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Posted: 11 years ago
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My doorbell rang at five past five.I was about to jump off the couch to open the door when I saw mom doing the same.
"Hello Mrs.Shekhawat"Amaira greeted politely.
"Hello Sweetheart. . .You are Amaira I suppose. . .Come On In."Mom said smiling.
"Yeah. . .Thats me"Amaira replied entering inside.
"Sam your friend is here. . .Both of you talk. . .I will get some hot chocolates for you in the meantime."Mom said leaving both of us alone.
"Wow. . .Your home is so cool Sam.I like the setting."Amaira said making her eyes travel from one end of the hall to other.
"Thanks."I replied happily.
Mom brought us hot chocolates and we talked another fifteen minutes randomly before leaving for park.
We both walked down the distance between my home and the park.It was Springtime.Cherry trees were standing with pride on either side of the road.It felt like last year's snowfall was yet to come off these trees.It looked beautiful.
"These trees are beautiful. . .Aren't they?"I asked Amaira still admiring the beauty of cherry trees.
"I like Bluebells more. . .But the official people cut it down last year.It used to be there"Amaira pointed out to the deserted field behind.
"I really loved sitting under those trees"Amaira's face fell as she talked about it.
"It Okay Amaira. . .We tend to lose most of the things which we love"I said as a matter of fact.I loved my Grandma a lot. . .One night suddenly after some pain in her heart she was shifted to hospital and was kept inside a room full of machines and medicines and I don't know what happened but she never opened her eyes after that.I loved my friends a lot but then I had to leave them too.
I looked at Amaira. . .She somehow understood what I meant and nodded her head in affirmative saying "You are right"
We reached the park ten minutes late.Aman and Joanna were already there.
"Damn!Finally you both are here.Its us who are in a relationship and you guys are coming late. . .What a scene I must say"Aman said
"We thought of givng both of you some Private Romance Time"I winked at Aman and Amaira chuckled.
"Sam,Shut Up"Joanna interwined for turning her red with embarrasement.
"Sam You are coming for admission?"Aman asked enthusiastically.
"Yeah. . .I am so in for this."I replied truly.
Guitar has always managed to keep me fascinated towards music.I don't think there is anyone in my family who is not associated with performing arts in anyway.My grandpa played cello like no master on this earth can.My mother was a dancer and she specialized in Ballet.My father still plays piano.He is like really good.Sometimes I feel He should have taken it up as his profession.So basically its in my genes.
We played in the park for sometime.It was crazy to run around the whole field catching and falling on each other.I didn't have this much fun in like weeks. . .We sat on the grass tired.
"That was so much fun"Aman said wiping off the sweat off his forhead with his handkerchief.It was getting dark and we had to leave for the music school for admission so Aman kissed Joanna before parting and I waved Amaira and Joanna leaving with Aman.
"You love her?"I asked Aman while walking.
"I guess so"Aman replied with a twinkle in his eyes.
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We reached the the music school.It was fairly a tall building with big Iron gates.We entered the building. . .There was a large entrance hall. . .The music flowed in the building from different classes.
"Wow . . .This place is so alive."Aman said amazed.
"True. . .The feeling is amazing"I said sitting on the large sofa.
Soon the receptionist told us that Mr.Shriek who was apparently the teacher of Guitar classes was ready to meet us.We entered his cabin.
Mr.Shriek was tiny man with noodles like hairs. . .He wore a white check shirt and black pants which he kept adjusting every now and then.His glasses kept falling on his nose and everytime he adjusted it back on his eyes his nose twitched.
"Hello young boys. . .What made both of you come here?"Mr.Shriek addressed us.His eye sockets searched for a grown up figure behind us. . .Probably our parents.
Aman read his eyes and answered for him "We have come alone here. . .We want to learn Guitar"
"Okay. . .Generally parents come so Its kind of new to me to talk business to two thirteen year olds."Mr.Shriek said laughing which sounded more like whining to me.
We talked about joining the school and Mr.Shriek agreed though he persuaded us to bring our parents.
"Do we look like kids?"Aman nearly shouted in my ears kicking off the empty coke can to the other end of the road.
"Dude,Trust me I feel these people are retarted in this matter"I said equally irritated.Aman seemed to calm down a bit.I think even he agress to me.
I reached home and slumped on the couch lazily besides Dad.He was busy watching weather news.I tried to involve myself in the same too but except for the thing that the news reader looked more like a hanger in his suit nothing could keep my interest on.Suddenly I realized I had to call my Old school friends,Arya and Jason so I ran upto my room and arranged a conference call.
It felt so great talking to them.They miss me a lot and I miss them too.I told them about my new house,new school and new friends.They were happy that I had started to adjust here and asked me to come over there during summer vacation.I would consider the proposal if Dad agrees to send me to summer camp there.Hopefully he will.
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I was deciding on what to watch between Sherlock:The Last Vow and Harry Potter:The Chamber of Secrets when Amaira called on my landline.
"Hello"Her soft shrill voice came from the other end.
"HI!Wassup?"
"Nothing!Just wanted to ask if you got the admission in the music school?"
"Oh Yeah!Kind Of!"I replied sitting on the chair.
"Kind of????"
"Actually Mr.Shriek wants to meet mine and Aman's parents before giving final approval.Even though we both cannot understand why"I replied as a matter of fact.
""Ohk!So you are taking them with you?"Amaira asked.
"Yeah!Dad will be going with me tomorrow after school"
"That's fantastic. . . .I am waiting to listen some pieces from you"Amaira said excitedly.
"Oh even I am dying to play for you"I joked and she laughed.
Her laugh really fills me with a different kind of energy everytime I listen to it.I like her.



Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Harry Potter, Sherlock Holmes, Basket Ball,Guitar.. Music...
Dude, Chitra, What do you expect me to do?
Scream, shout, yell... or die out of amusement.

This is like an entire package of my favorites pulled in for one single gift wrapping..

The feeling of being a newbie.. well I have experienced it many a times.. but then it settles down.. However finding friends around can be a difficult task.. especially as good as Sam did.. but then I loved the way the four of them are.. I mean look at them.. No hear them.. They seem so cute.. So full of lives.. and still they are completely a bunch of innocent chaps...

Though with Sam wanting to pull off the mustache of that Professor.. and the other few things that he did mention.. tried to speak otherwise.. Yet, I would vouch for innocence since he has managed to stick to the words his mother had warned him for..

I am finding Amaira and Sam really cute.. can I expect something there? *twinkling, hopeful eyes*

I am liking it.. It seems fun.. and mostly.. too much excitement over the teeny weeny love spices. :P

Though I know it's gonna be cute.. But I am expecting more of Cuteness than anything out of this...

Plus this teens.. grown up chaps.. no need to have adults behind them.. well that sort of sticks much to the reality.

Great job! Chitra.
Edited by -shenz- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
finally an update tat i was expecting
from such a long tym
i m loving tis four frns thing
tis update had more like thr full on masti waley interactions
i loved thr teasing 😆
frns are like tis crazy ...
chitra u hav done an exceptional work again
wit tis update
i can proudly say u hav topuched sumthing new
wit such a innovative style of presentation
do update soon 🤗

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
oho chitra...
awesome yr..

sam-amaira...I m loving it..

these frnds are just too good yr..

teasing...playing.. everything...

update soon
thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update chitra
awww they r so cute
I just love all of them
Sam n amaira they r sweet he likes her hmmm
update soon n happy diwali
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Update! :D
Res for now.
Chitra, i did notice the change and it really suits this story..
-unreserved-

Haha.. :D
I must say VERY cute update! 😆
I love these teens..reminds me of the time when i was 13 (2 years back? yeah. :P)
Sam and Amaira are cute..and Sam likes her. *smirks*
How cool na?
Your writing style here is commendable. The way you have brought down your matured way of writing to an innocent and sweet point of view of a teen is wow.
i would love to read more. :)

Cheers
Nishi. :)
Edited by Nishi.Kss - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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heyya mona
as promised dat i'll give u ma comment today
evn though its nyt day isnt ended ryt

a very cute update
sam was ryt sometym v have to let go
we can not hold on to things
somethings are bound to change
change dat is only constant in life
enough of ma philosophy
loved the bond amira and sam shared
liked aman and johana too
the bunch of cute kids
playing togehter and thinking dat dey are grown up
its not their fault either
the entire chp was sweet simple and very nyc ti read
do update soon

love
shini

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