~The Caged Bird Flies~ A Vidarth FF -Chapter I updated-Pg5 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes

Eyes don't lie!! And the lines at the beginning - Wow.Simply wow. Lips may lie but eyes won't👏👏
Kya baat hai!! I could see that this was going to be a wonderful read as I read those lines. And it was.
But wasn't it a bit short..?? Dil mange more!!! 😆
Chalo koi nahi,will wait for the next update.
Thanks for the dedication.

Originally posted by: --aimy--

Eyes don't lie!! And the lines at the beginning - Wow.Simply wow. Lips may lie but eyes won't👏👏
Kya baat hai!! I could see that this was going to be a wonderful read as I read those lines. And it was.
But wasn't it a bit short..?? Dil mange more!!! 😆
Chalo koi nahi,will wait for the next update.
Thanks for the dedication.

Originally posted by: Moony87

Taaal thoke ke CAGEWAA..

Will UNCAGEWAA at night.. 😉😆😆

Fantabulous trippy...me loved it.the way u describe the house and poem was awesome .👏

Originally posted by: Moony87

Sorry for the delay.. But finally..

Uncaging.. 😊

Wonderful poetry Hippy.. Yep.. Lips can lie.. Faces too can lie.. But eyes they never lie.. 👏

And with that I guess this was the perfect title of the chapter where the journey of PaRan, ViDhir and Vidarth starts. Coz all three emote so well though eyes in the show. 👏

Wonderful description again yaar.. I could imagine the fortress style house so clearly.. Tall walls and a glowing moon. Perfect set up for a mysterious night that can turn any way round. 😊

Oh.. Aona Dhiru has fear of heights.. 😆.. Lekin bandi ko uthaane ka dedication maanna padega.. Overcoming your fear for abducting Vidushi.. 😆👏

And Parth saw Vidushi.. Its so so refreshing to see hero not gawk at the heroine's oh-so-divine-beauty-in-moonlight , like it happens almost everywhere. Kudos for that. This means this will be a deep connected love story and not some physical attraction start up.👏👏👏

Lovely peek-a-boo in the past of PaRan friendship.. Would like to know that in detail..How they became frenz and then criminals on run. Aah RD ka attitude is crisp and curt. Just the way I like it.. 😆

My fav set of lines..

Parth, on the other hand was like an open book albeit with a password, if you tried to hack into him, he would only block you further.

Marvellous these are.. 👏👏 And apna heroine is a strong chic.. Lovely fiesta. And Partho is affected by her eyes.. Beautiful.. I love it when someone sees depths in eyes.. They are my most fav route of romance. Wonderful update yaaar.. Next time thoda aur lamba maangta.. 😊

Originally posted by: purepunjabi

Fantabulous trippy...me loved it.the way u describe the house and poem was awesome .👏

love paran bond... plot seems interesting waiting for next update...and vidarth .❤️❤️