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Hi everyone...
Just an idea popped up in my head...
"ARSHI ANTHANKSHARI FICTION"
You know what Anthakshari is? right?
For those who dont know i will tell u...
it is a game where one sings a song and the next person sings a song starting with a letter which is the last letter of the song sung previously...
In the same type, Lets have some ff...
I have opened a new thread for discussion and to post comments on this AF...
Please leave your comments there...
Link is HERE
How to play:
I will post four lines... next person who will post should "RES" and then,he/she have to edit the post and write the continuation of the lines which was posted before his/her. Each person has to post minimum four lines and maximum ten lines of the update. There should be no comments and only the story.
So, the rules are:
1. It should contain only arshi and ipk characters and not any other serial though u can include imaginary characters...
2. When you r posting, you should first "RES" and then edit in the post to post your update...
3. NO comments should be posted, only the update should be posted...
4. If u want to post any comment, then u have to be a participant and post the next part along with ur comment...
5. A person can not post continuously, he/she can post at least after one other person posted after his/her post...
6. A person once did RES, have to unres within four hours.
I decided to continue the story few more pages.

Let's Start with the AF...
How many of ur excited?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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"Arnav ji..." he heard Khushi voice.

"Khushi... sweet heart... please... everything will be fine. Please stay with me. I can't live without you Khushi... Please stay awake... Khushi... Khushi..." he patted her cheeks to make her awake "

Khushi opened her eyes, while touching his cheeks she said "I Love you Arnav ji... and I'm sorry for..." she closed her eyes leaving her sentence incomplete.

"KHUSHIII..." He shouted and said to Aman "Aman... fast..."


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I tried, but don't know how is it. And this is really a wonderful idea. I liked it... Hope it will be a successful idea.

I wish you all the best dear...

~~Sri

Edited by sankadevi_lg - 11 years ago
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"Call the damn, doctor!" Arnav shouted. His life stuck in Khushi's unconscious state.

Aman nodded and typed the emergency number...

No Arnav, wouldn't have afford to loose her, no not at any cost, until any help didn't come, Arnav made every effort to revive Khushi!

"Khushi, please open your eyes, for me, please!" he cried. His tears showing his helplessness.

Arnav's every plea went unheard. Khushi's limp body was in his arms and beside being so powerful he couldn't do anything to make his wife perfectly fine! Blood oozed mercilessly out of Khushi's body.

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PS A GREAT IDEA DEAR FRIEND!
Edited by NidhiAS.Raizada - 11 years ago
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The ASR, who once believed that anything can be brought with his money, now realised to be otherwise... He never knew Standing outside the hospital room will make him this scary... He saw himself in the same scene many times... All those times , he was confident and already know what to do next... But today, he was feeling hollow... He dont know what he have do next... there will be no director now to tell him to do this next... Because this is nt any soap or film he is doing...
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Is it more than six lines? I dnt knw because am using my mob...
I would like to thanks Sankadevi_lg my first participant and Nidhi.As.Raizada for accepting my request and participating in this... And friends pls do participate
Edited by Angellic_doll - 11 years ago
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His wife, his life was in danger, and for that he was going to do anything...what was the use of the so called technology if they were not going to save his wife, his wife had done nothing wrong, a pure soul she had always been...she loved everyone and put everyone else before than herself. Nothing should happen to her, nothing...Even if for the first time for his love, he had to bow his head in front of God, whom he thought never existed. That god had to make his wife live because she always kept faith in him...

Edited by NidhiAS.Raizada - 11 years ago
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He went and bowed for the first time in front of the almighty whom his wife believe... 'I dont know how to pray to u... All i know only one thing, that i cant live without her.. Pls pls save her',cried arnav infront of the figure which he saw as a decorated stone... He saw doctors and nurses running in and out of the room, he rushed to them and asked one doctor, 'doctor, is she fine?' 'see mr.raizada, we are doing our duty pls dont disturb us.' The doctor again went inside the room...
Edited by Angellic_doll - 11 years ago
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Arnav looked helplessly at the closed door and turned to God one more time.

"Please save her... She believes in you. I believe in her believe. Please save her" he prayed silently. His tears are never stopping, His heart never came to normal pace, His mind is not in a state to think anything other than Khushi. When he turn the head he saw Aman talking with someone in phone. he immediately went and snatched the phone and shouted

"I want no media here, I repeat NO MEDIA OR ANY OTHER HERE. Just keep everything outside and ask Jatin to bring his security here. I want this total hospital in his control. I don't trust anyone and I don't want to take any risk, understand?" he ordered



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We should thank you Angellic _doll, for this wonderful Idea. I loved this... It's really interesting...
Edited by sankadevi_lg - 11 years ago
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In another part of the city, a man was sitting in his three bedroom flat watching the news which is repeated infinite times...
Why won't the news channel repeat the news which shoots up their TRPs? The news of The Great ASR being attacked but saved by an Unknown Lady..
'The Hearthrob ASR was attacked by mysterious person and saved by a young beautiful lady who out of no where came and received the bullet meant for ASR.
It is a well known that ASR won the BEST ACTOR AWARD after his Comeback in the industry.
After receiving his award he confessed his love for a lady named Khushi, when he was attacked by a mysterious person when a lady saved him...'
The man shut the TV and called his assistant...
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Sri thank u so much dear... Did I give a twist and spoil ur Idea?
If so am sry...
Edited by Angellic_doll - 11 years ago
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Sitting outside the OT Arnav's thoughts went back to his first meet with Khushi. And when he was thinking about it a Doctor came out of the OT and informed Arnav that they took the bullet out of Khushi's body but they cannot say anything until she regains conscious.

Hearing that Arnav lost his temper and started yelling at the doctors that is when he heard his Di call him.



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Sorry this is the first I have attempted to write something dont be mad

Edited by Srilathalolla - 11 years ago

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