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Kaushitaki

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I don't know what made me write this suddenly. ... m not at all good at poetry. ...just an amateur work...

There is more to it...

Obviously. ...much more to it...

Every word spoken. ..Every deed done. .Every gesture made...

Doesn't speak out for itself...completely. ..

No..it doesn't! It cannot do so...

There is more to it...

Obviously...much more to it...

Every path walked... Every hand held. ...Every warmth felt...

Doesn't define itself. ...completely. ...

No ...it doesn't! It cannot do so. ...

There's more to it...

Obviously. ..much more to it...

Every goal reached. ..Every joy felt. ... Every tear shed...

Doesn't end a chapter. ...completely. ..

No...it doesn't! It cannot do so...

There's more to it...

Obviously. .much more to it...

But...

Every time you live... Every time you breathe... Every time you feel...

Does mark the end of mere existence. ..

Does mark the beginning of sheer life...

There's nothing more to it...

Obviously...there's no more to it...

Nothing more than...LIFE!!!!!!

Edited by ---Kaushi--- - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

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kaushi...the poem is great. love how u described about life and its inspiration

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Titli

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Posted: 11 years ago

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awesome Kaushi.. U r brilliant writer. Dont know why u neglect this talent.. Tfs.

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Chitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

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nice dear thanks for pm 😊

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Bon_Vivant

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Posted: 11 years ago

#5

Awesome poem kaushi.thanks for the pm.

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Rini

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Such poems rather than being literally criticized/ reviewed, have to be FELT! And you are an expert at writing such pieces di. I actually...felt it! And the last stanza, just blew me away! Loved it.

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Jyothi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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hey kaushi... hope ur doing fine...

its nice...😊

thnks for pm..

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Moumi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#8

such an inspiring one..lovely and brilliant...

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LavenderBloom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#9

very nice inspiring true poem di...😊😃😃😳😳
loved it...😊😃😃
remarkable wonderful poetry di...👏👏👏⭐️⭐️😊😃
thank u so much di...🤗🤗

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