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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi


Sorry Dhivii...I couldn't comment yesterday...I wanted to make long ones but didn't get much time.
So I re-read it again & Unresd my posts 😃

I was excited because I really missed ur long..sweet and encouraging comments..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh finally this was one of the most awaited update Poor Uruvi

I liked it how she signaled karna with the help of maid😛 also everyones restlessnes was amazingly written👏⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

Oh finally this was one of the most awaited update Poor Uruvi

I liked it how she signaled karna with the help of maid😛 also everyones restlessnes was amazingly written👏⭐️

thanks sansi dear!!but y short wala comments this time
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

thanks sansi dear!!but y short wala comments this time



I m in Tension Tension🤢 my bro nd sissy, RoFling😡😭
I will post big wala comment pakka bt nt now🤢 Preparing for my DA🥱
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow Dhivii wonderful update 👏

By reading the first few lines I was wondering what happened to Bhanu...then got to know that she was shocked to see the gruesome behead of Shisupal...Uruvi was strong enough to support and be in Bhanu's side.

I felt panchali was trying too hard to be nice with Uruvi

And Panchali mocking Dury's fall, I never understood what did she see so amusing in this fall thereby spilling more seeds of hatred among the Kauravas.

The story is coming to an important climax Dhivii... 😛
Well done & continue Soon 😊

Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update dhivi dii

I must say I was quite shocked too I mean what happened to my bhanu I thought she was preggers but then I thought not ...

Then I came to know it was all due to shishupal's death

Well tysm I know u used the name angarani ... I love it

😳

Liteally ur portrayal of frenemy side of uruvi towards draupadi needs a [B]
👏
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Her emotions are perfectly described where at some point she thinks what shishupal said to her was wrong and Krishna did right
And how even a samraagi lacks respect here in her own palace and she feels guilty ... The cordial frienship love drau and uruvis convo

Loved it her confusion towards kunti
And her memorisation over subhadra

Especially when arya karna ignores her and dury does the same really can imagine the whole scene

Then her restlessness she tried her best that message never reached karna.
The bad omen of 13 pic.

Aww you really made drau laugh here
Surely they now turn enemies

Mitra dury Ki fury aha climax
Par hang kia

Somebody is pissed at ur smile panchali
Posted: 11 years ago
Dhivi di I res for all future updates
I will be inactive till 12 th March exams...

Beautiful work and do send me the PMS
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update Dhividi. Specially tensed situation for Karn nd Ururvi, loved her message "13 is always bad omen" smart woman 😛
Panchali's laugh added fuel in fire of Dury's anger.
Pls update soon

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