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BlueEyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#951

@Kiran : Thank you so much for all the lovely things you've said 🤗 I am so glad that you enjoyed reading the updates.

I can't make Arnav perfect in all my stories, that would be unfair, wouldn't it?

Yes, Khushi takes time to get over Shyam because he was her first love. She had planned her life with him. But she does get over him. You'll see how strong Khushi is in the latter chapters.

Things change, people change. 😉

Thank youu once again! :)

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luvbug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#952

interesting... im enjoying this story!

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Janay Mulligan

@janaykm52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#953

Hi Manjari!
Once again I am just so amazed by your ability to realistically portray these characters with their thoughts and dialog. It's especially fascinating because you are so young and I wonder how you've accumulated the life experience to so beautifully describe this budding relationship. I have a question...what is a tender? I have never heard that term in a business sense. It is some kind of loan or merger or something?

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Janay Mulligan

@janaykm52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#954

Manjari, your characterizations are fantastic!!!! These seem like real people, not people in a story.

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Janay Mulligan

@janaykm52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#955

Ummm, too much passion? No, not enough! 😉 But, yes, given your age, quite understandable. Would have loved a little more description but that's just because I'm older maybe. Still, the emotion was beautiful. :)

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#956

Hi, thank you so much for all the kind words of appreciation and encouragement.

A tender is sort of a merger where two international companies join hand for a particular project. That's what I meant.

... and about the emotions and intensity of the update, can you please tell me which chapter is it that you're talking about. Just so that I could improve :) Thank you so much for your comments, they are very valuable!

Waiting to read more of them!