ARIYA-kyun dard hai itna mere hi Ishq mein

Hi
I'm new to the forum and I wanted to write a story on Ariya please give me feedback
so here it goes
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part 12-page 17
part 13-page 19

All the characters are same in the show


Afternoon 3pm Etf Conference hall
Rathore DAMMITT!!!!!!! Ye Riya aakhir gayi kaha Rawte I'm warning U agar Riya ko koi kharoch bhi aayi main Tumhari jaan lelunga Shree & Chotu lets go & find Riya,our bali ka bakras- specky sen and the foodie Commando follow their Etf chief they haven't seen their Rowdy Rathore boss this much angry even Arjun is shocked beyond wits to see his best friend anger
and Acp Arjun Suryakant Rawte for the first time couldn't say a word
Shree Aaj Arjun sir ne saari hadd paar kardi
chotu haa shree mana ke Arjun sir ne bohot dhukh dekhe hai zindagi mein lekin unko koi haq nahi banta ke woh logo ko iss tarah insult kare aur Riya ki to koi galti bhi nahi thi bewajah unhone use itna kuch kehdiya pata nahi Riyu kaha hogi...
Arjun ye maine kya kiya Riya ki koi galti bhi nahi thi aur maine use itna kuch kaha how can I ?????? Par important baat ye hai ki Aakhir Riya gayi kaha ? Kaha jaa sakti hai woh?
Flashback
8am etf conference hall
Shree Chotu Riya chatting happily & doing paperwork as their khadoos bosses haven't arrived yet
Shree Yaar Riya please ek koffee banade mujhe bohot neend aarahi hai ye paperwork ne toh mujhe pareshaaan kar rakha hai
chotu haa riya please mujhe bhi 2 coffee aur thoda sa nashta dede jo tune humare liye laya hai
main thak gaya hu iss paperwork se main aur nahi kar sakta ufff
riya smiled at them warmly she knows everyone in the team must be hell tired coz of the case they solved last nite they were working on it continously from last 15 days and moreover they came office at 7am to complete paperwork even though Rathore told them to come little late but our trio wanted to go out for some reason and they will be leaving the office as soon as they complete the paperwork bcoz their special friend is gonna come so our terrific trio told Rathore they will come early and finish the paperwork
riya came with 10 methi parathas 2 sandwitches 4 cups of coffee [2for chotu;-)] they were eating and doing paperwork where as riya was working very silently ...

nice start

interesting concept
oh hell arjun again hurt riya 😡 😡
Sameer was hell angry on arjun
more over worried for riya
hope Sameer & choree will find riya soon
continue plz

Rawte 😡😡😡 never change 😈

Interesting. .. super. ..

please continue. ..

Hi thanks for the feedback it really means a lot to me please continue giving me feedbacks so dat I improve 😳

nice start where she gone and what
he done to her update soon

wow dear it's beautiful starting

Its a lovely start
Do continue soon
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Hi
thank you sooo much for the feedbacks mmmwuaaah love you guys
part 2
Rathore Shree and Chotu thinking what happened few hours ago
flashback
our teen tadkas
Riya Chotu and Shree after having their breakfast started doing paperwork after few minutes their dashing khadoos bosses has arrived shree and chotu wish them but Riya was lost all of them got worried why their all time non stop chatterbox is so quiet & looking lost so finally Rathore called 2-3 times but Riya didn't answered so Rathore went beside Riya and shaken her shoulder and she came out of her trance & said sorry her eyes were moist now everyone is extremely worried so Rathore asked her if she's ok or not and suddenly shree & chotu bombarded her with questions what happened what's the matter why she's so quiet so our Rowdy chief told them to shut their mouths and let riya at least say something & Rathore asked looking at arjun dat has someone told her something to which she told she's tired but no one was convinced but they said ok then riya said she will bring coffee for rathore & bring coffee and then they started working as no new case has come
Arjun
What happened to her she always wish me she can sense my presence something is definitely wrong with this chatterbox & kuch toh chutt raha hai and how can riya forget my chai
shree to chotu yaar kal raat ke case solve
Karne k baad se riya bohot quite hai najane kya hua sirf haa yaa naa mein jawaab de rahi hai
chotu haa yaar mujhe bhi riyu ka behaviour bohot ajeeb lag raha hai aur aaj toh riya ne arjun sir ki cutting chai bhi bhulgayi aur kal jab hum dinner kar rahe the toh maine mazak se riya ko arjun sir k naam se chidaya toh usne apna raudr roop dikhaya
shree kyaaa!!!!!! Ooodeeebaba mere bheem ye tu kya kah raha hai
chotu haa yaar use gussa hona aata hai ye mujhe kal pata chala itne saaalon mein
guys chotu and riya are raised in an orphanage and are best friends they live on the same floor in the same building beside each other and shree met them in college & they got training & were selected for etf after dat shree also took the flat beside dimpledoll & bheem then they became inseparable terrific trios so chotu knows riya very well
chotu haa shree hum dinner kar rahe the aur kal riya bohot pareshaan lag rahi thi toh maine usko cheerup karne k liye arjun sir k naam se tease kiya mujhe laga k woh at least smile toh karegi lekin Riya devi toh durga ban gayi mujhe usne bohot gusse mein kaha k aage se kabhi bhi uske saamne arjun sir ka naaam na lene k liye I was shocked mujhe samajh hi nahi aaya aur upar se aaj toh riya unki taraf dekh bhi nahi rahi hai
shree haa yaar her eyes used to twinkle with happiness when she sees him arjun sir phir bhale hi use kitna bhi daate she always smile toh phir aaj aise kya hua
Rathore and arjun in their own cabin's lost in their thoughts suddenly rathore got a call from commissioner Sir for the case so
Rathore told riya to call arjun from cabin to conference hall riya went to arjuns cabin she knock on the door and arjun has a big smile on his face as to finally she has come so he can ask her about her strange behaviour he was really worried to see her quite he wanted to tell her dat he's always there for her but he didn't because there's their chipkooo best friends bombarding her with questions and rathore too so he controlled himself and decided to talk to her in private as he has realised that he too has some unknown feelings towards this stubborn bong beauty who has managed to break all the walls that he had made after loosing roshni that too without his notice her one dimple smile is enough to calm him it irked arjun when she didn't even look at him once today and his favourite beverage cutting chai was tasteless she's the only one after rathore & roshni whom he cared for sooo deeply or with whom he can share his pain he has finally achieved his only goal the reason for joining etf sikandars death it was riya who helped him to get that important file and harddisk to get leads of sikandars chotu with the help of his informers and shree also helped him a lot
by decoding the password even rathore has broken few rules to get clues regarding sikandar and our fab5 worked really hard to reach sikandar arjun and rathore has killed sikandar brutally hug each other cried then both became friends but even now they have their famous Rathore rawte nokjhoks over everything and our dear AkduSaduRakshas ASR has mellowed down he has shifted to a flat besides his best friend sam as he feels suffocated to live alone
riya knocks on the door
come in said arjun
but riya didn't came in she opened the door said there's a new case and rathore sir has told told him to come to conference hall looking everywhere but him and this angered super Angry cop to no limits so and as soon as ria was about to go he came to her hold her by waist and pinned her to wall their faces inches away
arjun why riya why u r doing this to me why ur avoiding me ????? With hurt almost moist eyes what happened tell me what's the matter I will solve it! he loosened his grip a little when he saw her scared face
riya aap se matlab without any emotions
arjun extremely shocked riya
she pushed arjun freed herself and told him not to interfere in her personal life and went out arjun couldn't understand why she said like this but then came to the conference hall where all were waiting for him and decide to leave it for a while as he thought she may be very tired because of work then rathore briefed them about the case
While briefing too arjun couldn't help but concentrating more on riya even rathore also noticed it why shes not even looking at arjun ?riya loves arjun and arjun too has the same feelings but he requires some time to open up
they went and solved the case too as it was a simple case of robbery-guys I'm not writing anything about the case
All of them came before lunch and arjun was boiling like a lava bcoz every time arjun went towards riya she avoided him she gave all the case details to rathore even she went with rathore only in his suv whenhe offered her ride to etf back after solving the case so riya went with rathore and shree chotu went with arjun