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shah23BR

@shah23BR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#491

hey

its really gr8

superb

its good to see sha trying to move on

but why don't he want to meet others?

its good to see that sha has taken interest in one of them

good to see sha and khan's friendship

so sha is taking interest in knowing arjun

hope his reactio will not be negative

afraid for sha's reaction

good choice for khan

update soon

sorry for late

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#492

remember me??

I hope I am not too late😳

Read 2 chapters in a go.

Firstly, The banner is out of the world.❤️

It is your best Edit.

You already know I used to love your extra efforts eg, Edits, stretches, Vm you did for Khamoshiya

N now you are doing it for Adhuri kahani.

That's what makes you better than many others.

You do not just write a story you also make us feel it.

now coming to the chapters:

the updates are coming out beautifully.

It is praisable that you have made these chapters so interesting which could otherwise have come out as dull if not written properly.

They seems natural & not rushed.

I simply loved the description of 'Mind' in chapter 50.

Dr.khan.

Mohnish Behl is the perfect choice 👍🏼

his character is so simple yet appealing.

I can bet you have done so much research for these two chapters.It was very much evident in these updates.

I must say you hard work has paid off.

You did a brilliant job.🤗

Ps. Yes, I missed Arjun a lot😃

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#493

thanks

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#494

Hey all after more than 2 weeks I return to update this story. But I see very little response. Jo mila hai.. wo Masha Allah bohot khoob hai!! Loved every word you guys wrote for me. But I still miss some whom I used to see before. Maybe exams and study issues. Hope you people would come back one day to this posts. Awaiting for your reviews.

@sneha: haa!! one of my number one stalker! thanks re!! Glad you are liking the progress

@Manali: thanks yaar. Arjun returns soon

@sweetchilly: thanks a lot dear. hope u like the next part too

@areesha: thanks

@birdie: thanks yaar. missed u here

@nikita: thanks.

@miss precious: Thanks. cliffhanger more to come.

@naina: will detail abt Roshni later. thanks

@megha: thanks

@asyalover: dont like Sha! oh cant help re. Arjun comes soon. wait for him

@sree: yup Arjun was up n abt long back. you will know more. Food or thought is already chalu. thanks for that tip. I agree Sam should be hardccore. He was just missing Sha. and what he said was only related to see him alone. He wanted to help him in any way, he didnt know how. the anger was just a mask to his helplessness. I hope u cu drelate to the next part too

Thanks a lot re...

@rajwiansonai:thanks

@shanaya:thanks buddy.Arjun coming soon

@atu: aaj thak asylum nahi gaya. hope none puts me there soon. thanks atu

@neeraja: thanks . nope Rony is upto nothing. he is safe

@shahlaa: your questions answered soon. thanks

@laila: thanks yaar. glad you liked the banner. hardly many noticed it. ad very glad u related to khamoshiyan too. it always touch my heart when someone mention it. thanks a lot. Yes i did some background check for these.Hope I didnt overdo it. I dont know why I am losing my readers.

NOTE:

Thanks again to my silent readers. I don't know why I am losing my readers down here. Hope I didn't overdo in my writing. Even if it is so, I don't think I can help it. This flow was decided long back from the start. now while reading one may feel it is a bit too late or early or absurd. Well let me know. I am not trying to copy any fiction or movie, even though I am inspired from a few. So I am just going with my flow. And no, I am not going to discontinue it as I know that atleast some are waiting for the update.

Kunchu.

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#495

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#496

unres...

Honestly, I wasn't expecting this kind of a update so soon.😆

Khan did a great job.

He has been observing Sha since so long & also collected some infos about him from his own loved ones or may be from Rosh. He did his homework well.😛

"He was born in the flames of Sha's hidden anger. It's anger that made him" I simply loved this line. It sums up Arjun's whole existence. 👏👏

Arjun is back

I am surprised with his calm reaction.

I am still confuse why he was so composed??

Is it the reason he told to Khan or was it just a lie to a cover up??

BTW, I believe on the latter one😳

Ps. About your reply:

You must be kidding. right??

You did not overdo anything.

The best thing about your stories is that they seems natural, A person can actually relate to it.

About your readers, they must be busy like me. It's exams season na

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prachi

@prachi90

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#497

Awsm update
Finally Arjun cameout nd start to speak.
Intrestng one... 😊

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#498

hi kunchu di🤗

to be honest I'm scared😳 so because shaleen couldn't stand up for himself his hidden anger and outburst created his alternative. so arjun think that he helped shaleen all along😲 yes shaleen couldn't stand up for him self but it wasn't his weakness and his alternative is feeding all those feelings and made this dangerous arjun🥺 all though what he did. all sha didn't do and he surved justice to all but still it ruined sha's existence🥺

i don't know when face to face with arjun how sha would take this and how will he pick his pieces again🥺 i'm dreaded to even think of this scenario💔

update soon di love u🤗