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LostGirl02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Mrs Raizada that was a lovely OS😃 Thank God you included the wall.🤣I thought since it is a basketball court the wall won't make an appearance but it did!!Yayyy!!🤣Parth "hates" the attention he gets from Vids *Rolls eyes* and he hates her indifference even more.🤣

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Aimy

@aimyx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Parth in first person!!! Interesting. You gave a clear picture of what is going in his mind. And that was like a treat to read.
Parth waiting for Vidu,their cute banter,the kiss and the ending. They were perefct.
Do write often yaar.
Loved it<3

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ChaiBiskoot

@ChaiBiskoot

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

@loony noony .. thank u 😃 yes the wall will magically oops logically appear in vidarth's OS 😆

@phoeny 🤗 dil kabaddi kar gaya on reading ur comment! i hv a lot to learn and yes ur playing a damn good and substantial role in that .. sacchhii.. !

@aimy.. shukriya ! wil surely write more to release my pent up emotion for vidarth 😆

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CoffeeLover

@ChrisinS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

WOW! That was lovely!

You really need to write more and I will give you a punch if you ever say you got no create juices in you...that was so well written!

Firstly the way you expressed the desperation and impatience in Parth was amazing.

Secondly, I loved the whole scene! And you included the infamous wall! 🤣

Seriously though it was awesome! Keep writing more!

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ChaiBiskoot

@ChaiBiskoot

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Vikruti
WOW! That was lovely!
You really need to write more and I will give you a punch if you ever say you got no create juices in you...that was so well written!
Firstly the way you expressed the desperation and impatience in Parth was amazing.
Secondly, I loved the whole scene! And you included the infamous wall! 🤣
Seriously though it was awesome! Keep writing more!

Thank u viks ..

The Wall! its enough to bring up endless romance.. 😆

il surely try writing more 😃

Edited by ChaiBiskoot - 11 years ago