has jst crept inside her

PHEW DONE SO HW WS IT BAD WORSE OR WORRRSSSTTT.
I M FEELIN HELL EMBARASSED FIRST TIME I WROTE MARTURE CONTENT THT TOO THI WORSE GUYS I M SO SORRY I PROMISE IF ANYONE HS PROB WITH THIS I WILL REMOVE IT JST ASK ME ONCE OK I WONT MIND JST BE HONEST GUYS DONT SHARMAAOFY
N ABOUT MINTENSE UMMM FIGURE OUT URSELF

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AlbusDumbeldore thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this OS was intense and brilliant.👏
Sandhir's promise for each other
keep writing more!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres
kykya likhi re tu.. mazt maza agay re/.. it was hot and emotional/..
lovely..
thanks for the pm./.
ab jake mere wale inres kar..
ab padke bataaccha h na mera coomebnt/

buhahahahah🤣
Edited by samridhigoodiez - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hot indeed!!!!
u shud write more often...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was awsme
Really loved it
It was hot n so romantic


U penned it flawlessly

Keep writing more


Love u
Keep smiling


vote for patakha pankhis

duniya k chakhe chuda de hum sandhirianwale
sandhir din ane wale h
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: AlbusDumbeldore

this OS was intense and brilliant.👏

Sandhir's promise for each other
keep writing more!!


Thanks a lot dear glad u liked it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez

res

unres
<font color="#fff">ky</font><font color="#fff00">kya likhi re tu.. mazt maza agay re/.. it was hot and emotional/..</font>
<font color="#fff00">lovely..</font>
<font color="#fff00">thanks for the pm./.</font>
<font color="#fff00">ab jake mere wale inres kar..</font>
<font color="#fff00">ab padke bataaccha h na mera coomebnt/</font>

<font color="#fff00">buhahahahah🤣</font>


THANKS A LOT DII 😊
Glad u liked it
but unress kaha krni h moiko yaad nhi 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mrdodokk

Hot indeed!!!!
u shud write more often...


thanks a lot dear
glad u liked it 😊
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Originally posted by: newmoon18

It was awsme
Really loved it
It was hot n so romantic


U penned it flawlessly

Keep writing more


Love u
Keep smiling


vote for patakha pankhis

duniya k chakhe chuda de hum sandhirianwale
sandhir din ane wale h


Thanks a lot dear 😊
glad u liked it
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thanks dear 😊

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