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-Carrie-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#451

Errr...About your note. Its your story & you are its creator. You know what's best for your baby😆 But why do you sound so upset? I just scanned what other commentators had to say but I see only glowing reviews 😉 Just go on, Girl!

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laila

@laila1994

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Posted: 11 years ago

#452

Read three chaps in a go.

The story is becoming more intense with each update.

Arjun has finally come out in open.

Shaina & karan are missing. Why M I getting a feeling that Arjun has already planned something big which will happen soon.

Masa & Arjun scene was very emotional.

Arjun's loneliness was written very beautifully. It left me with an uneasy feeling.

As you know I would prefer Arjun over Shaleen anyday but I am not dissapointed at all. They way you write it made me realize Shaleen's Life is worth Sam. masa, Ayesha & Roshni's happiness then I will happily n if the cost of their smile is Arjun's existence then let it be. It is for the betterment of everyone.😃

Continue soon

Thanks for the PM😊

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kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

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kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Snehajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#455

unres...me first...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

Awesome update...

One of the most toughest creation of GOD is Brain...Its complexity is the biggest complexity in universe...If even its complexity can be half known than may be soon we will be having Blue Brain technology soon...😃😃😃

First 3 para were Awesome...👏👏👏

Dr Khan knows that there is a tough path ahead...😃😃😃

It is definitely home for some special people...😃😃😃

Sha was getting hyper on first day...but it was expected...

When Sha will get the answer how he hurted himself by his own may be than he will be understand his mental state...

Arjun always scares me.....now what he is planning to do...😕😕😕

Who is Abhay???😕😕😕

Is it the first time this name has come in this story or I have forgotten???🤪🤪🤪

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Snehajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#456

Unresed on Pg:- 67...😳😳😳

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Atisha Khan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#457

ok meri jaan...now the journey begins...

the asylum...you made it way too beautiful...for a moment i felt i cam see it...and the description is soothing...

then sha in the isolation... his mental state was also described well...his panics, anxiety, mourning to go back,plus Arjun's rage...it seemed apt...and specially the planning going on inside his mind...docs can see him and assume what he or arjun was thinking but actually they can never imagine whats going on inside that skull...hehe

finally maya found her love in the rehab,it it a gift from shaina-arjun-karan??

keep writing... and seriously,i love you.

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#458

aww shaina...help maya nd abhay...yaay hope arjun gets out soon...thnks4pm

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#459

Awwwsssmmm Updste
Loved it
Wonderfully written...
Arjun is planning to get out of the hospital...
Finally Maya found Abhay... He is in rehab...
Cont Sooon
Waiting for next part

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904129

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Posted: 11 years ago

#460

Awsumm Heli Di..😊 The introduction to Dr. Khan's life was beautifully written. Its true.. Being a Psychology student myself, I have seen that ppl dont even try to consult a psychiatrist or a psychologist cuz they think its only for mentally unstable ppl. Either they wud go for anti-depressents or sleeping pills. Rest wud go for the pathetic dhongi babas as if they wud do wonders.. So Sha is visibly upset. I too am feeling bad for him but guess this all is for his own good. Dr. Khan talked his way out wid Shaleen just waiting to catch a glimpse of Arjun. And he did cum out. And he is determined to come put of this place if not his way, then Dr. Khan's way. But in all this our Sha is suffering..!! Maya got a printed envelope which asked her to meet sum1 in Rehab... Abhay??? Thanxx fr pm di..Continuee Soonz.