THE HIDDEN LOVE{completed} - Page 35

Originally posted by: Sonatia

Pls updt soon dr.i can't wait...

Honestly sachiee sachiee bolu toh this update was exactly as I guessed! I dnt know how to react on this kind of telepathy?😳 bt trust me frm Drau Uruvi convo to the last part nd spcly last saree part u read my mind! I m quite shocked here!
I know nd believe it that Kunti indirectly imposed her claims on Karna keeping him in oblivion ofcourse! Why??? I dnt feel ny reason for her to do so! How could she do it aftr she threw him in the high water currents of ganga!😡 what right she had on him? Can u give me reasons fo this act of her? She is a villan for me always! I respect her as a strong woman bt she was shrewd!!! Here too u fantasized that saree part jst bcoz for Kunti Uruvi was her family, isn't it? She had no right to do so! Srry I m arrogant I know! I did deviate frm the topic na! I m so very srry lemme know if u want me to Edit this!!

PS: I meant by echoing my thoughts regarding Kuntis such claims nd rights on Karna keeping all in oblivion nd the saree pat I was gonna write same kind but in Panchalis POV I think u will understand what I mean! I think so u will get my point😳 bt if u think I insulted Kunti tell me to del it or use report button😊

again Beautiful part Dhivya.
Loved the descriptions Of Indraprastha city.
Draupadi & Uruvi's relation, their talkings, Panchali's excitement.
Bhanumati's worry, U described everything so beautifully.
In this Karna Uruvi FF, U so nicely portrayed the struggle of Panchali.
Of course, I always dislike Kunti, she is the only villain in Karna's life.
she gave birth to Karna, but she ruined her life & she is also responsible for his death( My opinion)
If Kunti cant accept Karna as her son, if she failed to give him any right, dont understand why she always claim a right on him???

awsome part.beautifully wriiten.
again I am repeating my line, Dhivya U creates magic through ur writings.
waiting for the next part.

Sorry the like button ditched me

This update was lovely as always

The way you described
Panchali's happiness
The ability to blend with everyone at least she is trying

Uruvi was a tad bit rude to her on that you are one and only lovable wife of Pandavas

But nevertheless I kinda enjoyed this conversation

Where panchaali was pridefully happy and a little arrogant

Bhanumati and uruvi
Are a little more same that they find it hard to accept panchaali

Hey i also loved the vivid description of the magical palace and the way panchali dons that it's created by mayasur epic scene when they enter antahpur

Now my dear kunti mata why didn't you give such warm hugs to Karna when he was born why such love and tearful eyes now why care now what will you get on showering your love by such cryptic means huh
Sorry for my humble comments on kunti she just...
I get in Kali avatar whenever I hear this name

But on the comical note i loved these lines" Uruvi!! You are stunning..no doubt Angaraj is going to swallow you by his eyes."
"really jiji"
" I am not going to miss your husband's ogle on you"she winked.

Awwie the irony is that was an ogle of anger and confusion

Damn It kunti Mata you always create problems and tensions between people who are very much happy without your concern .
And lastly well portrayed Bhanumati s anger and worry for duryodhan

Sorry for long comment but at last ty for the small part of subhadra abhimanyu and other small Pandavas cute

End of detailed analysis.

Result loved it dear
Update soon eagerly waiting for it :-*