Ky2 new os.. Notification

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey all... Ever since I have become addicted to ky2, been thinking of writing an os and now I have finally decided to do it. It ll be a continuation of the current situation of police station fiasco.
Hope you all like it and I ll be writing in mix of Hindi and English ... N m not much used to conversing in hindi so m sorry for any grammatical mistakes that mite crop up. Since it's my first tym at writing an os...plz do bear with me

And my update of the next chapters will be purely based on the number of responses I get for each chapter.

So here it goes...😊

Ky2 new os : continuation of the current scenario frm police station

Recap : manik leaves in his car in front of nandini and not responding to calls or messages by nandini. Nandini tensed.

Chapter 1

Nandini : Manik !!!!! Please pick up the phone...please !!!!!! (Anxiously trying him many tyms but to no avail. ) ab main kaise usse samjaungi ??? Na woh mere phone calls utta rehi hai aur na woh meri messages Ka reply... Ek kaam karti hoon... Main navya se jakar baath karti hoon...shayad woh meri madad kar payegi...

Mukti on the Oder hand , goes to meet abhimanyu in the hospital but he is no where to be seen. Dhruv and aliya are angry at each other and keep thinking about what happened today.

Meanwhile manik in anger drove to his place, and angrily shuts himself up in his room and thinks abt all that happend in the court room

Manik (to himself ) : I just don't believe it ... nandini mere baare mein Aisa sochti hai... (Has a flashback of what happened today between them before entering the courtroom and the hungama in the courtroom ) I mean how the hell could she feel that I have a hand in soha's murder...hamesha woh barosa ke baare me baath karti rehti hai and woh khud muj par barosa nehi karti . I need to get answers ... And for that there is only one way.

On the other side, nandini goes to navya 's home and narrates all that happened . ( cabir not at home dat tym )

Navya : Kya ? Tum manik se nehi mili Kya ??

Nandini : Maine usse dekha aur awaaz bhi diya par usse pehle hi gusse me woh apni gaadi main chale gaye.

Navya : ab tum Kya karogi ???

Nandini : ab toh ek hi rasta hai...

And the screen freezes at manik and nandini's determined faces.

Precap : dhamaka filled manan valentine's date.😉

Index


CHAPTER 1-page 1
CHAPTER 2(part 1) - page 2
CHAPTER 2 (part 2)- page 3
CHAPTER 3 - page 3
CHAPTER 4 - page 5
CHAPTER 5 - page 5
CHAPTER 6A - page 6
CHAPTER 6B - page 7
CHAPTER 6C-page 8
CHAPTER 7-page 9
CHAPTER 8 - page 9
CHAPTER 9-page 9
CHAPTER 10 - page 10
CHAPTER 11A - page 12
CHAPTER 11B - page 12
CHAPTER 11C - page 13
CHAPTER 11D - page 14
CHAPTER 12 - page 15
CHAPTER 13A - page 15
CHAPTER 13B : page 17
CHAPTER 13C - page 17
CHAPTER 14 - page 18
[DIV]CHAPTER 15 - page 19

CHAPTER 16 - page 20
CHAPTER 17A - page 20
CHAPTER 17B - page 21
CHAPTER 18 - page 22
CHAPTER 19- page 24
CHAPTER 20 - page 25
CHARACTER SKETCH- page 25
CHAPTER 21 A - page 26
CHAPTER 21 B - page 27
CHAPTER 21C - page 27
CHAPTER 21D - page 28
CHAPTER 22 - page 29
CHAPTER 23 A - page 29
CHAPTER 23 B - page 30
CHAPTER 24A - page 31
CHAPTER 24 B - page
31
CHAPTER 24 C - page 32
CHAPTER 25 A - page 32
CHAPTER 25 B - page 33
CHAPTER 25 C - page 34
CHAPTER 25 D - page 35
CHAPTER 25 E & teaser - page 36
CHAPTER 26A - page 37
CHAPTER 26B - page 39
CHAPTER 26 C - page 39
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Zoya_09 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start...do write more plz ! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great start...pls continue soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting start .pls continue soon..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting strt
Continue son😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thaxx for the comments...well here s the next update

Recap : manik and nandini taking some decision after police fiasco.

Chapter 2 - part 1/2

in nandini 's house

Navya : yeh tu kya kar rahi hai ?? Humme kuch samaj me nehi aa rahi hai... kuch toh kaho...

Nandini : ( opening all the gifts manik gave and spreading it on her bed ) maine decide kiya hai ki main aaj raat ko tikh 8:00pm manik se milne jaungi... mujeh apne pyaar par pura bharosa hai..woh zaroor ayegi wahan... aur main aaj raat usse sab kuch sach sach bataungi.. nyonika maam ke baare me... jo kuch bhi unhone kiya woh tikh nehi tha.. mujeh un par shak ho rehi hai... uske baad jo bhi hoga woh mein dekh lenge

Navya : good. Yeh bilkuk sehi faisla hai... tumhe jo karna hai tum karo aur baaki sab maata rani par chod do... woh sab kuch tikh karegi... acche logon ka saath woh kabhi nehi chodti .

Nandini : hmm... [aiyappa !!!plz meri madat karna..plz mere aur manik ke beech sab kuch tikh karna... (in her mind) ]

navya : ab chalo... kade kade kya soch rahi ho ? date ke liye tyaar nehi hona kya ???

Nandini (wiping her eyes) : haan...

Navya : chalo... aaj tumhari best frnd tumhe saja degi...tikh hai ... ( nandini nods her head )...waise tumne chachi ko kaha ki aaj raat tum late ayegi ????

nandini : chachi aur rishabh toh chacha se milne madh island gayi hai... wahan chacha ka kuch surprise hai chachi ke liye...woh log toh aane mein der hogi...par maine chachi se permission li hai tho its fyn.

Navya : wah ! Kya baath hai ... aaj tho moorthy khandan ke sabhi sadasyom ke mann me pyaar hi pyaar hai... woh kya kehte hai... haan... love is in the air ...

Nandini smiles...

Meanwhile in malhotra mansion.

Manik was dressing up . He was wearing a red shirt and bLack blazer and getting ready for the big nyt which was supposed to be special but its not now any more...

Manik : maine bahot saari galti ki hai but not any more... i m gonna set everything ryt before tmrw.

nandini meanwhile dresses herself just as manik wanted her too n cmes before navya

Nandini : main kaisi lag rahi hoon ??? (nervously )

navya :wah nandini ... tum tho bahot pyaari lag rahi ho... manna padega... manik ka choice tho vakai me bahot achi hai... kafi achi research ki usne tum par... tabhi tho tum aaj bilkul pari jaise lag rahi ho... aaj tho pakka tum dono ke beech mein saari dooriyan khatam hogi kyunki is getup me dekh kar manik zyada der tak tumse naraaz nehi reh payenge...

Nandini : thxx navya... ab chalti hoon.. warna mein der hogi pahonchne me.

Navya : haan haan... chalo chalo... aur hum bhi chalte hai..

Precap : THE DATE...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part...pls continue soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thxx for the comments guys...really boosted my confidence to write more 😊

Chapter 2- part 2/2

Recap : manan getting ready for the biggest nyt of their lives

Nandini reaches the venue well before tym and was mesmerised seeing the decorations and also on the table she saw a gift wrapped bottle with a card that said : for u... But mere Anne se pehle math kholna... Happy valentine's day

Nandini ( her eyes full ) : manik ne mere liye... Nehi hum dono ke pehle valentines day ko khas banane ke liye ithna kuch kiya hai... Aur Maine Kya kiya... Uska dil dukha diya uss par barosa na karke...


Anonymous : haan ... Tum ne bilkul sahi kaha...

Hearing that, nandini turned suddenly and found manik standing behind her.

Nandini : manik !!!!!

And she ran towards him to hug him and as she placed her hands on his arms,

Manik : naa aa... First a dance...

Saying this he took her dance and started ball dancing with her .

Nandini : manik ! Main...

Manik (cuts her talk ) : meri selection kaafi achi hai na... Coz ure looking really gorgeous tonight... Even better than what I thought u would look like...

Nandini blushes and manik stares at her.

Then nandini remembers her promise to herself and immediately says : manik ! Main tum se kuch kehna chahthi hoon..

Manik : (holding his finger on her lips ) : main bhi tum se bahot kuch kehna chati hoon

Nandini : par mujeh jo kehna hai woh bahot zaroori hai... Woh aaj jo kuch bhi hua unke baare me main baath karna chahthi hoon.

Manik : aur main bhi ussi ke baare mein baath karna chahthi hoon

Nandini : manik !! I love u !!! Aur main ne aaj...

Manik ( with a smirk ) : AND I HATE YOU MISS NANDINI MOORTHY...

The screen freezes on nandini's shocked face ( background music : hui mein teri joganiyaaa... Joganiyaa...)

No precap.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh no...poor nandu...
update was awsome...
pls continue soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Was having free tym and since it's start of my os, here is another update ...😊
Next update will be when I get minimum 30 likes and 10 comments 😉... Naa... Just kidding...but still wud b lovely if I cud get sme likes

Chapter 3

Recap : manik says IHU to nandini-nandini shocked

Nandini looks on wid a shocked expression as the words IHU echo in here ears... With great difficultly had she made up her mind to confess her love for him and dis was definitely something which she could never have expected in her dreams.

Nandini : manik ! Yeh tum Kya keh rahi ho ??? Manik ... I m really sorry ... I noe I shd have said dat u were not involved in soha 's death ... But tum ne kaha ki speak what your heart feels ...speak the truth... Jo tumhe sach lage wahi tum kaho... Aur Maine wahi kiya manik...main toh behosh thi us waqt aur mujeh tikh se pata bhi nehi hai ki wahan Kya hua tha.. Upar se nyonika ma'am ne mujeh us waqt ki CCTV footage dikhayi thi and...and I got confused manik... Aur cabir ne...

Manik : ( anger and sarcastically ) seriously nandini ??? Nyonika ? Cabir ?? Aur kin kin logon ko tum gaseet loge aapne aap ko sahi sabith Karne ke liye ???? And even if nyonika did show u d footage, tum ne phat se maan bhi liya that I killed soha ????

Nandini : no manik... Plz... Aisa nehi hai...

Manik : tho phir kaisa hai nandini ?? You noe what...agar kisi ne mujse kaha hota ki nandini has murdered sme1 aur CCTV footage dikhaya hota, tab bhi mein tumhe hi support karti because I trust you and I expected the same from you.

Nandini : no manik...plz... Maine sirf sach bola aur sach kehna itna bura hai , mujeh pata nehi tha.. Aur nyonika ma'am ne mujeh jhoot bholne ko kaha tumhe bachane ke liye and...

Manik : phir se nyonika ??? Nandini...tumhe sach bolne Ka bahot shauk hai na ...tho phir tikh hai... Tell me something ? Kya tum ne ek pal ke liye hi sahi , yeh socha ki that I,manik malhotra killed soha khuranna ???

Nandini : manik ... Main confused...

Manik ( pulling her towards himself ) : haan ya na nandini... ?? Main ne sawal purchase hai and I want an answer to it ...

Nandini ( in sobs ) : manik... Main..main..

Manik : SAY YES OR NO...DAMMMIT !!!!!!

Nandini : yes !!!!!!!!!!! ( bg music : hui mein teri joganiyaaa...Joganiyaa )

Meanwhile navya had reached hers n cabir's home and found cabir sleeping on her bed

Navya : Wah ! Aaj tho laad Saab valentines day ke din ghode baech kar so rahi hai...kamal hai !!!

Cabir : I heard that...

Navya : acha ??? Tho yeh bhi sun lejiye ki woh bed humara hai aur hum wahan sona chahthi hai isliye aap utiye abhi issi waqt

Cabir : jee nehi...yeh ghar mera hai aur Saath sath yeh bed bhi mera hi hai...isliye no

Navya : maaf kijiye... Is ghar par kitna haq aapka hai utna humara bhi hai

Cabir : ok maaf kiya... But still iss flat par sirf aur sirf mera haq hai kyunki landlord ko Pura kiryaa tum nehi balki main der rehi hoon.

Navya gets frustrated and throws a pillow at cabir who in turns throws it back and thus a major 15 minute pillow fight begins and den ..

Navya and cabir : bas ...enough ( both panting )

Navya : haan...bas...aaj ke liye itna ladayee kaafi hai...baaki ki ladayee hum kal yehi shuru Karenge

Cabir : tikh hai... But bed dey rahi hoon isliye yeh mat samajna ki tum aaj ki ladayee jeet chuki ho madhubala..woh aaj mera mood acha hai isliye de diya...warna...

Navya : warna Kya cabir ?? Aur tum yeh bhi mat samajna ki Maine tumhe maaf kiya...agar Iska hisaab kitaab bara bar nehi kiya tho humara Naam bhi navya naveli nehi...

Saying this navya pushes cabir out of the bedroom and shuts d door leaving poor cabir outside to sleep on the couch
Cabir : mukti !!!! Kahan phasa diya yaar ???

From inside

Navya : hum ne sun liya... Ab sone ja rahi ho ya nehi

Cabir : haan...MAIN JAA RAHI HOON...

Navya suppresses a giggle then suddenly remembers about nandini

Navya : nandini !!! Pata nehi manik aur uske beech main sab kuch tikh hua ya nehi... Hey mata rani !! Plz un dono ke beech main sab kuch tikh karna...
Precap : intense drama and realisations...

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