T2: Adhuri Kahani (Part 60 & epilogue: page 94) 16/8

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#511

Helna 🤗

i was missing this story sooo much (all credit goes to my work schedule)

very very very nice going 👍🏼

To imagine Sha in this condition... in the hospital... away from Sam & Masa is always very tough... but it was bound to happen.

The way he is calling Dr. Khan as Khan... is sooo unlike Sha isn't it... i dont know if i am the only one who is feeling it... but still... & i am taking it as the "Arjun-Effect" 👍🏼

the small part where you showed Sam & Aisha's current life... and also some tiny bits of Masa & Roshni... was really touching.

I am loving the way Dr. Khan is dealing with Arjun and Sha.

"And don't you think Sha deserve to know it?" Arjun don't reply to that. "till date you were using him. you are belonging to him."

"No that's not true." Arjun looked perplexed for a moment.

"It is the truth Arjun. look around. Show me Shaleen. The one whom you have been protecting. It's only you who know him. He doesn't know you. He is here for reasons unknown to him. tell him the truth. Let him know you."

an excellent step taken by Dr.Khan (actually by you 😉👏)

dont know about the outcome... but this was much needed 👍🏼

will wait for more 😳

and sorry about the irregular comments. but will try to read & comment and other stories soon.

P.s Like button not working. but SuperLike from my side 👍🏼

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

+ 36

Posted: 11 years ago

#512

Awesome updates!

loved them!

Khan is trying his best n his efforts r showing the results too..

Arjun is out now..

Sha.. he's the one who is sufferring the most..

waiting for the big steps!

do continu soon

thanks for pm

p.s.- sorry for short comment

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#513

my 900 word comment got deleted 🤢 🤢 🤢

can't recomment now 😭

baad main karungi... tujhe toh pata hi hai... what I thought of this update 😳

you know where 😉

But for now, me = dead

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#514

Hey all... Here I am back

@laila: yup Arjun is back here too. Thank you so much Laila. Well you asked a crooked question, hope you get the answer soon

@prachi: thank you

@neeraja: dont worry. mein hu na. the face off comes here. waiting for your response.

@maha @asyalover @sisgeo: thank you so much

@vidya: aah good to see you back chechi. thank you so much. Missed you a lot too.

@naina @nikita: thank you buddy..

@shanaya: next installment ... i dont think it will be easy to read. as it was defentky not easy to write. you will know why soon. thanks again

@megha @rajeeviansonai: thank u

@shahla: the confession took 7 months. so it was not early. I have skipped months in between. No, Arjun was born after the death of parents. But he knew the back ground of Sha. Its not like Arjun began on oneday just like that. it was a process. thanks again.

@sneha: small update?? na it was long for me. more steps coming up. wait and see thanks

@GB: you are back. no answer for your questions. they are some of my lollipops. hihihihi

@pihu @anu @areesha: thanks

@shreya: thank you so much yaar. hope u get free time soon. looking forward for your review. thanks again

@godly affection: thank you so much buddy

@Sree: awww koi ni. its ok. I Already know how much you liked it. so fikar not

NB:

another very hard pat coming up. took a good time for me to type it.

You can see sudden switching of alters. Hope you could visualize it as I did. Tried my best in that part. Waiting for you reviews.

Edited by kunchu - 11 years ago

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#515

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#516

uff...
that's so bad of u heli

the switching was written and shown so efficiently...
u wrote it really well..
it makes the reader easy to visualize properly

khan is taking every step very efficiently
he knows wat he is doing
he so genuinely helping both sha and arjun
but who can help the one who does not want to get helped...

masa talking to both sha and arjun was a gud move
but no one got to watch the switching planning of arjun

I trust u...
u MST have planned a big bomb to the next update...

continue soon
awaiting next update eagerly

love
Birdie

Edited by fly.high - 11 years ago

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sisgeo

@sisgeo

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#517

Nice work. Scene with masa was heart warming. Hope arjun does not cheat the doctors. If arjun is playing them all and then there is no hope for sha. Well let c.waiting for the next update. Update super soon

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#518

wow heli di
that was amazing
can't express in words
i was holding my breath i the while reading it
plz plz update soon

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#519

KK**Shouting out loud**

Chudel kahi ki.Tujhe main Jaan se maar du

You should be thankful kk that you are not infront of me warna

This is how i feel right now

Private mein milna bahot curses aur gaaliya dungi tumko.

Anyways,now that you have cliffhanged & there is no option other than waiting let me get back to the update.

This has to be the best update of AK here KK.Firstly because after a long time the two Sha-Arjun came face to face & their interaction was bang on.I could visualize their conversation just by reading those lines.Secondly,after a long time Sha met his Maasa which was very emotional more like a soothing balm for him considering he has gone through alot these months all along.The next highlight being Arjun's conversation with Maasa.That was a surprising one to see the longing in his words.

There was another scene wherein Khan was trying to explain Sha about his split personality with reference to the mirror was very well written 👍🏼

Just like Maasa says to Arjun,"Aap bohot shatir ho KK". Shaina wala kuch hint to do warna mujhe nind nahi aayegi **GB going Takli**😭

When only one of them remains at the end. Till then we will have to wait."

The very next reply would give them the result of their wait of nearly 2 years What is this?