FF - A Rude Awakening COMPLETE STORY PG 145 - Page 94

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Posted: 10 years ago
Suvi...all loose ends tied...and a super duper closure👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Well what a beautiful way of ending... With SAC forgiving Zeenat, facing his past in calm n cool way.. N with his wish (Arzoo) besides him, Sahir becoming a complete man...
Kudos Suvika👍🏼 A beautiful story.. Beautiful way of penning down... U made Sahir n Arzoo our part of lives...

Thank you for for such a heart- touching story. Amen...!!!


Keep Writing.. n please write atleast an OS or SS for these two wonderful characters.😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love the show and lets hi5 the idea of Humsafars Season two.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Swatsu

Wow! What a finale! Suvi hats off to you for this wonderful journey.

I am truly lost for words to describe how I felt after reading the Zeenat closure.It is so beautiful and probably the best ending I could envisage.The fact that Sahir has moved on and also had it in him to forgive Zeenat and all this due to Aarzoo is really touching.Zeenat too wishing him well was again a feel good factor.
You have so beautifully closed the loops like the three sisters dancing and enjoying the rain and pushing Sahirs car has been so well brought out in the painting.



That was one scene in the serial which portrayed the innocence and sense of abandonment when Aarzoo and her sisters played in the rain and contrasting scene of an angry Sahir in the car.The show had so much promise in the initial months before it was sadly butchered in the name of TRPs!!!!😭

I agree. Wish they had stuck to their initial story

Suvi even after this show is over I know I will come back to IF to read your FFs.Pls let me know where and when.

Sure I will. 😃

Thank you and wishing you all the best for your future.Hope and pray that you may soon publish your works.My best wishes to your family too as I know without their help you could not have achieved this.

Thank you so much for your wishes. And my works have been published both in Kindle (e-book) and Notion Press (hard copy). Yes, my family.. esp my kids take a lot of credit for that.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sagi.

Beautiful ending. Reminds me of What Next? from Mom.

All loose ends tied up and forgiveness is supreme.



Thank you Sagi. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: prettypri

Suvi...all loose ends tied...and a super duper closure👏



Thank you Priya...But one liner from you?? 😲 Not done 😭 I know its the last chapter but i still want your essay 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: palsekar.manti

Well what a beautiful way of ending... With SAC forgiving Zeenat, facing his past in calm n cool way.. N with his wish (Arzoo) besides him, Sahir becoming a complete man...

Kudos Suvika👍🏼 A beautiful story.. Beautiful way of penning down... U made Sahir n Arzoo our part of lives...

Thank you for for such a heart- touching story. Amen...!!!



Keep Writing.. n please write atleast an OS or SS for these two wonderful characters.😛

OS... I don't know. There is still the epilogue for this one. Lets see after that.

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Posted: 10 years ago
that was a beautiful ending suvi
marvellous

can we expect a epilogue ?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -vandy-

that was a beautiful ending suvi

marvellous

can we expect a epilogue ?



Thank you Vandy. And yes... epilogue on Saturday 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
I really can't believe it's ended. I am going to miss reading ur ff. Please pm me incase u r going to write another.
What I love the most was that the characters were mature and not oscillating from goodness to greedy to again being normal. They are consistent. Arzoo loves him and accepts her love and once she knows that Sahir loves her there is. O doubts. She trusts him completely. This is what has helped Sahir to forgive zeenat. Her love has completed him and there is no place for hatred.
A nice closure in the end.

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