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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#401

HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!

now coming to the ending...

everything happened too soon. I wish you had given this one more chapter + an epilogue.

And some really awesome Raghav-Kalpi hot scene... That has been your forte... the passion.

This one... you let it fizzle.

These are your babies... you have complete right to treat them the way you want.

I still love your creativity.

Edited by _Mini_ - 11 years ago

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#402

Oh my what the???? It ended??? So soon!!!? Awww! But alls well that ends well!

So now I can be happy that you completed a story after like ages!!!!

Yipppeee!!!!

Loved this ff but here you made Raghav the majboor Singhania!

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#403

Oh God! Thanke to Neetu to speak up or Raghav the dutiful son will take his own sweet time
Love the happy ending

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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#404

Nice story dear.. And i too hate endings...

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#405

lovely, but can we please have an epilogue

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premap

@premap

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#406

Missed 4 updates. I must be 'buried' under workload. Sorry. did not comment . Lovely updates ,with tension in Kalpi/ Rags lives . Finally all our tears seem to have gone to waste ! Everything seem to be a huge joke of the parents. If you don't mind my saying , You have a rather a 'hurried ' ending. It would have been better, for you are capable of good endings. Most probably, short of time , Right ? Whatever, Thanks for a lovely ff and for giving it an end !

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#407

Originally posted by: premap
Missed 4 updates. I must be 'buried' under workload. Sorry. did not comment . Lovely updates ,with tension in Kalpi/ Rags lives . Finally all our tears seem to have gone to waste ! Everything seem to be a huge joke of the parents. If you don't mind my saying , You have a rather a 'hurried ' ending. It would have been better, for you are capable of good endings. Most probably, short of time , Right ? Whatever, Thanks for a lovely ff and for giving it an end !

I have a problem with ending a story... You may have noticed when my stories reach towards the end I stop writing them... It is something I am working on.

I tend to detach myself from the stories and characters and Rush to an abrupt ending... I am hoping to able to overcome this with time.

I have to force myself to write the final chapter... Hence it is a very poor one...

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#408

Sorry for late cmmnt

Loved Ayaan here he is too cute...him planning wit neetu to unite ragna

Ragna bridal dress shopping scene was awesome...loved dat for once kalpi took lead n kissed him😳😉

So saahil n vitthal were mastermind behind this plan... dey wanted ragna to fight for der love but raghav was way too dutiful son n was ready to forget his love but not go against him 😆

Loved d story n end was beautiful😃

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