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Posted: 11 years ago
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He wants her to know

He wants her to know that he is with her, supports her but how can he when she left before he could even see her at the launch of the ugly red jackets, raincoats dikhte hai a colleague had told her. She laughed, itney bhi bure nahi hai.

He wants her to know he appreciates her, but how can he when he turns around after the shoot and there she is sitting with his male co stars chatting away with a press mike in her hand. She comes by his dressing room kya hua aap ko kuch puchna tha kya? Before he could answer the director called the shot

He wants her to know he respects her every decision but how can he when before he gets even a chance she shows her respect first. Dragging him and making him sit, she says chaliye na, aur ek selfie, please! Don't worry Sirf ek jagah post karungi aur iss baar kuch bhi nahi kahungi.

He wants her to know how thankful he is for every time she stood by him but how can he when he does not know where he stands with her. Achaa everyone mere jail jaane ki khushi mei sabko aaj Mai samose khilaungi.

He wants her to know he is captivated by her, and the only way he can show it is by holding her closer than directed in the shower shot.
Thanks she said, as he handed her the shawl and towel, thandi kitani hai, AAPko nahi lagta?
Nahi mujhe tho garmi lag rahi hai and he winks.
She shakes her head and hides her smile.

He wants her to know he is fascinated by her and the only way he can show it is by letting his lips stay a second longer on her cheek after she shifted her hair behind her ear.
Bal main peeche karun?
Nahi main hi karti hun
Main tumhe bolunga phir Karna
Bolna nahi Sirf dikhana
Don't worry shot ke time pe meri bolti vaise hi band honey vali hai.
Her lips smile, his lips stayed.

He wants her to know he is bowled over by her and he lets her know.
Now the ball is in her court.



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P.S . have never received so many PMs before. All requesting various scenes. I don't know if I have done justice, but my small bit in honor of all the love you have showered on my fun fiction.

NOTE::: THIS is purely fiction. FUN fiction. this may be interpreted as an RPF and then again may not. If it has offended anyone please forgive, must be taken in good fun and no offense is meant to any fan base.
Just wanted to scribble something that is Diffy from the track thank you for reading. Press like or write comment if you enjoyed.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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incredibly briliant! i feel like i am watching a paralle show... wow I love your writting and eagerly waiting for next 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow.. Thats So Sweet ☺️
Superb 👏👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What a beautiful & captivating imagination you have. I so love reading your posts. It feels real...
Bravo!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww ☺️❤️
true to the video...he will get bowled over by her if she bowls~☺️

Edited by vidya.anand - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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JUST when I thought this day cant get any better
THANKS C


RESSS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh.My.God!
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Columbia.. Ye padh ke meri bhi bolti band ho gayi 😆😳


As if all these scenes from the show weren't magical enough, you've just gone and added new meaning to them.

Loved each line.. EACH line! It's like poetry for all us die-hard romantics. So beautiful. Sigh!

It goes from silent, unspoken words, to subtle hints, then not-so-subtle ones, and now the ball is in her court! Seriously, this couldn't have been written in a better way.

Kudos👏

P.S: Your works deserve an index!

Edited by nrn1486 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Colu darling😃..Need I say how awesome you are when you script these beautiful FFs😃👏..Not only is it beautfiully written, but such a perfect plethora of emotions sealed beneath those lines😳👍🏼..Seriously cannot get enough of this..



Some lines which stood out for me:😊

"itney bhi bure nahi hai"..Haayeee😳😳..I can sense so much from that one line..

"He wants her to know how thankful he is for every time she stood by him but how can he when he does not know where he stands with her."☺️☺️

"Don't worry shot ke time pe meri bolti vaise hi band honey vali hai."..Oh my god..kitna awesome tha yeh wala line..😃😃

And the last line toh killed me Colu🤢😳☺️

"He wants her to know he is bowled over by her and he lets her know.
Now the ball is in her court. "

Currently Im in DIVAN heaven😳🤪..And yes I do believe there is something which happens beyond all this which is not visible to neither us, nor him nor her😊..But wanna say a big thank you😃 and give u a big hug🤗 for giving life to my fantasy and imagination😊😊..As I always tell "I dont even care if this is NOT TRUE, but the way you express it, all seems SO REAL and I want to believe in this"😃🤗

Edited by aishu_divan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww C!!! *BIG HUG* for you! 🤗
I am like this ☺️ after reading this! Thanks for fulfilling our demands!😃

He wants her to know how thankful he is for every time she stood by him😊 but how can he when he does not know where he stands with her. 😔

Nahi mujhe tho garmi lag rahi hai and he winks. 😳

Don't worry shot ke time pe meri bolti vaise hi band honey vali hai.☺️

These lines in bold...uff uff uff...maar daala yaar!!

Everytime with your posts you take us to a world and life btwn these two, we know probably does not exist and never may..but you make that imaginary world and life come alive and real for us!

"The imaginary is what tends to become real." 😊 and I am very happy in it!😉
Edited by Jyoe - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Damn I had to log n.cudnt stay away. M already in a soup..in 2 weeks phd presentation. N we were informed today.. thought will not come online.. but but...I cudnt control. After reading ur story I had to come online n comment. Kaise kaise karte ho...I m amazed.. I can see them thru ur words...C, ek request orek ho jaae..plz plz pretty plz...it will help me control my fluttering nerves...itu chota sa bhi chalega...

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