Vidarth OS:I Need You - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mrs Raizada that was a lovely OS😃 Thank God you included the wall.🤣I thought since it is a basketball court the wall won't make an appearance but it did!!Yayyy!!🤣Parth "hates" the attention he gets from Vids *Rolls eyes* and he hates her indifference even more.🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Parth in first person!!! Interesting. You gave a clear picture of what is going in his mind. And that was like a treat to read.
Parth waiting for Vidu,their cute banter,the kiss and the ending. They were perefct.
Do write often yaar.
Loved it<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@loony noony .. thank u 😃 yes the wall will magically oops logically appear in vidarth's OS 😆
@phoeny 🤗 dil kabaddi kar gaya on reading ur comment! i hv a lot to learn and yes ur playing a damn good and substantial role in that .. sacchhii.. !

@aimy.. shukriya ! wil surely write more to release my pent up emotion for vidarth 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOW! That was lovely!
You really need to write more and I will give you a punch if you ever say you got no create juices in you...that was so well written!
Firstly the way you expressed the desperation and impatience in Parth was amazing.
Secondly, I loved the whole scene! And you included the infamous wall! 🤣
Seriously though it was awesome! Keep writing more!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vikruti

WOW! That was lovely!

You really need to write more and I will give you a punch if you ever say you got no create juices in you...that was so well written!
Firstly the way you expressed the desperation and impatience in Parth was amazing.
Secondly, I loved the whole scene! And you included the infamous wall! 🤣
Seriously though it was awesome! Keep writing more!


Thank u viks ..
The Wall! its enough to bring up endless romance.. 😆

il surely try writing more 😃
Edited by ChaiBiskoot - 11 years ago

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