FF- Koi Tumsa Nahin

New FF- Koi Tumsa Nahin

Intro-

Jai Walia- a hard working son, loves his massi and parents a lot, is 25 years old

Nacheket Walia- also known as nattu, is a great person, is 23

Uday Walia- owner of the Walia Industries, loves his children and family a lot, has cancer but has kept it a secret from every one in his family except his wife

Krishna Walia- Loves her family, suffered one heart attack after finding out Uday has cancer

Jigyassa Bali- jai's older sister by 15 years married to aditya bali, has 2 kids anu and sahil, is very loving

Adi Bali- jigs wife, is older than jai but are great friends

Anu Bali- loves her uncle jai a lot, spoils her to death, more like friends with nattu, is 20

Sahil Bali- nice person, is more like friends with his uncles, is 22

Massi- Uday's sister, loves her family

Kiran Dixit- is a great mother, loves her family a lot,

Nacheket Dixit- great friends with Uday, owner of the Dixit industries, great father and husband

Prem Dixit- is a great son who loves his sisters and parents a lot, is 28, works with his dad but has gone to America for awhile for a meeting

Bani Dixit- a great daughter, looks like her mother and is the most responsible of all, loves her siblings a lot, is 25

Pia Dixit- the third child, is very fashionable yet is a little more like her sister bani, loves her family a lot, doesn't think money means everything, total opposite than in KS is 23

Rano Dixit- is a bookworm yet very stylish, a very sweet girl and is a little spoiled, is 21

This is my 1^st ff, more characters will be introduced on the way, so do you guys think I should continue on with the story?

-Zeinub

awesome start

cant wait for the 1st part!!!! 😳

thanks for the comments guys

okay, here is part 1a

The Dixit Mansion

kiran: Bani! Tumne tumhara saman pack kiya? (sorry, i don't know much hindi, i can only understand it cuz i watch so many hindi movies so please bear with me)

Bani: haan mama!

kiran: okay, come down stairs right now, your father and i have something very importent to discus with you

Bani comes dowstairs in a pear green salwaar suit and sits down on the sofa in between her parents

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Nacheket: Bani, there has been a proposal for, ek bahat acha larka hai, we really like him

Bani: kya, but dad

is cut off by kiran

kiran: bani we knew you would react like this islyea we want you to just meet him once when you come back and finsh your studies in London

Nacheket:haan bani, your 25 now, and by the time you'll come back you'll be turning 26 and its time you find someone, please bani, at least just once

Bani knew she couldn't let down her parents

Bani: tiek hai, i'll just meet him, but that doesn't mean im getting married to him

Nacheket: thank you bani, we knew you couldn't let us down

Bani hugs her parents

Just that second piya and rano come running down

Piya: di you agreed omg, this is so exiting

Bani: what, you two knew about this?

rano: yeah, we're sorry

as then bani pulls them into a hug

Bani: duffers, u think im mad at u?

they all smile and hug again

ok im sorry but that was part 1a, will try to post asap!

grea start 👏

love it

oh she agreed

i bet its jai

ctn soon

dammy

lovely start!! please cont. soon 😛

thanks for the comments, will update soon

gr8 storyline 👏
cont. soon

gr8 intro and storyline....update soon. 😉

okay im writting right now 😆

part 1b

Walia Mansion

you see someone still sleeping when a lady comes in a pulls the curtains and that lady turns out to be jai's mom, krishna

krishna: yea larka bhi nah,

she looks at the someone sleeping and it turns out to be jai!

krishna: JAI!, uto! varna tumharah flight miss ho jayege

jai completely forgot about his flight quikly shots out of bed

jai: shoot! sorry ma, i completely forgot

kirishna: kamal hai, jai this is the ur last your of studies to complete in London!!! everyone is waiting 4 u downstairs!

jai: mom, i'll be therein 10 minuets!

kirishna: jaldi karo

jai rushes into the bathroom and takes a quick shower and then comes downstairs in a red pollo and jeans

jai: sorry everyone, you the this is.... (hets cut off by anu)

anu: we know your excuses mamaji, you were held up at work,blah,blah

krishna: haan jai, batan nahin kya hoga when you get married, aur tumhara bechara patni ko kya hoga

everyone laughs

uday: that reminds me jai, i need to talk to you about something before you leave, its very importent

he looks at krishna and she gives him an assuring smile

jai: sure dad

anu: mamaji, how long are you going to be gone?

jai: only a year

sahil: yeah, ONLY a year,

jai: yup

jigs: bhaiya, you have to call us EVERY day, got it

jai: yes boss!

everyone laugh, then everyone finshes their breakfast and tony puts all jai's bags in the car while jai goes to the study were his dad awaits him

jai sists down

jai: haan dad kya baat hai?

uday: jai beta, your mother and i disscused something very importent last night, we are thinking of you getting married.

jai: WHAT!!! SHADDI!

uday: haan beta, one day me and your mother wont be alive anymore and we want to think about you setleing down, larki ki naam hai bani dixit

jai: lekin dad,

uday: no jai, its been decided, your going to meet the girl and her family as soon as we get back

jai: tik hai dad, jaise app ki marzi

with that he leaves to the airport to london, but not before saying a final goodbye to his family

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airport

bani is there saying bye to her parent and hugs her family one last time, they get all emotional and stuff her family leaves and as she is walking towards her flight she bumps into jai and she is about to fall but he catches her and they have an eyelocking session in the middle of the airport

thats all for today, sorry 4 mistakes, didn't get time to go over it

haila!! already met at the airport!!!!!😆😆😆 cute!😳😳😳.......

lets see wat happens!

plz cont soon!