~Veera/Adaalat Crossover OS~ Rakshak Bana Qatil (Pt1 updated on pg1) - Page 2

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Mehwish :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18
why I think u made ranvi yhe killer... just my feeling... it was superb

Thanks 😊 and about ur thoughts ...there is more than two "Ra"...😳 Stay tuned to find out 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice start. Keep it up. Waiting for the next part.

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Sheetal Sonuley

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thou' i hate the nihal murder track,you have put the story very nicely. The story is with proper flow

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow superb well written dear keep it up 👍🏼 u perfectly merge two charachters in your story 👏

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Mehwish :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteBiya
Wow superb well written dear keep it up👍🏼u perfectly merge two charachters in your story👏

thankyou 😊 yes will definitely continue soon 😉

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