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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice poster
& Amazing Update Dhivya.Loved the whole part & Loved each lines & every words.
U are truly a magician Dhivya.U brillaintly play with words.
For me, Your writing is like a beautiful painting.

awsome, superb, mindblowing.
I am mesmerized.waiting for ur next update.plzz continue soon.
& sorry for late reply.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read it Dakka.Poor Uruvi.Cute girl she is.She was sl eager to hear the swayamvar narration and alas that left her sad and restless.Superb description of her inner struggle.And my AryaPoor man he was in an all romantic mood and Uruvi...😒I loved his confession part.And Bhanu❤️I totally loved her.Loved the cute romance of both Kuruvi and BhaDu.And I have no doubts about whom Dury loves the most.KaDu
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Posted: 11 years ago
hai all!!
@Angarani!! thanks dear for ur sweettt comments😃
@ sonatia...mou baby!! thanks dear for sparing some time inspite of ur busy schedule..take care dear!! don't get strained much..plan ur time equally..eat well sleep well..study well😃
@ Sania!! madhu!!! not only u ur words are also sweet as madhu..apt name for u..now ur words are doing magic in me..thanks dear!!
@vaniii!! my love..thanks for ur kyiliii comments...so u say dury loves karna more..?? aww vani !!! u too say the same..??? 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
I read it...RES
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Unres
Srry for being so late ha😳
Superbb updatate👏 u penned Dury so well its amazing⭐️ jst loved it
He loved Pitamah the most is quite unexpected here bt I am nt schocked at all😊
Beautifully u described small Suyodhanas feelings on being neglected after the Pandavas entry...loved the way how Karna felt his frnds turmoil⭐️

BTW why did Uruvi hesitate to go to Indraprasth bcoz of Panchali??😕 I didnt get it!

nyways looking forward or next update nd convo betn Uruvi nd Panchali⭐️

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Posted: 11 years ago
Super Dakka.Dury's answer was totally unexpected.I loved the way you described things from Dury's pov.It was so touching.I really felt sorry for him.It is not easy for a child to handle lack of care and recognition.No wonder he grew up being so revengeful to the Ps.And Uruvi poor girl her mind is never at peace.One or the other thing troubles her always.Looking forward to the happenings at Indraprastha
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely one although I have no idea what it is about!! lol..
Will read soon the earlier ones soon :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Reshu16-

Lovely one although I have no idea what it is about!! lol..

Will read soon the earlier ones soon :D

oops !! sorry will pmmimg to all my buddies I spammed ur name too..yeah I know it is quite difficult to read all the previous parts..anyways thank you😃
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