PrAja OS: Man mast magan bass tera naam dohraaye (PART 2 UPADTED Pg 8)

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

awesome beautiful update

sweet romance loved it

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kamu_zainaddict

@kamu_zainaddict

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Celu 🤗

Yes i am gonna thrpow tomatoes chappals on you. Not for This part but itna intezaar karwaane ke liye 😡😈

Wat a beautiful Story you have poytrated.

The best part pratap trying to catch ajab but he fails and thje second when ajab tells ye khusi ke aansu hai and then pratap hug her again from back 🤣

Keep it up with your good work jaana ❤️

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-Magnanimous-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

OMGG it was such a romantic one! Majnu Pratap was bang on 😎
Celuuu thank you for writing this..i could feel the emotions 🤪
he could have easily catched her but i loved how you mentioned that he wanted to Ajabdeh having fun..Awww 😳
love them so much ❤️
awesome shot!! 👏

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Krupali

@Krupali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

sorry for supppeeerrr late cmmnt!! 😛

omg..! omg..! omggg!!.. how cute was thatt!! 😳

Cel.. love u jaana! 🤗 u r such an amazing writer...

God! I jst don't want to come out of this!! 😳 now how I'm suppose to read for my tomorrow's paper!! 😛

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Aru

@Aru_A

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

mil gaya! mil gaya! finally mil gaya...

i was searching so desperately for this DDLJ OS..

yes..DDLJ...this OS strongly reminds me of DDLJ...i mean, i wudnt be surprised at all agar mahal ke doosre bhaag ke aangar ki jagah sarson ke khet aa gaye...i can so strongly relate this super amazing work with that film...

the mehendi scene...i was blushing so furiously...i was like...'where shud i hide my face?' it was so gripping...amazing...

Phool is phool...i can say nothing...

Pratap is desperate...i can again say nothing...

those bangles...haaayyyee...awww...

that beautiful sunset...hayyyee Celu...dil le gayi,...

catch me if u can...DDLF...idk why...

PS- I saw..u...i saw You in this story...i quite clear reflection of u...i like it... :)

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CallmeCel

@CallmeCel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Aru_A
mil gaya! mil gaya! finally mil gaya...
i was searching so desperately for this DDLJ OS..
yes..DDLJ...this OS strongly reminds me of DDLJ...i mean, i wudnt be surprised at all agar mahal ke doosre bhaag ke aangar ki jagah sarson ke khet aa gaye...i can so strongly relate this super amazing work with that film...
the mehendi scene...i was blushing so furiously...i was like...'where shud i hide my face?' it was so gripping...amazing...
Phool is phool...i can say nothing...
Pratap is desperate...i can again say nothing...
those bangles...haaayyyee...awww...
that beautiful sunset...hayyyee Celu...dil le gayi,...
catch me if u can...DDLF...idk why...
PS- I saw..u...i saw You in this story...i quite clear reflection of u...i like it... :)

Thank you so much Aru!!!!!! Bada waala thank you!
You know now that you've said it reminds you of DDLJ, it is really now making me remember the DDJ=LJ moments, we can relate it actually.
To tell you the truth, me too was blushin, when re reading my work. Agar aisa kuch hota toh it would be just so beautiful.
BTW Aru, tere OS ka kya hua? Jab main inactive ho jaungi, tab post karegi??

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Aru

@Aru_A

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: AsYa_Celana

Thank you so much Aru!!!!!! Bada waala thank you!
You know now that you've said it reminds you of DDLJ, it is really now making me remember the DDLJ moments, we can relate it actually.
To tell you the truth, me too was blushin, when re reading my work. Agar aisa kuch hota toh it would be just so beautiful.
BTW Aru, tere OS ka kya hua? Jab main inactive ho jaungi, tab post karegi??

maine mana kiya tha na...no thank u...yahan pe bada vala de rahi ho...

i so remember the first time i read this...

itna super amazing tha ye to...

matlab bas...

lets let the cv's do there creativity...hamari yaha chal rahi hai...

maina apna OS...aapke liya update kar diya...

n uske saath...apna SS bhi...update kar diya...double treat...i even pm'd...